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WWW ISH mare for sale
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Eagles Peak
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SH Sale Barn: -HEE Click-

SH Broodmares: -HEE Click-

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Valhalla Acreage
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WWW AALB sire up for stud
MockingJay
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Looking for a 3 month upgrade! I have the ebs on hand and ready to send straight away!
Whispering Wood Barn
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Hey, Hey Color Breeders, If you happen to breed anything matching my color program ISO list, please reach out to me! I am looking for new blood to grow my lines 😊

Horse Eden : ISO: New Color Blood - Still Open! -Click-
Boulder Creek
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The Pretty Pony Pageant Needs You!!!

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Painted Dreams
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ISO a 3 month upgrade! Have the funds ON HAND and will pay top price!
Legazy Stables
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Help me test - EWE combo producer so far :)
Alpine Acres
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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! IĀ’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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