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Sweet Valley

07:51:18 Anna/Jewel

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Can anyone help?

Minerva

07:50:58 Min

Yay, congratulations!!

Maco Stables

07:49:41 Maco

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My first ever WWW horse and it's a filly!
I'm screaming :D

Angels angels

07:46:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Trish
Who is excited about it lol

ArcticLights

07:44:21 Ceci / (Call me) AL

My only apricots will be my X I think

Morning Glory Farms

07:43:21 Terici/Dino/Trish

*yawn* morning y'all 🫠 I am not excited about being up this early

Pon Brats

07:40:57

Yeeh and EWW for her first (unmatched) foal, isn't too bad!

Cappuccino

07:40:30 Heyy it's Capp

Dayum Tosk she's got some sweet genes lol

NightClan

07:38:54 Night

How did all my Rb matches get like...none of it lol
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Snow Stable

07:38:01 Snow❆Gem

@angel

Aww! XD *little boops*

Breadcrumbs

07:37:54

She's gonna be the start to my apricot wbs. I can feel it xD

-HEE Click-

Angels angels

07:37:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel

PONs hate me Breadcrumbs lol

Breadcrumbs

07:36:07

Tbs just straight up hate me xD

Angels angels

07:34:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I breed crested geckos and gargoyle geckos :p
All my gargoyles come out brown. Some have a tiny bit of red or orange but the crested geckos come out super pretty
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The first two darker ones are the babies that just hatched yesterday and the lighter two were the first two babie I had

ArcticLights

07:34:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Tosk is welcome to steal TBs from me sd well

Rubygem

07:32:52 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

goota go (:

Tamarack Mountain

07:31:34 Opal

unbelievable -HEE Click-

Rubygem

07:31:29 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

angel what are you talking about?

Angels angels

07:27:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Breeding crested geckos is so much more fun than my gargoyles lol there is so much variation in the babies you don't know what you will get. These babies are soooo different than my first two

Breadcrumbs

07:25:11

My svenned KNN colt ended up SH. =_=

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Sweet Valley

07:51:18 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-
Can anyone help?

Minerva

07:50:58 Min

Yay, congratulations!!

Maco Stables

07:49:41 Maco

-HEE Click-
My first ever WWW horse and it's a filly!
I'm screaming :D

Angels angels

07:46:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Trish
Who is excited about it lol

ArcticLights

07:44:21 Ceci / (Call me) AL

My only apricots will be my X I think

Morning Glory Farms

07:43:21 Terici/Dino/Trish

*yawn* morning y'all 🫠 I am not excited about being up this early

Pon Brats

07:40:57

Yeeh and EWW for her first (unmatched) foal, isn't too bad!

Cappuccino

07:40:30 Heyy it's Capp

Dayum Tosk she's got some sweet genes lol

NightClan

07:38:54 Night

How did all my Rb matches get like...none of it lol
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Snow Stable

07:38:01 Snow❆Gem

@angel

Aww! XD *little boops*

Breadcrumbs

07:37:54

She's gonna be the start to my apricot wbs. I can feel it xD

-HEE Click-

Angels angels

07:37:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel

PONs hate me Breadcrumbs lol

Breadcrumbs

07:36:07

Tbs just straight up hate me xD

Angels angels

07:34:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

ArcticLights

07:34:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Tosk is welcome to steal TBs from me sd well

Rubygem

07:32:52 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

goota go (:

Tamarack Mountain

07:31:34 Opal

unbelievable -HEE Click-

Rubygem

07:31:29 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D

angel what are you talking about?

Angels angels

07:27:42 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Breeding crested geckos is so much more fun than my gargoyles lol there is so much variation in the babies you don't know what you will get. These babies are soooo different than my first two

Breadcrumbs

07:25:11

My svenned KNN colt ended up SH. =_=

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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