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Wild_Potatoes
12:18:23 
What’s XCODE?
Milo Ridge
12:17:27 Cali’s SA
Hi WRS :)
WRS Sweet Hollow
12:15:28 
Hello
Wild_Potatoes
12:15:12 
Ohhh
Alpine Acres
12:13:54 Lily
SD = single discipline
Milo Ridge
12:13:51 Cali’s SA
SD means single discipline so he's training in XC only
Cappuccino
12:13:11 Heyy it's Capp
What do you mean? Hes trained in XC
Alpine Acres
12:13:01 Lily
Potatoes
it's because he's training SD :)
Wild_Potatoes
12:12:15 
-HEE Click-
What the heck is this training 😂
Transformers Acres
12:03:40 Geek, Eek
I just realized why my puppy freaks out when nobody is home, or when I'm not around.

She's got separation anxiety.
Marvel Eventing
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Blue stained horse glass piece went in!
Glacier Bay Cove
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Milo Ridge
12:01:01 Cali’s SA
Stained glass horse gone into raid!
Glacier Bay Cove
12:01:01 Arctic Katz
Thinking that my stable collection is made excellent progress
Rainbow
11:54:21 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Anyone up for racing? Just put a lvl 4 up :D
Ebonshire Stables
11:44:41 
I will make good money with this one what do yall think?
Imperial Warmbloods
11:44:28 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ Red
Okay, thanks, <3
Ebonshire Stables
11:44:04 
No way lol. I got a pure white out of bergi...
Milo Ridge
11:43:56 Cali’s SA
Stained Glass horse piece just went in xD
Crimson Hart Stable
11:43:17 Red
Yeah she does

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Wild_Potatoes
12:18:23 
What’s XCODE?
Milo Ridge
12:17:27 Cali’s SA
Hi WRS :)
WRS Sweet Hollow
12:15:28 
Hello
Wild_Potatoes
12:15:12 
Ohhh
Alpine Acres
12:13:54 Lily
SD = single discipline
Milo Ridge
12:13:51 Cali’s SA
SD means single discipline so he's training in XC only
Cappuccino
12:13:11 Heyy it's Capp
What do you mean? Hes trained in XC
Alpine Acres
12:13:01 Lily
Potatoes
it's because he's training SD :)
Wild_Potatoes
12:12:15 
-HEE Click-
What the heck is this training 😂
Transformers Acres
12:03:40 Geek, Eek
I just realized why my puppy freaks out when nobody is home, or when I'm not around.

She's got separation anxiety.
Marvel Eventing
12:01:44 
Blue stained horse glass piece went in!
Glacier Bay Cove
12:01:10 Arctic Katz
Making
Milo Ridge
12:01:01 Cali’s SA
Stained glass horse gone into raid!
Glacier Bay Cove
12:01:01 Arctic Katz
Thinking that my stable collection is made excellent progress
Rainbow
11:54:21 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Anyone up for racing? Just put a lvl 4 up :D
Ebonshire Stables
11:44:41 
I will make good money with this one what do yall think?
Imperial Warmbloods
11:44:28 Imp/Impie/Impy
~ Red
Okay, thanks, <3
Ebonshire Stables
11:44:04 
No way lol. I got a pure white out of bergi...
Milo Ridge
11:43:56 Cali’s SA
Stained Glass horse piece just went in xD
Crimson Hart Stable
11:43:17 Red
Yeah she does

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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