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Angels angels
12:17:40 Will Buy Brindles!!
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EEE fillies, EWE combo Mares, PWW combo mare
PPP-PEE geldings
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All are of various breeds and colors will accept any offers on any just pm me!
Fluffy's Cosy Home
12:17:36 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Sweet Valley
12:17:32 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!
-HEE Click-

Breedable Adopt Shop; Cheap Prices!
Green River Stables
12:16:15 
ISO
Someone who does pallets
The Lazy Ninja
12:12:15 Jessie
EWW TB 50k
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MakeEm Fancy
11:46:16 Ally 💜
Link
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
11:46:09 Ally 💜
EEE+ Fillies and colts! Includes a WWE
Bermuda Triangle
11:37:32 Lost
Auction ends today!!

EEE-WWW Mares

-HEE Click-
Palais de Lys
11:34:56 
-HEE Click-
EWE grey filly 45k.
Palais de Lys
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EWE grey filly 45k.

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Critiques? November 21, 2017 11:01 PM


Casanova
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM


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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!




Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!


Thanks <3
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:38 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:53 PM


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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)


I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:23 PM


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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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