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Sunni
10:55:37 Sunni bunny
She was technically a stray that made herself at home.
Sunni
10:55:01 Sunni bunny
Fern, she caught a ton of copper head's.
She kept out house snake free, and it's okay.
She was an old girl,
She ended up with a bad infection and the antibiotics just wasn't enough.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:52:23 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
The snake thing is funny lol if she were where i lived she'd be bringin cottonmouths xD and sorry for your loss :(
Sunni
10:52:06 Sunni bunny
ZZ I ain't gonna complain I got cinnamon rolls and a free cookie so~
Am gonna be sugar out later.
ZequineZ
10:51:03 ZEZ - ZZ
Ahh I see, nice! Shame about the lack of brownie though
Sunni
10:50:47 Sunni bunny
Fern Tetris was a calico, she was a funny cat.
She likes sleeping in my jacket, sadly she passed away.
She would bring my mom snakes haha, my mom couldn't stand it.
Sunni
10:49:33 Sunni bunny
ZZ that's what I got, I ordered it through door dash to pick it up.
Because it was door dash they couldn't call me.
I ordered the big brownie but they where out.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:48:26 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Okay i seriously love that name! Cats eat and leave no crumbs
ZequineZ
10:47:54 ZEZ - ZZ
Pizza Hut in Australia does these massive chocolate chips cookie pies, they are so good and so addictive
Sunni
10:47:31 Sunni bunny
Remind me of my cat named Tetris.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:47:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Tetenus is a cute name, could call it terestrial extra toppings (tet) for short :D
Sunni
10:46:22 Sunni bunny
I got them from uhhh what's it called...
Pizza hut, I was to lazy to cook.
And pizza sounded good.
They gave me a free cookie too haha.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:45:42 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Sunni - ooh love those
- i named it tetenus
Sport Pony Island
10:45:11 Solstice × Win
Sunni, same, i'm eating them right now..
Sunni
10:44:23 Sunni bunny
Fern haha, sometimes it's so good it hurts.
I don't much like pumpkin, but I love cinnamon.
I got cinnamon rolls.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:44:08 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Time to name my groom something cutesy
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:43:08 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Sunni - awoop welp it was worth it (maybe)
Cozmic Elite
10:43:07 
I love pumpkin pie
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:42:23 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Dior - thats wonderful! Was it one from sams them things are big
Sunni
10:41:39 Sunni bunny
Fern they could have been contaminated.
Been a lot of stuff with salmonella...

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Sunni
10:55:37 Sunni bunny
She was technically a stray that made herself at home.
Sunni
10:55:01 Sunni bunny
Fern, she caught a ton of copper head's.
She kept out house snake free, and it's okay.
She was an old girl,
She ended up with a bad infection and the antibiotics just wasn't enough.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:52:23 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
The snake thing is funny lol if she were where i lived she'd be bringin cottonmouths xD and sorry for your loss :(
Sunni
10:52:06 Sunni bunny
ZZ I ain't gonna complain I got cinnamon rolls and a free cookie so~
Am gonna be sugar out later.
ZequineZ
10:51:03 ZEZ - ZZ
Ahh I see, nice! Shame about the lack of brownie though
Sunni
10:50:47 Sunni bunny
Fern Tetris was a calico, she was a funny cat.
She likes sleeping in my jacket, sadly she passed away.
She would bring my mom snakes haha, my mom couldn't stand it.
Sunni
10:49:33 Sunni bunny
ZZ that's what I got, I ordered it through door dash to pick it up.
Because it was door dash they couldn't call me.
I ordered the big brownie but they where out.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:48:26 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Okay i seriously love that name! Cats eat and leave no crumbs
ZequineZ
10:47:54 ZEZ - ZZ
Pizza Hut in Australia does these massive chocolate chips cookie pies, they are so good and so addictive
Sunni
10:47:31 Sunni bunny
Remind me of my cat named Tetris.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:47:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Tetenus is a cute name, could call it terestrial extra toppings (tet) for short :D
Sunni
10:46:22 Sunni bunny
I got them from uhhh what's it called...
Pizza hut, I was to lazy to cook.
And pizza sounded good.
They gave me a free cookie too haha.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:45:42 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Sunni - ooh love those
- i named it tetenus
Sport Pony Island
10:45:11 Solstice × Win
Sunni, same, i'm eating them right now..
Sunni
10:44:23 Sunni bunny
Fern haha, sometimes it's so good it hurts.
I don't much like pumpkin, but I love cinnamon.
I got cinnamon rolls.
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:44:08 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Time to name my groom something cutesy
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:43:08 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Sunni - awoop welp it was worth it (maybe)
Cozmic Elite
10:43:07 
I love pumpkin pie
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:42:23 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Dior - thats wonderful! Was it one from sams them things are big
Sunni
10:41:39 Sunni bunny
Fern they could have been contaminated.
Been a lot of stuff with salmonella...

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Art Critique c: August 7, 2024 04:45 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Hey everyone!

I am wanting to improve on my art so thoguht I would reach out to the community for some advice. I am looking for some in depth critique on anything and everything.

Some things I am currently trying to improve:
Lighting & hair ~ I also use Ibis Paint x

Feel free to pick the art apart :3 and thank you in advance <3

Here are some recent examples:


Edited at August 7, 2024 04:48 AM by Twin Flames
Art Critique c: August 13, 2024 02:53 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Another recent example :)

Art Critique c: August 17, 2024 09:32 AM


Cherry Creek Ranch
 
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I have no criticism, just came here to say these are AMAZING
Art Critique c: September 1, 2024 10:09 PM


Marigold Ridge
 
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First of all, I gotta say these are absolutely incredible!!! Your composition is on point and I love the horse in a bar!
As for advice, something that stood out to me were the horse's shadows. That sharp kind of shadow is what might happen if the horse were standing on a hard, reflective surface, not in a more nature-y landscape.
To determine where the shadows should lie, look at the surrounding bg and light sources for clues. For example, a horse standing in clear, still water would likely have a more defined shadow, possibly with part of its reflection, but the water would give it a kind of ripple affect. At other times, the shadow might not be more than a smudge, especially if there's very little light. If there is a very strong light source in the piece, the shadows would be longer and more defined, but would still have softer edges. I'd say for most of your examples, the shadow would mainly be a darkened smudge underneath the horse.
Something that might help is to see what your own shadow looks like at various times of the day and in various settings, and then apply it to your art.
Whoo! That was long, but I hope it's helpful!! Your lighting is overall very strong (especially in pieces 3 & 4 which I ADORE!!)
Do tell me if you've got other questions! You're doing awesome <333
Art Critique c: September 5, 2024 09:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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First, I wanna say that I LOVE your body prep and the way you do hair! I think the most important thing is the darker shadows under the belly.
With some of these pieces, the lighting is more(for want of a better word) distilled, so the shadows should be softer. In the first piece(blue one), there's light in the water, which would be illuminating the belly slightly. Try lowering the opacity of your deeper shadow layer a bit and let the horse's detail show through ;)
The next piece(forest one) same thing- there isn't super strong lighting coming from anywhere in prticular, so the shadows will be much softer. Again, play with the opacity of your layers.
I really like the lighting in the blue/green piece(4th one), it matches the background very well<3
The next one, in water, same thing- light reflects off of water and back onto the horse, so not only would the shadows be lighter, there would be some subtle lighting over top of them.
Next one, the bartender, the lighting is spot on! Only thing I could think of is adding a shadow under the cup on his hindquarters, and possibly a reflection on the shiny countertop.

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