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Nightingales Ridge
06:47:27 Issy
Yo blue eye horse irl are inteeeense haha
Nightingales Ridge
06:45:21 Issy
Oo Flash nice. Hiding the brindle haha
winteria
06:44:44 
Ugh, I'd totally only breed for color if they made any money
Sleepwalker Centre
06:41:54 Walker
Flash,
oo those spots!
Sleepwalker Centre
06:41:33 Walker
Winteria,
ty!!!
Flash a light acres
06:41:11 
Goodness me flashy boy!

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winteria
06:41:01 
oh my goodness, she is soo pretty walker >0<
Sleepwalker Centre
06:39:33 Walker
-HEE Click- horse? more like bee
Glacier Bay Cove
06:36:36 Arctic Katz
Will I get in trouble if I make Avis for my side accounts
Embervale Acres
06:01:03 Solar Phoenix
I do love silver black lol
Embervale Acres
06:00:27 Solar Phoenix
Oh, and this cool little lady too! XD
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Gem Queens Estate
05:58:04 Snow❆Gem
@emmas

:D Same!

@solar

Oh! With silver black too! :D
Piper Lane Farm
05:57:56 
snow-
i've seen solid champagne horses with blue eyes, but they have creme and pearl. (In HEE, of course.)
Sleepwalker Centre
05:57:46 Walker
ohh what a cutie, Solar!
Embervale Acres
05:56:36 Solar Phoenix
Talking about blue eyes lol just bred this pretty little quest baby
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Emmas Eventers
05:56:05 
yeah love blue eyes on here but not so much for RL Horses lol
Gem Queens Estate
05:54:17 Snow❆Gem
@ravenwood

OK!

@jester

Neat. Although honestly most blue animals eyes give me a slight creeps feeling. lol
The Old Gods
05:54:02 Void Malign
Sabino doesn't cause blue eyes
KPH Equestrian
05:51:06 Rapcoon | Jester
snow
I've seen blue eyed horses IRL with splash or Sabino, yeah ^^

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Sinister Ranch
07:17:13 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
-HEE Click-

1 of 1
Nightingales Ridge
06:47:27 Issy
Yo blue eye horse irl are inteeeense haha
Nightingales Ridge
06:45:21 Issy
Oo Flash nice. Hiding the brindle haha
winteria
06:44:44 
Ugh, I'd totally only breed for color if they made any money
Sleepwalker Centre
06:41:54 Walker
Flash,
oo those spots!
Sleepwalker Centre
06:41:33 Walker
Winteria,
ty!!!
Flash a light acres
06:41:11 
Goodness me flashy boy!

-HEE Click-
winteria
06:41:01 
oh my goodness, she is soo pretty walker >0<
Sleepwalker Centre
06:39:33 Walker
-HEE Click- horse? more like bee
Glacier Bay Cove
06:36:36 Arctic Katz
Will I get in trouble if I make Avis for my side accounts
Embervale Acres
06:01:03 Solar Phoenix
I do love silver black lol
Embervale Acres
06:00:27 Solar Phoenix
Oh, and this cool little lady too! XD
-HEE Click-
Gem Queens Estate
05:58:04 Snow❆Gem
@emmas

:D Same!

@solar

Oh! With silver black too! :D
Piper Lane Farm
05:57:56 
snow-
i've seen solid champagne horses with blue eyes, but they have creme and pearl. (In HEE, of course.)
Sleepwalker Centre
05:57:46 Walker
ohh what a cutie, Solar!
Embervale Acres
05:56:36 Solar Phoenix
Talking about blue eyes lol just bred this pretty little quest baby
-HEE Click-
Emmas Eventers
05:56:05 
yeah love blue eyes on here but not so much for RL Horses lol
Gem Queens Estate
05:54:17 Snow❆Gem
@ravenwood

OK!

@jester

Neat. Although honestly most blue animals eyes give me a slight creeps feeling. lol
The Old Gods
05:54:02 Void Malign
Sabino doesn't cause blue eyes
KPH Equestrian
05:51:06 Rapcoon | Jester
snow
I've seen blue eyed horses IRL with splash or Sabino, yeah ^^

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
Posts: 1348
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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 927
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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