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Insignia Elites

08:18:37 Em

Ally that took me almost 2 months to complete and one capture party xD hopefully you have better luck

08:18:31 Kitty

she's really pretty too, i didn't breed her but I'm defintely gonna get some good colors out of her -HEE Click-

08:10:42 Ally 💜

Capture 3 PPPs...💀

08:08:07 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy

I just kinda go for both rating and color for my WBs

Valhalla Acreage

08:06:09 Eivor

maybe later on ill try for 1/1 bravery horses that was a fun run before i gave up

Valhalla Acreage

08:04:33 Eivor

kitty she's 1/2 so she is defiantly rare

08:03:23 Kitty

yeah, but he's got good color genes if i remember correctly. and this isn't my most rarest one but she's up there -HEE Click-

Valhalla Acreage

08:01:06 Eivor

kitty im gonna say his coat is common hes 355 with his coat

07:48:18 Kitty

third times the charm.. smh -HEE Click-

07:46:57 Kitty

-HEE Click- hopefully this link works

07:45:19 Kitty

i don't know how he'll rate, but i go for colors and not 'rating' -HEE Click-

07:41:13 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy

Hopefully this guy rates pretty good
-HEE Click-

07:39:34 Spirit,pony

Jewel - okay I'll sign up

07:34:30 Anna/Jewel

Spirit- I have a roleplay going on. Sure, it's going on but sign-up is open. Here's the link.
-HEE Click-

07:33:23 Spirit,pony

Anyone want to role-playing with me Pm me I am trying to be active on here

07:32:41 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy

Just now got finished with entering my horses into shows since I keep forgetting to do that xD

07:32:36 Anna/Jewel

oh sorry

Morning Glory Farms

07:28:32 Terici/Dino/Trish

please dont hidden advertise :)

07:19:06 Anna/Jewel

Oooo I love the Ice Age movies. Especially the squirrel, Scrat. He makes me laugh a TON

Sunset River Arabian

07:18:19 Athena - AAs

That should keep me distracted for awhile. Thanks

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Insignia Elites

08:18:37 Em

Ally that took me almost 2 months to complete and one capture party xD hopefully you have better luck

08:18:31 Kitty

she's really pretty too, i didn't breed her but I'm defintely gonna get some good colors out of her -HEE Click-

08:10:42 Ally 💜

Capture 3 PPPs...💀

08:08:07 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy

I just kinda go for both rating and color for my WBs

Valhalla Acreage

08:06:09 Eivor

maybe later on ill try for 1/1 bravery horses that was a fun run before i gave up

Valhalla Acreage

08:04:33 Eivor

kitty she's 1/2 so she is defiantly rare

08:03:23 Kitty

yeah, but he's got good color genes if i remember correctly. and this isn't my most rarest one but she's up there -HEE Click-

Valhalla Acreage

08:01:06 Eivor

kitty im gonna say his coat is common hes 355 with his coat

07:48:18 Kitty

third times the charm.. smh -HEE Click-

07:46:57 Kitty

-HEE Click- hopefully this link works

07:45:19 Kitty

i don't know how he'll rate, but i go for colors and not 'rating' -HEE Click-

07:41:13 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy

Hopefully this guy rates pretty good
-HEE Click-

07:39:34 Spirit,pony

Jewel - okay I'll sign up

07:34:30 Anna/Jewel

Spirit- I have a roleplay going on. Sure, it's going on but sign-up is open. Here's the link.
-HEE Click-

07:33:23 Spirit,pony

Anyone want to role-playing with me Pm me I am trying to be active on here

07:32:41 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy

Just now got finished with entering my horses into shows since I keep forgetting to do that xD

07:32:36 Anna/Jewel

oh sorry

Morning Glory Farms

07:28:32 Terici/Dino/Trish

please dont hidden advertise :)

07:19:06 Anna/Jewel

Oooo I love the Ice Age movies. Especially the squirrel, Scrat. He makes me laugh a TON

Sunset River Arabian

07:18:19 Athena - AAs

That should keep me distracted for awhile. Thanks

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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