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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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07:17:19 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Sunny
Ohh nice! You'll have to show off final results and like a before/after thing too!

07:15:38 CƐ

Bird, fair enough.

07:13:45 Sun/Sunny

yessss!! It’ll be a fun project to fix up, it’s a 55 ft with a great interior kinda house boat style and a great roof deck hang out. So pumped.

Hummingbird Meadows

07:13:06 Bird

@Cozmic, probably just for advertising and to raise awareness for their bank. You also get to donate $10k to an organization of your choice.

MC Ace

07:12:31 McFossil

Nothing or gore, yep

Dash and Duchess

07:10:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Void, that is unfortunately an impeccably accurate statement 🤣

07:10:24 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Sunny Oh yay!!!

MC Ace

07:10:09 McFossil

Well ok then.

Dash and Duchess

07:09:54 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, yay!! That's so exciting, congrats!

07:09:47 CƐ

Bird,
Forgot to include context i meant why would the bank give away 10k Lol

07:09:12 Void Malign

It's always a 50/50 chance that when slapping a horse fly it'll either do nothing or explode into a mess of blood. There's no in between.

07:06:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)

07:06:07 Sun/Sunny

Ahhh just found out my bf is buying the boat we’ve been looking at today I’m so excited

07:03:57 CƐ

Bird
What. But why?
I wish you luck.

Hummingbird Meadows

07:03:46 Bird

@Glacier, it would be amazing. I'm not exaggerating when I say it would be life changing.

Glacier Bay Cove

07:02:40 Arctic Katz

Hopefully you find it, Hummer

Hummingbird Meadows

07:02:08 Bird

Well, I'm driving an hour to go treasure hunting. A bank hid a wallet with $10k and I think I know where it is.

07:01:52 Eagle

She has the same grandsire on both sides 🤣
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Nightfall Dressage

06:58:32 Witchy

Lucky
I have a few horses where their sire is also their grandsire...

06:58:09 Ally 💜

Shiny
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07:17:19 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Sunny
Ohh nice! You'll have to show off final results and like a before/after thing too!

07:15:38 CƐ

Bird, fair enough.

07:13:45 Sun/Sunny

yessss!! It’ll be a fun project to fix up, it’s a 55 ft with a great interior kinda house boat style and a great roof deck hang out. So pumped.

Hummingbird Meadows

07:13:06 Bird

@Cozmic, probably just for advertising and to raise awareness for their bank. You also get to donate $10k to an organization of your choice.

MC Ace

07:12:31 McFossil

Nothing or gore, yep

Dash and Duchess

07:10:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Void, that is unfortunately an impeccably accurate statement 🤣

07:10:24 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Sunny Oh yay!!!

MC Ace

07:10:09 McFossil

Well ok then.

Dash and Duchess

07:09:54 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, yay!! That's so exciting, congrats!

07:09:47 CƐ

Bird,
Forgot to include context i meant why would the bank give away 10k Lol

07:09:12 Void Malign

It's always a 50/50 chance that when slapping a horse fly it'll either do nothing or explode into a mess of blood. There's no in between.

07:06:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)

07:06:07 Sun/Sunny

Ahhh just found out my bf is buying the boat we’ve been looking at today I’m so excited

07:03:57 CƐ

Bird
What. But why?
I wish you luck.

Hummingbird Meadows

07:03:46 Bird

@Glacier, it would be amazing. I'm not exaggerating when I say it would be life changing.

Glacier Bay Cove

07:02:40 Arctic Katz

Hopefully you find it, Hummer

Hummingbird Meadows

07:02:08 Bird

Well, I'm driving an hour to go treasure hunting. A bank hid a wallet with $10k and I think I know where it is.

07:01:52 Eagle

She has the same grandsire on both sides 🤣
-HEE Click-

Nightfall Dressage

06:58:32 Witchy

Lucky
I have a few horses where their sire is also their grandsire...

06:58:09 Ally 💜

Shiny
-HEE Click-

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September 16, 2018 06:56 PM

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Hello all! I am looking for critique I

(And help on making my art better). Don't be scared to tell me if it's horrible, I can handle it.

Will update if I finish more pieces

First piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/CxH3Z298/Untitled18-3.jpg

Second Piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/nhvdRQkf/Untitled19.jpg

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:51 PM by Ifaga Arabians

September 16, 2018 06:58 PM

Andraste Equine

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The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

September 16, 2018 07:07 PM

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Andraste Equine said:
The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

Fixed

September 16, 2018 07:22 PM

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I think this is a great start!

It's not sloppy or hard to look at.

I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!

great job!

September 16, 2018 07:23 PM

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Sunset Equestrian said:
I think this is a great start!
It's not sloppy or hard to look at.
I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!
great job!

Thank you! I've been working on shading and highlights. This piece required it

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:25 PM by Ifaga Arabians

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