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wrong account, whoops
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06:32:24

2 premade stable sets available!
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Blueberry Ledge

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WWW-EEW
PON and short SH auctions.
Lots of color.

06:06:12

Help bring the Pretty Pony Pageant back!
-HEE Click-

05:39:13 Potato

1500$ per horses

05:34:37 Potato

-HEE Click-
Releasing all these colored babies that are high rated

Secretariat Ranch

05:24:35 SR

Whispering Wood Barn

05:13:41 ~Whispy~

193 Sevned WWW TBLB
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193 WWW TB Mares
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My fellow color breeders, I am looking for new blood :) ISO:
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04:45:02 pheezy

Tao

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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