Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

Crestwood Eq.

08:33:40 Ivy / poison ivy

i really is

Dash and Duchess

08:32:53 DD | ~Squizard~

Ven, lol! It is addicting 🤣 I kept seeing things about it but I figured it'd be awful, I was happily surprised with it!

Canterwood Acres

08:32:33 Canter

oh I love that movie!

Stormsong Manor

08:31:53 Ven

I put it on for my son while I was cleaning the house and accidentally got addicted

Crestwood Eq.

08:31:23 Ivy / poison ivy

Ven

it's really good lol

Dash and Duchess

08:31:00 DD | ~Squizard~

Ven, xD it seriously was a good movie lol! And the songs were amazing!

Stormsong Manor

08:29:50 Ven

My entire instagram algorithm is KPDH

Niallator Acres

08:29:13 Ivy - Niallator side

yay instagram! you got your act together

MakeEm Fancy

08:27:25 Ally 💜

I have all show quests.

Embervale Acres

08:19:04 Solar Phoenix

Might keep you as a pretty breeder lol
-HEE Click-

Embervale Acres

08:17:25 Solar Phoenix

You could use free capture passes for the third one if you have enough

Sweet Valley

08:17:21 Anna/Jewel

I really wish accounts were able to exchange money (like side accounts) cuz my one has 50k and I need that money on this side lol...

Sweet Valley

08:14:53 Anna/Jewel

Quest Level 2
Show
Win first place in a Show Jumping show.
Reward: 2,000 Eden Bucks 3,000Store Credits 1Rowel Spurs
Quest Level 5
Gamer
Win at the mini-game Five Guesses.

Completed: 0/5
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 2,000Store Credits
Quest Level 20
Capture
Capture 25 horses.

Completed: 0/25
Reward: 10,000 Eden Bucks 12,000Store Credits

I have 3 impossible quests to do without losing money... I need to gain money, lady!

Sweet Valley

08:13:54 Anna/Jewel

Miracle Splash

Splashy Miracle

Splashing Forever

Canterwood Acres

08:12:40 Canter

-HEE Click-
name ideas?

Embervale Acres

08:11:34 Solar Phoenix

If only the quest master would give me quests for medallions on here again lol my other account got so many XD

Applin acres

08:06:58

ok thanks!

Embervale Acres

08:06:30 Solar Phoenix

Menu, Community and Games

Applin acres

08:05:31

how do i get to the Kentucky derby hats mini
game?

Sunrise Shadows

07:57:48 Syrdar = Myth XD

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Crestwood Eq.

08:33:40 Ivy / poison ivy

i really is

Dash and Duchess

08:32:53 DD | ~Squizard~

Ven, lol! It is addicting 🤣 I kept seeing things about it but I figured it'd be awful, I was happily surprised with it!

Canterwood Acres

08:32:33 Canter

oh I love that movie!

Stormsong Manor

08:31:53 Ven

I put it on for my son while I was cleaning the house and accidentally got addicted

Crestwood Eq.

08:31:23 Ivy / poison ivy

Ven

it's really good lol

Dash and Duchess

08:31:00 DD | ~Squizard~

Ven, xD it seriously was a good movie lol! And the songs were amazing!

Stormsong Manor

08:29:50 Ven

My entire instagram algorithm is KPDH

Niallator Acres

08:29:13 Ivy - Niallator side

yay instagram! you got your act together

MakeEm Fancy

08:27:25 Ally 💜

I have all show quests.

Embervale Acres

08:19:04 Solar Phoenix

Might keep you as a pretty breeder lol
-HEE Click-

Embervale Acres

08:17:25 Solar Phoenix

You could use free capture passes for the third one if you have enough

Sweet Valley

08:17:21 Anna/Jewel

I really wish accounts were able to exchange money (like side accounts) cuz my one has 50k and I need that money on this side lol...

Sweet Valley

08:14:53 Anna/Jewel

Sweet Valley

08:13:54 Anna/Jewel

Miracle Splash

Splashy Miracle

Splashing Forever

Canterwood Acres

08:12:40 Canter

-HEE Click-
name ideas?

Embervale Acres

08:11:34 Solar Phoenix

If only the quest master would give me quests for medallions on here again lol my other account got so many XD

Applin acres

08:06:58

ok thanks!

Embervale Acres

08:06:30 Solar Phoenix

Menu, Community and Games

Applin acres

08:05:31

how do i get to the Kentucky derby hats mini
game?

Sunrise Shadows

07:57:48 Syrdar = Myth XD

Oooh
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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

Constructive Criticism

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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