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Kingswood Elite
06:05:48 ghost
Thank you both!
Kingswood Elite
06:04:50 ghost
I think the round ended before my page reloaded, whoops
Alpine Acres
06:03:28 Lily/Alpine
Sure thing ghost :D
Calela Eventing
06:03:09 Cali
ghost,
I can definitely
Mightttt throw in a glass... maybe
Kingswood Elite
05:59:32 ghost
can someone enter stable raid for a quest? ^^
Alpine Acres
05:16:12 Lily/Alpine
You have to convert one of your pastures into a memorial garden <3
Mystic Stables
04:10:44 
hey! question, how do you go to your memorial garden and put horses in memory?
Nightingales Ridge
02:54:40 Issy
Hi Loonyy
Lunalovegood
02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Hey chat, How are ya’ll
Ponies heaven
01:16:07 Pera/ peral
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:21:26 pheezy
their art is gorgeous kiwi :0
Kiwi Mountains
12:13:07 Kiwi
It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta
I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!
Fantasy Horses
12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta
DD
Oh absolutely :')
Dash and Duchess
12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT
Fantasy Horses
12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta
DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P
Dash and Duchess
12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~
Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!
Fantasy Horses
12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta
DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~
Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD
Twin Flames
12:04:20 Blaze
DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

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Kingswood Elite
06:05:48 ghost
Thank you both!
Kingswood Elite
06:04:50 ghost
I think the round ended before my page reloaded, whoops
Alpine Acres
06:03:28 Lily/Alpine
Sure thing ghost :D
Calela Eventing
06:03:09 Cali
ghost,
I can definitely
Mightttt throw in a glass... maybe
Kingswood Elite
05:59:32 ghost
can someone enter stable raid for a quest? ^^
Alpine Acres
05:16:12 Lily/Alpine
You have to convert one of your pastures into a memorial garden <3
Mystic Stables
04:10:44 
hey! question, how do you go to your memorial garden and put horses in memory?
Nightingales Ridge
02:54:40 Issy
Hi Loonyy
Lunalovegood
02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Hey chat, How are ya’ll
Ponies heaven
01:16:07 Pera/ peral
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:21:26 pheezy
their art is gorgeous kiwi :0
Kiwi Mountains
12:13:07 Kiwi
It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta
I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!
Fantasy Horses
12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta
DD
Oh absolutely :')
Dash and Duchess
12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT
Fantasy Horses
12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta
DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P
Dash and Duchess
12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~
Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!
Fantasy Horses
12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta
DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~
Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD
Twin Flames
12:04:20 Blaze
DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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