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Glacier Bay Cove
08:48:08 Arctic Katz
Now I have the foals to rate, all of my wild captures are done
Glacier Bay Cove
08:47:06 Arctic Katz
Lily sitting on the porch swing
-Click-
Sunni
08:46:56 Sunni bunny
See you gem, wish you luck on the job hunt.
Gem Queens Estate
08:46:00 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

Ah, OK. We don't have any of those by here. And I hop i can just work at fast food for a few months then go to somewhere better. >.<

I gotta go now. See-yas!
Irish Fields
08:45:09 Fawn
Totally forgot her dam is Prlprl.
-HEE Click-
Sunni
08:44:34 Sunni bunny
Cove that's awesome, if I remember right you had to rate a lot of wild captures.
Sunni
08:44:14 Sunni bunny
Gem I used to work in fast food and hated it.
I worked for cicis for about 2016-2021.
I didn't mind it since I was mostly cooking and could play music via my JBL.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:42:35 Arctic Katz
And the ratings are going well, Sunni
Gem Queens Estate
08:42:23 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

XD I'm still waiting to get a part time job. I'm really thinking I have to get a job at a fast food. >.< Like McDs or something. Ack!
Glacier Bay Cove
08:42:10 Arctic Katz
I have one day left
Sunni
08:41:00 Sunni bunny
Cove, got you.
I all ways end up buying 3 months.
Mostly because I find to cheaper in the long run.
How's the ratings been going?
Irish Fields
08:40:54 Fawn
Glacier, you can go to your account page to see how many days you have left
Glacier Bay Cove
08:39:11 Arctic Katz
I think it's a one month
Sunni
08:38:18 Sunni bunny
Cove, do you have a 1 month or 3 month?
Glacier Bay Cove
08:37:45 Arctic Katz
Mass breed approvals before my premium runs out, and then I will focus on saving up for another one
Sunni
08:37:19 Sunni bunny
It's okay gem, haha.
Sometimes I vanish mid conversation.
We get one more check after this paying us out for 5 weeks.
And I am thankful for it.
Gemstone Stable
08:34:34 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

Sorry I took so long, I had to step away from the computer...

Ah good! XD And I see. >.>
Sunni
08:21:15 Sunni bunny
My anxiety is easier now that I've seen they paid me.
It all ways stress me out because they have made me go a whole month without a check before.
Sunni
08:19:48 Sunni bunny
Gem I did, luckily we blindly picked the right one XD.
I am checking my work day from my old job.
They owe me one more check.
Snow Stable
08:19:28 Snow❆Gem
Quest Level 15
Capture
Capture 8 triple Subpar horses.

Completed: 0/8
Reward: 5,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits 1Sexed Straw - Filly

F' that! lol

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Glacier Bay Cove
08:48:08 Arctic Katz
Now I have the foals to rate, all of my wild captures are done
Glacier Bay Cove
08:47:06 Arctic Katz
Lily sitting on the porch swing
-Click-
Sunni
08:46:56 Sunni bunny
See you gem, wish you luck on the job hunt.
Gem Queens Estate
08:46:00 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

Ah, OK. We don't have any of those by here. And I hop i can just work at fast food for a few months then go to somewhere better. >.<

I gotta go now. See-yas!
Irish Fields
08:45:09 Fawn
Totally forgot her dam is Prlprl.
-HEE Click-
Sunni
08:44:34 Sunni bunny
Cove that's awesome, if I remember right you had to rate a lot of wild captures.
Sunni
08:44:14 Sunni bunny
Gem I used to work in fast food and hated it.
I worked for cicis for about 2016-2021.
I didn't mind it since I was mostly cooking and could play music via my JBL.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:42:35 Arctic Katz
And the ratings are going well, Sunni
Gem Queens Estate
08:42:23 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

XD I'm still waiting to get a part time job. I'm really thinking I have to get a job at a fast food. >.< Like McDs or something. Ack!
Glacier Bay Cove
08:42:10 Arctic Katz
I have one day left
Sunni
08:41:00 Sunni bunny
Cove, got you.
I all ways end up buying 3 months.
Mostly because I find to cheaper in the long run.
How's the ratings been going?
Irish Fields
08:40:54 Fawn
Glacier, you can go to your account page to see how many days you have left
Glacier Bay Cove
08:39:11 Arctic Katz
I think it's a one month
Sunni
08:38:18 Sunni bunny
Cove, do you have a 1 month or 3 month?
Glacier Bay Cove
08:37:45 Arctic Katz
Mass breed approvals before my premium runs out, and then I will focus on saving up for another one
Sunni
08:37:19 Sunni bunny
It's okay gem, haha.
Sometimes I vanish mid conversation.
We get one more check after this paying us out for 5 weeks.
And I am thankful for it.
Gemstone Stable
08:34:34 Snow❆Gem
@sunni

Sorry I took so long, I had to step away from the computer...

Ah good! XD And I see. >.>
Sunni
08:21:15 Sunni bunny
My anxiety is easier now that I've seen they paid me.
It all ways stress me out because they have made me go a whole month without a check before.
Sunni
08:19:48 Sunni bunny
Gem I did, luckily we blindly picked the right one XD.
I am checking my work day from my old job.
They owe me one more check.
Snow Stable
08:19:28 Snow❆Gem
Quest Level 15
Capture
Capture 8 triple Subpar horses.

Completed: 0/8
Reward: 5,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits 1Sexed Straw - Filly

F' that! lol

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Help? May 24, 2024 11:59 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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After almost 6 months of drowning under the load of school, work, and animals I finally have had some time to pick up the ole art pen. I'm SO rusty and I feel like these look odd or are missing something but I cannot put my finger on what I did wrong. I would love to get some tips or ideas about what looks funky.
Thanks loads~
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This one was a rider removal.. it was not fun
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Edited at May 25, 2024 08:40 AM by Pegasus Lane
Help? May 25, 2024 12:09 AM


Caprina Springs
 
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i think the lack of a solid outline in some areas of the horse for a highlight is what youre missing. especially the orange one. theres no reflected backlight from the bright sun. i like where you were going with the soft light around the silhouette of the horse but it seems to just cover it. what setting do you have that specific layer with the soft light?
EDIT
i also just noticed this; the bg upstages the horse because of how sharp the image is, try a light blur on them

Edited at May 25, 2024 12:11 AM by Caprina Springs
Help? May 25, 2024 08:43 AM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Caprina Springs said:
i think the lack of a solid outline in some areas of the horse for a highlight is what youre missing. especially the orange one. theres no reflected backlight from the bright sun. i like where you were going with the soft light around the silhouette of the horse but it seems to just cover it. what setting do you have that specific layer with the soft light?
EDIT
i also just noticed this; the bg upstages the horse because of how sharp the image is, try a light blur on them


Omg thank you!!
Images have been updated on the first post if anyone else has criticism :) Links are clicky so you can really see all the details ❤
Help? May 25, 2024 08:00 PM


Angels angels
 
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The only issues I see are very small details.
The legs on the black horse look a bit undefined and almost swollen, and its feet are a bit more blury than the rest of the horse. It also is missing some definition in some areas, such as the back legs kind of blend into a black mass. You could try using some very light white to define the shape a bit more.
The orange one looks very good, except for the front leg and foot is a bit sharp and blocky. It also could use some of the highlights for definition as well. Also the face/muzzle looks a bit big for the horse's face, and the ears are a bit blury and could use some definition.
I hope this isn't to harsh. Like I said just being very nit picky if thats what you are looking for! lol :) They look amazing though!

Edited at May 25, 2024 08:01 PM by Angels angels
Help? May 25, 2024 08:10 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Angels angels said:
The only issues I see are very small details.
The legs on the black horse look a bit undefined and almost swollen, and its feet are a bit more blury than the rest of the horse. It also is missing some definition in some areas, such as the back legs kind of blend into a black mass. You could try using some very light white to define the shape a bit more.
The orange one looks very good, except for the front leg and foot is a bit sharp and blocky. It also could use some of the highlights for definition as well. Also the face/muzzle looks a bit big for the horse's face, and the ears are a bit blury and could use some definition.
I hope this isn't to harsh. Like I said just being very nit picky if thats what you are looking for! lol :) They look amazing though!


That's exactly what I was looking for, thank you! <3
Help? May 26, 2024 03:41 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Alrighty, here are the current pieces. Thank you both for the advice! If there's any nit-picking to be done about anything else please don't be afraid to offend me :) It's quite hard to do lol
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Help? May 30, 2024 08:09 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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Wow! they look awesome with those little edits! your art is stunning!
Help? May 30, 2024 08:09 PM


Dash and Duchess
 
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double post erg

Edited at May 30, 2024 08:09 PM by Dash and Duchess

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