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Angels angels

11:15:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Sunni
Yeah but they aren't horrible. Can cause bad pain, muscle spasms and sometimes nausea.

ArcticLights

11:15:16 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I visited Canada in 2003 or 2004, it was very nice

Sunni

11:14:38 Sunni bunny

Ceci the only way my mom would move is if I could get her a lot of land XD

Sunni

11:13:58 Sunni bunny

Angel black widows are very dangerous if I remember right.
About as bad as a brown recluse.

Angels angels

11:13:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Sunni
Same. I want to move to Canada but only if my whole family comes with me lol

ArcticLights

11:13:52 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Take your family with you when you move :)

ArcticLights

11:13:15 Ceci / (Call me) AL

30C = 86F

Sunni

11:13:14 Sunni bunny

Oh! My husband wants to move there XD
I love the cold but I don't wanna move that far away from family.

Angels angels

11:12:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel

We have black widows everywhere here. Not deadly but can still do some damage

ArcticLights

11:12:37 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Norway. Cold winters but 30C in good summers

Sunni

11:12:06 Sunni bunny

Ceci am guessing you live somewhere cold?

Crestwood Eq.

11:11:52 Ivy / poison ivy

Kk! TTCRB

Sunni

11:11:32 Sunni bunny

Ivy that's pretty cool, I'll have to check it out.
I am organizing the new foal's in my barn right now.

ArcticLights

11:11:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL

If internet is correct there is no dangerous spiders here

Crestwood Eq.

11:10:41 Ivy / poison ivy

Sunni\

I made a club

Sunni

11:10:32 Sunni bunny

Hi ivy,

Crestwood Eq.

11:10:19 Ivy / poison ivy

Sunnnnniiii

Sunni

11:09:46 Sunni bunny

They have been doing a really good job so far XD
Expect for the one Loki ate.

Sunni

11:09:13 Sunni bunny

Ah, i release over 20ish jumping spiders in my house last week.
My husband is terrified of spiders but they can hunt brown recluses.

Angels angels

11:07:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I love jumping spiders they are so cute

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Angels angels

11:15:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Sunni
Yeah but they aren't horrible. Can cause bad pain, muscle spasms and sometimes nausea.

ArcticLights

11:15:16 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I visited Canada in 2003 or 2004, it was very nice

Sunni

11:14:38 Sunni bunny

Ceci the only way my mom would move is if I could get her a lot of land XD

Sunni

11:13:58 Sunni bunny

Angel black widows are very dangerous if I remember right.
About as bad as a brown recluse.

Angels angels

11:13:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Sunni
Same. I want to move to Canada but only if my whole family comes with me lol

ArcticLights

11:13:52 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Take your family with you when you move :)

ArcticLights

11:13:15 Ceci / (Call me) AL

30C = 86F

Sunni

11:13:14 Sunni bunny

Oh! My husband wants to move there XD
I love the cold but I don't wanna move that far away from family.

Angels angels

11:12:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel

We have black widows everywhere here. Not deadly but can still do some damage

ArcticLights

11:12:37 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Norway. Cold winters but 30C in good summers

Sunni

11:12:06 Sunni bunny

Ceci am guessing you live somewhere cold?

Crestwood Eq.

11:11:52 Ivy / poison ivy

Kk! TTCRB

Sunni

11:11:32 Sunni bunny

Ivy that's pretty cool, I'll have to check it out.
I am organizing the new foal's in my barn right now.

ArcticLights

11:11:03 Ceci / (Call me) AL

If internet is correct there is no dangerous spiders here

Crestwood Eq.

11:10:41 Ivy / poison ivy

Sunni\

I made a club

Sunni

11:10:32 Sunni bunny

Hi ivy,

Crestwood Eq.

11:10:19 Ivy / poison ivy

Sunnnnniiii

Sunni

11:09:46 Sunni bunny

They have been doing a really good job so far XD
Expect for the one Loki ate.

Sunni

11:09:13 Sunni bunny

Ah, i release over 20ish jumping spiders in my house last week.
My husband is terrified of spiders but they can hunt brown recluses.

Angels angels

11:07:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I love jumping spiders they are so cute

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

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July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

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July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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#206024
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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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#206055
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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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#206133
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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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