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Hummingbird Meadows
09:47:24 Bird
The last online date I went on the guy spent the whole time talking about himself and tree rings. 😬
MakeEm Fancy
09:44:10 Ally 💜
Oh yes much appreciated 🤣 @Rainy
Rainbow
09:42:49 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
Oh lord. Yeah, at least he waved all his red flags right in the beginning lol
MakeEm Fancy
09:42:07 Ally 💜
But at least he aired everything out and I dodged a bullet lmao
MakeEm Fancy
09:41:23 Ally 💜
The last date I went on all he talked about was his toxic ex and the kid they had together like dude we are on a date not a drama show XD @rainy
Sunni
09:41:07 Sunni bunny
Cove, but I need a Pearl PPP for the quest.
I am already $25'000 in now.
I even bought some mares just to complete the quest.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:40:12 Arctic Katz
At least he has pearl, Sunni
Rainbow
09:39:41 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
That's basically what happened to me, too.
Sunni
09:37:29 Sunni bunny
Am gonna cuss,
-HEE Click-
You just need to be a PPP...
MakeEm Fancy
09:37:25 Ally 💜
I went out with a few duds before I met my husband. I promptly gave up after the last date and bam my husband started messaging me
Hummingbird Meadows
09:36:15 Bird
My current issue is guys don't even post photos of themselves. They post group photos or photos where their face is obscured.
Rainbow
09:35:41 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
A toxic wasteland, I imagine
Glacier Bay Cove
09:35:34 Arctic Katz
Feel that, Hummer
Hummingbird Meadows
09:35:07 Bird
I really want to be in a relationship with a guy. Been feeling like I will never get married since most people my age already have kids.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:34:52 Arctic Katz
Never had any luck with online dating
Sunni
09:34:30 Sunni bunny
Am gonna scream, why you skip the Pearl!!
Bad foal, I just wanna complete my quest.
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
09:34:27 Ally 💜
It was rough back when I was doing online dating I cant imagine what its like now
Rainbow
09:32:16 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Bird
Sounds about right :(
Hummingbird Meadows
09:31:12 Bird
Trying online dating again and I am 2 days in and I am already discouraged. XD
Sunni
09:20:12 Sunni bunny
Failed quest.... Successfully??
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Hummingbird Meadows
09:47:24 Bird
The last online date I went on the guy spent the whole time talking about himself and tree rings. 😬
MakeEm Fancy
09:44:10 Ally 💜
Oh yes much appreciated 🤣 @Rainy
Rainbow
09:42:49 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
Oh lord. Yeah, at least he waved all his red flags right in the beginning lol
MakeEm Fancy
09:42:07 Ally 💜
But at least he aired everything out and I dodged a bullet lmao
MakeEm Fancy
09:41:23 Ally 💜
The last date I went on all he talked about was his toxic ex and the kid they had together like dude we are on a date not a drama show XD @rainy
Sunni
09:41:07 Sunni bunny
Cove, but I need a Pearl PPP for the quest.
I am already $25'000 in now.
I even bought some mares just to complete the quest.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:40:12 Arctic Katz
At least he has pearl, Sunni
Rainbow
09:39:41 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
That's basically what happened to me, too.
Sunni
09:37:29 Sunni bunny
Am gonna cuss,
-HEE Click-
You just need to be a PPP...
MakeEm Fancy
09:37:25 Ally 💜
I went out with a few duds before I met my husband. I promptly gave up after the last date and bam my husband started messaging me
Hummingbird Meadows
09:36:15 Bird
My current issue is guys don't even post photos of themselves. They post group photos or photos where their face is obscured.
Rainbow
09:35:41 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Ally
A toxic wasteland, I imagine
Glacier Bay Cove
09:35:34 Arctic Katz
Feel that, Hummer
Hummingbird Meadows
09:35:07 Bird
I really want to be in a relationship with a guy. Been feeling like I will never get married since most people my age already have kids.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:34:52 Arctic Katz
Never had any luck with online dating
Sunni
09:34:30 Sunni bunny
Am gonna scream, why you skip the Pearl!!
Bad foal, I just wanna complete my quest.
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
09:34:27 Ally 💜
It was rough back when I was doing online dating I cant imagine what its like now
Rainbow
09:32:16 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Bird
Sounds about right :(
Hummingbird Meadows
09:31:12 Bird
Trying online dating again and I am 2 days in and I am already discouraged. XD
Sunni
09:20:12 Sunni bunny
Failed quest.... Successfully??
-HEE Click-

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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