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bye bluey!!
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it doesnt look like my BM entered any...
Fantasy Horses
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Entered two horses XD
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+725 profit for me lol
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Bluey
oof that's rough
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Alpine Acres
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Sorry to hear that Sting :(
hope it get's better for you!
Glacier Bay Cove
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Hopefully the rest of your week will get better, Sting
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Glacier Bay Cove
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Back to questing tomorrow
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Thank you
at Fantasy
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Kitty
Oh and she's stunning too! Congrats!
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river
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When the filly goes all up in week 4!!!! awsome!!
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Fantasy Horses
12:46:38 Fantasy | Fanta
bye bluey!!
Blue Diamond
12:46:18 Bluey
Goodnight, everyone!
Narran Park
12:39:14 Sting
it doesnt look like my BM entered any...
Fantasy Horses
12:32:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Entered two horses XD
Fantasy Horses
12:32:12 Fantasy | Fanta
+725 profit for me lol
Fantasy Horses
12:31:18 Fantasy | Fanta
Bluey
oof that's rough
Golden Heart
12:29:37 Gold
blue

oop
Narran Park
12:17:45 Sting
Thanks Lovelies!
Just one of those days!

These days are important i guess. Helps me appreciate the good ones.
Blue Diamond
12:16:44 Bluey
Okay.... -12000 in shows today....someone's getting sent to the glue factory....
Alpine Acres
12:15:29 Lily
Sorry to hear that Sting :(
hope it get's better for you!
Glacier Bay Cove
12:13:20 Arctic Katz
Hopefully the rest of your week will get better, Sting
Narran Park
12:10:40 Sting
Ugh. I have had such a shitty day. I'll be glad when this week is over.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:03:15 Arctic Katz
-Click- I can't stop laughing
Glacier Bay Cove
11:57:24 Arctic Katz
Super excited about them
Glacier Bay Cove
11:57:06 Arctic Katz
And working on several art pieces, including a palette or four
Glacier Bay Cove
11:56:06 Arctic Katz
Back to questing tomorrow
3S Cast n Characters
11:41:36 Kitty
Thank you
at Fantasy
Fantasy Horses
11:41:03 Fantasy | Fanta
Kitty
Oh and she's stunning too! Congrats!
KPH Equestrian
11:40:06 Rapcoon | Jester
river
<3
3S Cast n Characters
11:39:35 Kitty
When the filly goes all up in week 4!!!! awsome!!
-HEE Click-

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Proof Read July 22, 2020 04:33 PM


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I suck at writing emails and letters. I get all my thoughts all over the place and tend just not make any sense. If you guys don't mind maybe just having a quick read to see if this is actually useable? My vet asked for some suggestions about topics she could talk about.

Thank you so much for asking me about what I would be interested in learning. I am sorry for such a delayed response but I did come up with some topics that I would love to learn about.


I always hear about navicular but I am unsure what it really is. I would be interested in learning what navicular is and how a horse can develop navicular. I would also be interested in learning how to treat and rehab navicular. I would love to know more about abscesses. How do horses get abscesses, how do identify abscesses, and how to treat an abscess.I would also love to know what some common problems that different breeds have with their feet.


Nutrition is something that I would love to know more about. How does a horse's diet contribute to their health and performance? What is laminitas, how can it be prevented, and what connection does it have to their diet? Ulcers is something I would also be interested in learning more about. I never really heard about ulcers until recently and would love to find more about it.


Another topic could possibly be horse growth and joints. I am very interested in how horses grow and what rate. Is there any benefit or harm to joints to riding a young horse. How does growth differ from breed to breed. Why do some horses get arthritis at younger ages than others? I would also be interested in learning about how foals grow and straighten out. What should be concerning when a foal is straightening out, and at what age should a foal have straightened out?


Lastly I find dental very interesting. An example could be how and over bite and under bite can affect a horse. What are wolf teeth and how do they affect a horse. What are some common problems that different breeds have with teeth? I would also love to know how to assess when a horse would need their teeth done. For example, what are common signs?


Thanks so much for doing these talks. The breeding seminar over winter helped a whole bunch and answered so many questions.


Edited at July 22, 2020 04:35 PM by Ranch Lands Training
Proof Read July 22, 2020 04:35 PM


FirstLightFarms

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This is such a neat topic! The only things I can really see is that I would put 'navicular' and 'abscesses' into two different paragraphs, so it's easier to read. There are also a few sentences where you ask a question but end it with a . instead of a ?
Otherwise, very concisely written!
Proof Read July 22, 2020 04:37 PM


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FirstLightFarms said:
This is such a neat topic! The only things I can really see is that I would put 'navicular' and 'abscesses' into two different paragraphs, so it's easier to read. There are also a few sentences where you ask a question but end it with a . instead of a ?
Otherwise, very concisely written!


Mmmk thank you so much. Nobody in my fmaily are really writers so I usally avoid writing big emails or letters with at least a few people reading it.
Proof Read July 23, 2020 12:29 PM


EmeraldHillsFarm
 
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This is definitely useable. In your last paragraph though, I would say "dental problems" instead of just "dental". You also misspelled "laminitis" in your second paragraph. There are also a couple spots where you leave out a "the" or use "an" when you should use "a", but those are just little typos.
Proof Read July 25, 2020 09:22 PM


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I think that looks super good. The only thing, but this is just me. You specified navicular, why not all unsoundnesses or a little bit more specific, unsoundnesses that occur in the front legs or the hind legs. If it's only navicular your interested in learning about, then your set.

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