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Utmostroxy
06:31:53 Cassie
Very Pretty WB Filly
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Amethyst Ranch
05:52:54 Echo <3
WWE AA filly for sale
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Golden Sunset art auction
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Fluffy's Cosy Home
05:00:51 Fluffy
I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
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Secretariat Ranch
04:57:40 SR
PEE 1/4 Shiny ISH stallion EE SplSpl 5k

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Exo-K
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EEP Shiny Filly RnRn ToTo

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Exo-M
04:49:30 EM
EEE ISH Shiny Colt ZZ 5k

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Pegasus Lane
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Flight Of Fear rumble entries!
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Also ISO upgrade
MakeEm Fancy
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EEE+ fillies and colts auction. Includes a WWE
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Gem
01:33:16 Tier 1 Artist
Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
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W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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