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Angels angels
12:04:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
How old is you kitten? The cat one is safe for 12 weeks and older. It is on chewy and petco :)
*Stable of Jewels*
12:04:06 Jewel🍄
Hellloooo there!!
MakeEm Fancy
12:02:52 Ally 💜
Yes @Angels
Crestwood Eq.
12:02:17 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

ok. i'd prefer no download though
Kingswood Elite
12:01:58 ghost
Ivy
I just use Ibis Paint but I'm still fairly new to manips myself
Angels angels
11:58:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ally
which one the TropiClean?
Crestwood Eq.
11:56:00 Ivy / poison ivy
liike making them
Crestwood Eq.
11:55:53 Ivy / poison ivy
what free programs do yall recommend for manips?
Silver Melody Acres
11:55:51 Solar - KNNs
I wonder if I should just use some embryos on my other accounts instead of doing more breeding with everyone next month, I've been running through all my ebs and then some XD
MakeEm Fancy
11:55:11 Ally 💜
Oh also Angels that flea stuff you recommended is amazing! I bought the dog one and still looking for the kitten one but it had helped so much
Alpine Acres
11:54:44 Lily/Alpine
Angel
much to look forward to xD
I'm hoping to snag a Vassilis straw for one of my big matches, so very excited for that
Angels angels
11:54:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Yeah it will only get worse from here! XD
Alpine Acres
11:53:34 Lily/Alpine
Angel
oof...good luck lol
I'm still a pretty new stable though, so it's my most expensive one yet
MakeEm Fancy
11:53:04 Ally 💜
Give me sabino everything XD

My RO is going to be around 4 million
Angels angels
11:52:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Mine is going to be over 4 mil..
Alpine Acres
11:52:25 Lily/Alpine
Looking to be around 1mil, Angel xD
Angels angels
11:51:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Lol how expensive?
Alpine Acres
11:50:29 Lily/Alpine
This is going to be an expensive RO >.<
Angels angels
11:50:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I do love splash, and I like some sabinos visually but sabino just takes over too easy so I hate it lol
MakeEm Fancy
11:49:04 Ally 💜
I personally like it lol but I also like sabino and splash white so XD

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Angels angels
12:04:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
How old is you kitten? The cat one is safe for 12 weeks and older. It is on chewy and petco :)
*Stable of Jewels*
12:04:06 Jewel🍄
Hellloooo there!!
MakeEm Fancy
12:02:52 Ally 💜
Yes @Angels
Crestwood Eq.
12:02:17 Ivy / poison ivy
ghost

ok. i'd prefer no download though
Kingswood Elite
12:01:58 ghost
Ivy
I just use Ibis Paint but I'm still fairly new to manips myself
Angels angels
11:58:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ally
which one the TropiClean?
Crestwood Eq.
11:56:00 Ivy / poison ivy
liike making them
Crestwood Eq.
11:55:53 Ivy / poison ivy
what free programs do yall recommend for manips?
Silver Melody Acres
11:55:51 Solar - KNNs
I wonder if I should just use some embryos on my other accounts instead of doing more breeding with everyone next month, I've been running through all my ebs and then some XD
MakeEm Fancy
11:55:11 Ally 💜
Oh also Angels that flea stuff you recommended is amazing! I bought the dog one and still looking for the kitten one but it had helped so much
Alpine Acres
11:54:44 Lily/Alpine
Angel
much to look forward to xD
I'm hoping to snag a Vassilis straw for one of my big matches, so very excited for that
Angels angels
11:54:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Yeah it will only get worse from here! XD
Alpine Acres
11:53:34 Lily/Alpine
Angel
oof...good luck lol
I'm still a pretty new stable though, so it's my most expensive one yet
MakeEm Fancy
11:53:04 Ally 💜
Give me sabino everything XD

My RO is going to be around 4 million
Angels angels
11:52:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Mine is going to be over 4 mil..
Alpine Acres
11:52:25 Lily/Alpine
Looking to be around 1mil, Angel xD
Angels angels
11:51:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lily
Lol how expensive?
Alpine Acres
11:50:29 Lily/Alpine
This is going to be an expensive RO >.<
Angels angels
11:50:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I do love splash, and I like some sabinos visually but sabino just takes over too easy so I hate it lol
MakeEm Fancy
11:49:04 Ally 💜
I personally like it lol but I also like sabino and splash white so XD

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
Posts: 1348
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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 927
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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