Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Year: 193   Season: Fall   
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Sweet Valley
12:59:39 Anna/Jewel
Well I still wanna try 2 play. We r not sure what 2 do 4 lunch. Planned on burgers, not enough meat so..?
Glacier Bay Cove
12:58:12 Arctic Katz
I usually join the 8pm trivia games
ArcticLights
12:57:13 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Sure, not a problem
Sweet Valley
12:57:05 Anna/Jewel
4 minutes till Trivia. Not sure if able to play tho. Lunch might be ready! :(
Sweet Valley
12:55:04 Anna/Jewel
Not an issue. Ceci posted a bit ago and I figured when ever it ends in chat then post another link so people can find it
Insignia Elites
12:53:53 Em
Sweet thanks!
Sweet Valley
12:53:43 Anna/Jewel
-Click-

trivia link in case u dont have it
ArcticLights
12:53:25 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Trivia starts in 7 minutes
Sweet Valley
12:53:25 Anna/Jewel
1 pm gametime
Insignia Elites
12:52:58 Em
Is trivia happening now?
Alpine Acres
12:51:52 Lily/Alpine
Usually wilds only go up week 4, week 3 if they're very strong
Fantasy Horses
12:51:49 Fantasy | Fanta
Having a trait 2 up on week 4 is never seen!
LBKL
12:51:42 
Oh good to know
Santana Rising
12:51:39 San
She is not trained in all disciplines so we can't really say what her weaknesses are. But if any of my WW or WWW boys strike your fancy I'll gladly send you a straw
Fantasy Horses
12:51:02 Fantasy | Fanta
LBKL
Maybe more normal for a wild, but I've never seen it before o_o
Alpine Acres
12:50:57 Lily/Alpine
LBKL
it's not - she must be super strong!
LBKL
12:50:24 
She did, is that not normal?
Fantasy Horses
12:49:46 Fantasy | Fanta
LBKL
Uh, did she go up week 2??
Sweet Valley
12:49:07 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

Perhaps this sir can help! I have no AQH but I have this WEE
Sweet Valley
12:48:22 Anna/Jewel
Pretty, LBKL

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Sweet Valley
12:59:39 Anna/Jewel
Well I still wanna try 2 play. We r not sure what 2 do 4 lunch. Planned on burgers, not enough meat so..?
Glacier Bay Cove
12:58:12 Arctic Katz
I usually join the 8pm trivia games
ArcticLights
12:57:13 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Sure, not a problem
Sweet Valley
12:57:05 Anna/Jewel
4 minutes till Trivia. Not sure if able to play tho. Lunch might be ready! :(
Sweet Valley
12:55:04 Anna/Jewel
Not an issue. Ceci posted a bit ago and I figured when ever it ends in chat then post another link so people can find it
Insignia Elites
12:53:53 Em
Sweet thanks!
Sweet Valley
12:53:43 Anna/Jewel
-Click-

trivia link in case u dont have it
ArcticLights
12:53:25 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Trivia starts in 7 minutes
Sweet Valley
12:53:25 Anna/Jewel
1 pm gametime
Insignia Elites
12:52:58 Em
Is trivia happening now?
Alpine Acres
12:51:52 Lily/Alpine
Usually wilds only go up week 4, week 3 if they're very strong
Fantasy Horses
12:51:49 Fantasy | Fanta
Having a trait 2 up on week 4 is never seen!
LBKL
12:51:42 
Oh good to know
Santana Rising
12:51:39 San
She is not trained in all disciplines so we can't really say what her weaknesses are. But if any of my WW or WWW boys strike your fancy I'll gladly send you a straw
Fantasy Horses
12:51:02 Fantasy | Fanta
LBKL
Maybe more normal for a wild, but I've never seen it before o_o
Alpine Acres
12:50:57 Lily/Alpine
LBKL
it's not - she must be super strong!
LBKL
12:50:24 
She did, is that not normal?
Fantasy Horses
12:49:46 Fantasy | Fanta
LBKL
Uh, did she go up week 2??
Sweet Valley
12:49:07 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

Perhaps this sir can help! I have no AQH but I have this WEE
Sweet Valley
12:48:22 Anna/Jewel
Pretty, LBKL

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Critique Please August 20, 2019 08:00 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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New ones
https://i.postimg.cc/HxjZHKVz/DE56-D190-08-A0-459-B-977-F-E5-D27-C1-C0-C66.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/3R6LwBGT/231-C5429-2621-4-CED-AC53-E77-B38177-F15.jpg

Edited at August 20, 2019 08:00 PM by Raindrop Ridge
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:17 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Even more new ones
https://i.postimg.cc/sxx0vNS6/5411-CEE4-683-F-417-A-9-A35-598054-E49822.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/P5YVpZpj/726-A30-D0-E880-4-A35-B648-BE557-EB5077-C.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/zv4p3Xqv/B1-DC0-AD1-E38-B-40-C4-BDB8-2-D4-F5-BD602-EC.jpg
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:35 PM


Aussie Wattles
 
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They look a lot better!
They do still look kinda like a blob on the ground though. Thing about where the lights coming from and the shape of the horse. Looking at RL photos as well as others art can help give you an idea of where shadows should be. Make sure your edges are nice and soft. The hardness and the darkness/lightness of a shadow will vary between pieces.
Overall it just takes a lot of practice.

What device do you use for your art?
Critique Please September 1, 2019 02:02 AM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Hey Raindrop!

My best critique would be to work on realistic shadowing, like others have suggested. Your shadows are off to a great start! They are just too dark and too shapeless at the moment.

These DA tutorials might help!

https://www.deviantart.com/lady-entice/art/Shadow-tutorial-186362600

https://www.deviantart.com/xxsanuk/art/shadow-tutorial-for-GIMP-173291036


I would also make sure that your subject and background are well matched (size-wise). The second horse (the bay on the wood pier) stands out the most for me. He is pretty tiny, compared to the wood planks. :)

Otherwise, you do a pretty good job of finding stock with decent matching lighting/coloration to your backgrounds. Keep practicing! So many things come from just trying new things. <3 You are on your way.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 10:05 AM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Thanks Trigg and Aussie, IÂ’ll try that next time, I think itÂ’ll really help.
Aussie, I use my iPad, but sometimes my Computer.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 07:06 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Any pricing help would be nice too.

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