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Hummingbird Meadows
08:42:05 Bird
@Witchy, thank you! It's hard keeping his white coat clean when he goes outside though. XD
Nightfall Dressage
08:39:47 Witchy
Bird
He's so pretty
Hummingbird Meadows
08:35:07 Bird
Finley's first time in the catio! I felt nostalgic cleaning it yesterday and thought of Oliver.
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Nightfall Dressage
08:33:03 Witchy
-HEE Click-
I rerolled and don't regret it
Nightfall Dressage
08:31:48 Witchy
Lucky
He's a little ugly looking to me lol
Luckshan Breeding
08:29:38 Call me Lucky :D
Witchy
leave it he's so pretty!
Nightfall Dressage
08:28:34 Witchy
Should I leave him like this or reroll?
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:22:27 Ally 💜
Will do!
Greenheart Stables
08:21:59 Green|Gren|Grenlin
*ally
Greenheart Stables
08:21:52 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@All
Ooh toss em my wat if its not a bother 👀 I always have room for geldings
MakeEm Fancy
08:21:23 Ally 💜
Im having to FR colts that would make good geldings because I dont have the space 🫠
Greenheart Stables
08:17:51 Green|Gren|Grenlin
-HEE Click-
I really hope I can keep him come Monday 👀
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:36 Arctic Katz
So far I am getting maps from the quests
Greenheart Stables
08:17:17 Green|Gren|Grenlin
I need to fill up my Misc gelding barn, its getting empty replacing the Show Masters 😭
MakeEm Fancy
08:16:40 Ally 💜
Same Glacier
Legacy Leagues
08:16:35 Alyssa ♡
Arctic
I haven't been paying attention to quests until recently to start seeing them
Glacier Bay Cove
08:15:58 Arctic Katz
Time to think about getting another barn, somehow
MakeEm Fancy
08:15:03 Ally 💜
Im getting all the pretty geldings with these quests
Paradise Stables
08:14:23 Ariel / Tara
Oop, sorry
MakeEm Fancy
08:13:23 Ally 💜
Ohhh
-HEE Click-

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Hummingbird Meadows
08:42:05 Bird
@Witchy, thank you! It's hard keeping his white coat clean when he goes outside though. XD
Nightfall Dressage
08:39:47 Witchy
Bird
He's so pretty
Hummingbird Meadows
08:35:07 Bird
Finley's first time in the catio! I felt nostalgic cleaning it yesterday and thought of Oliver.
-Click-
Nightfall Dressage
08:33:03 Witchy
-HEE Click-
I rerolled and don't regret it
Nightfall Dressage
08:31:48 Witchy
Lucky
He's a little ugly looking to me lol
Luckshan Breeding
08:29:38 Call me Lucky :D
Witchy
leave it he's so pretty!
Nightfall Dressage
08:28:34 Witchy
Should I leave him like this or reroll?
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:22:27 Ally 💜
Will do!
Greenheart Stables
08:21:59 Green|Gren|Grenlin
*ally
Greenheart Stables
08:21:52 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@All
Ooh toss em my wat if its not a bother 👀 I always have room for geldings
MakeEm Fancy
08:21:23 Ally 💜
Im having to FR colts that would make good geldings because I dont have the space 🫠
Greenheart Stables
08:17:51 Green|Gren|Grenlin
-HEE Click-
I really hope I can keep him come Monday 👀
Glacier Bay Cove
08:17:36 Arctic Katz
So far I am getting maps from the quests
Greenheart Stables
08:17:17 Green|Gren|Grenlin
I need to fill up my Misc gelding barn, its getting empty replacing the Show Masters 😭
MakeEm Fancy
08:16:40 Ally 💜
Same Glacier
Legacy Leagues
08:16:35 Alyssa ♡
Arctic
I haven't been paying attention to quests until recently to start seeing them
Glacier Bay Cove
08:15:58 Arctic Katz
Time to think about getting another barn, somehow
MakeEm Fancy
08:15:03 Ally 💜
Im getting all the pretty geldings with these quests
Paradise Stables
08:14:23 Ariel / Tara
Oop, sorry
MakeEm Fancy
08:13:23 Ally 💜
Ohhh
-HEE Click-

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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