Horse Eden : critique please

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Dash and Duchess

06:06:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Myth, XD I'm just a very "squirrel!!" And gone type of person 🤣😭

Moonlight Equestrian

06:04:58 ME

@Lone Star

My bad, I'm questing on all of my accounts lol

The Lone Star

06:01:53

Man, it drives me crazy when someone comes online to bop me in jousting and then immediately logs off so I can't bop back..

Mythological

05:56:33 Crowley

DD
Mhmm excuses lol (Just kidding.)

Gemstone Stable

05:54:55 Snow❆Gem

I gotta go now. See-yas later. :)

Gemstone Stable

05:54:45 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Talent!

Dash and Duchess

05:54:41 DD | ~Squizard~

Myth, Oop xD I've been swapping between reading, arts, and hee and I got lost xD

Crestwood Eq.

05:53:47 Ivy / poison ivy

Angel

XD

Mythological

05:52:48 Crowley

Angel
Yes!! 🙌

Angels angels

05:51:27 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-YT Click-
I need this like yesterday lol

Mythological

05:51:14 Crowley

Just took a bunch of pears out of a tree with a pail lid. 💀

Gemstone Stable

05:50:06 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Its taking longer then normal, me thinks? Happened on Friday, and even if it started on a Monday, its now Thursday.

Gemstone Stable

05:49:12 Snow❆Gem

*cut and done

Mythological

05:48:50 Crowley

Autopsy is routine I believe.

Gemstone Stable

05:45:58 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Yup. Not a cut and down classic case here. His poor mom... and his still in autopsy from what his mom said on FB. O.o

I wonder if he was dead before the accident or it they want to know if he was dragged out of the burning car, if he might have lived. :(

Mythological

05:43:14 Crowley

Gem
That's a little concerning.

Crestwood Eq.

05:40:26 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

I use duolingo too!

Gemstone Stable

05:40:05 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

I hate heat. Cold I like. And yes, I completed the full Duolingo course and am going back through it a second time. :)

Crestwood Eq.

05:39:24 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

Are you learning german, too?

Crestwood Eq.

05:38:19 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

Hot as fuck

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Dash and Duchess

06:06:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Myth, XD I'm just a very "squirrel!!" And gone type of person 🤣😭

Moonlight Equestrian

06:04:58 ME

@Lone Star

My bad, I'm questing on all of my accounts lol

The Lone Star

06:01:53

Man, it drives me crazy when someone comes online to bop me in jousting and then immediately logs off so I can't bop back..

Mythological

05:56:33 Crowley

DD
Mhmm excuses lol (Just kidding.)

Gemstone Stable

05:54:55 Snow❆Gem

I gotta go now. See-yas later. :)

Gemstone Stable

05:54:45 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Talent!

Dash and Duchess

05:54:41 DD | ~Squizard~

Myth, Oop xD I've been swapping between reading, arts, and hee and I got lost xD

Crestwood Eq.

05:53:47 Ivy / poison ivy

Angel

XD

Mythological

05:52:48 Crowley

Angel
Yes!! 🙌

Angels angels

05:51:27 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-YT Click-
I need this like yesterday lol

Mythological

05:51:14 Crowley

Just took a bunch of pears out of a tree with a pail lid. 💀

Gemstone Stable

05:50:06 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Its taking longer then normal, me thinks? Happened on Friday, and even if it started on a Monday, its now Thursday.

Gemstone Stable

05:49:12 Snow❆Gem

*cut and done

Mythological

05:48:50 Crowley

Autopsy is routine I believe.

Gemstone Stable

05:45:58 Snow❆Gem

Mythological

05:43:14 Crowley

Gem
That's a little concerning.

Crestwood Eq.

05:40:26 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

I use duolingo too!

Gemstone Stable

05:40:05 Snow❆Gem

@ivy

I hate heat. Cold I like. And yes, I completed the full Duolingo course and am going back through it a second time. :)

Crestwood Eq.

05:39:24 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

Are you learning german, too?

Crestwood Eq.

05:38:19 Ivy / poison ivy

Snow

Hot as fuck

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critique please

September 18, 2018 06:50 PM

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http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

looking for critique on this piece

I use gimp

improved version :

http://oi65.tinypic.com/1zzgvtd.jpg

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:12 PM by Scarlett Breeze Farm

critique please

September 20, 2018 11:45 AM

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still looking :)

critique please

September 23, 2018 09:58 AM

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I thought this piece was SUPER cute!

If anything it's a little bit bright where you have the light flare since it's on a light coated horse. Even though it's a tad bright, you did excellent on matching the lighting to the horse.

I think the horses eyes could have a bit more detail, and the forelock with more stray strands of hair.

Beautiful piece!

critique please

September 23, 2018 01:10 PM

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i made a better version, fetching link now :)

critique please

September 23, 2018 01:25 PM

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I love them both, but I'm not a fan on the sparkly, glowing, floating balls xP

On the second one, I'd lower the brightness and contrast on the horse just a tad. The mane looks very good, love the fly away hairs however the forelock looks spiked almost. I'd bring the hairs downwards more and give them slightly more movement. The back foot looks like it cuts away to suddenly as well. Other than that, fantastic work!!! :D

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:26 PM by Trinity Equine

critique please

September 23, 2018 02:34 PM

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