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Got some nice 2yr colts for color breeding! They start at 3k go up 200, they WILL be insta freed if not bought
Port Royal Equines
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Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

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Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

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Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


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Sweet Valley
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Cloverleaf Castle
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New ABLB boy - Straws and LC available! -HEE Click-
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Critique July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png
Wondering what I could do next time to improve.
I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?
Critique July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.
Critique July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png
Critique July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png


Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image
Critique July 31, 2018 04:25 AM


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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they don’t taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)
Critique July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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