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Ally, one up in my shop!

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Anybody have a gold showing token? Its for a quest! Willing to pay

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Epona

11:15:45 Mill$sen

2 yr mare , Buckskin Pearl Brindle

-HEE Click-

Taking offers

Circle Star RIDs

11:15:25 Granny C

I just got a silver one

11:14:57 Lily

Ally, one up in my shop!

10:52:21 Ally 💜

Anybody have a gold showing token? Its for a quest! Willing to pay

10:48:07

Taking offers on all of these!
-HEE Click-

10:47:28 Maggie

WC SD dressage Mares for breeding, training tracked to wk 15
-HEE Click-

Port Royal Equines

10:36:22 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!

-HEE Click-
Lvl 7+ geldings for 4k!

-HEE Click-
Draft horse set at auction! Ending soon. Please consider bidding. :)

Cat Paw

10:23:06 Freddy

-HEE Click-
Stallions and colts uo for auction! Ends soon

Circle Star RIDs

10:21:49 Granny C

Up for stud - 7 EEE RID stallions to choose from.
-HEE Click-

Barbury Estates

09:47:49 Amelia

ISO an upgrade!!! Pm me please I have ebs ready to go!

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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