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Glacier Bay Cove
05:21:40 Arctic Katz
Their art pieces are 🤤🤤🤤🤤 beautiful and popular
Glacier Bay Cove
05:18:43 Arctic Katz
Wonder if my art will ever be as beautiful as the art made by Mana,, SCF, and other major HEE artists
Wisteria Run Farm
05:09:08 Solar/Ria
alright, I'll try that, thank you! she's been a little bit of a pain with breeding so far lol
Angels angels
05:07:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah deffinitly. Because his str is so low also it will help boost that along with the iffy hrt
Wisteria Run Farm
05:06:48 Solar/Ria
I was thinking dressage medallion, but you think a cross country one would be better?
Angels angels
05:04:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel
On*
Angels angels
05:03:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I would be iffy ok the hrt if it were me
Wisteria Run Farm
05:02:33 Solar/Ria
does this match look decent?
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
04:49:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nope not on disney
Sunni
04:47:58 Sunni bunny
I'll be back later
Prismatic
04:47:25 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Speaking of Hulu, I've been bingeing Once Upon a Time. I can't stop watching it! (I've seen a lot of it before, but years and years ago)
Angels angels
04:45:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Its on the hulu live tv thing but not regular hulu. It may be on disney though I will have to check
Sunni
04:45:17 Sunni bunny
Angel I feel that broke part, also awww, is it not on Hulu?
Angels angels
04:43:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Dang I cant watch the bobs burgers movie Sunni
Angels angels
04:38:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was able to get up lol. I am too broke for takeout xD
Sunni
04:31:45 Sunni bunny
Angel you are stuck now, best to order take out.
Make sure you order a sacrifice for the cat to XD
Angels angels
04:12:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I know DX lol
Minerva
04:11:09 Min
Rules state dinner must wait then Angel- it's illegal to move a sleeping cat for any reason
Rainbow
04:10:53 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Angel
Guess you're getting takeout tonight lol
Angels angels
04:06:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I need to get up and make dinner but there is a cat sleeping on me..

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Glacier Bay Cove
05:21:40 Arctic Katz
Their art pieces are 🤤🤤🤤🤤 beautiful and popular
Glacier Bay Cove
05:18:43 Arctic Katz
Wonder if my art will ever be as beautiful as the art made by Mana,, SCF, and other major HEE artists
Wisteria Run Farm
05:09:08 Solar/Ria
alright, I'll try that, thank you! she's been a little bit of a pain with breeding so far lol
Angels angels
05:07:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah deffinitly. Because his str is so low also it will help boost that along with the iffy hrt
Wisteria Run Farm
05:06:48 Solar/Ria
I was thinking dressage medallion, but you think a cross country one would be better?
Angels angels
05:04:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel
On*
Angels angels
05:03:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I would be iffy ok the hrt if it were me
Wisteria Run Farm
05:02:33 Solar/Ria
does this match look decent?
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
04:49:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Nope not on disney
Sunni
04:47:58 Sunni bunny
I'll be back later
Prismatic
04:47:25 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Speaking of Hulu, I've been bingeing Once Upon a Time. I can't stop watching it! (I've seen a lot of it before, but years and years ago)
Angels angels
04:45:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Its on the hulu live tv thing but not regular hulu. It may be on disney though I will have to check
Sunni
04:45:17 Sunni bunny
Angel I feel that broke part, also awww, is it not on Hulu?
Angels angels
04:43:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Dang I cant watch the bobs burgers movie Sunni
Angels angels
04:38:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I was able to get up lol. I am too broke for takeout xD
Sunni
04:31:45 Sunni bunny
Angel you are stuck now, best to order take out.
Make sure you order a sacrifice for the cat to XD
Angels angels
04:12:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I know DX lol
Minerva
04:11:09 Min
Rules state dinner must wait then Angel- it's illegal to move a sleeping cat for any reason
Rainbow
04:10:53 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
Angel
Guess you're getting takeout tonight lol
Angels angels
04:06:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I need to get up and make dinner but there is a cat sleeping on me..

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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
Posts: 4325
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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