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Black Dragon Stable
06:00:56 BDS / Black / Stormy
Ok, is it just my net or is game lagging haaard?
Wolf Dancer
05:59:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tee and Mirth!
Mythological
05:55:08 Crowley
Teee
Wolf Dancer
05:53:36 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Oops forgot link lol :)
-HEE Click-
Wolf Dancer
05:53:05 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Any slim chance anyone can give some answers? :)
Tequila
05:52:22 Tee | Quila
hell yeh one of my SAs is still alive, just gotta remember the password…
Black Dragon Stable
05:49:54 BDS / Black / Stormy
(No, Flatline wasn't mine, but my homeboy goes back to him)
Black Dragon Stable
05:49:06 BDS / Black / Stormy
I just found some old lines still chilling among some of my horses... Definitely not the same quality as they used to be... but bred them back to a straw from my original homebred EEE. Results sucked...but fillies! Can try to bring that line back to life. Love the old Flatline lines.
Sweet Valley
05:43:56 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

Meadow- this is brindle :)
Glacier Bay Cove
05:36:34 Arctic Katz
Looking at my paintings, wondering how to make them look more realistic and lifelike
Gilded Roses
05:33:05 River / Brody
Meadow
No it’s just dun
Meadowdown
05:32:54 
Ahh I see, sorry for my mistake! thanks all ^^
pandemoniu_m
05:32:02 pheezy
meadow
if you're referring to the stripes on her knees those are primitive markings called "barring", they show on most duns
Morning Glory Farms
05:30:31 Terici/Dino/Trish
no if she was brindle it would say in her name
Glacier Bay Cove
05:29:34 Arctic Katz
I don't think she is a brindle
Meadowdown
05:27:46 
-HEE Click-

Oooh what a pretty little brindle she is! (she is brindle right?)
Sweet Valley
05:13:29 Anna/Jewel
Uh uh. And that quest is worth 15k lol
Crescent Estate
05:12:15 River / Crescent
Anna, do you have any skips?
Sweet Valley
05:10:48 Anna/Jewel
oooofff "Capture a horse with a W in dressage" ayayayayay Ughhhh how in the NAME of common sense am I supposed to do THAT
Fantasy Horses
05:06:10 Fantasy | Fanta
Enter your horse into a Specialty Clinic to boost their training.
Completed: 1/20

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Black Dragon Stable
06:00:56 BDS / Black / Stormy
Ok, is it just my net or is game lagging haaard?
Wolf Dancer
05:59:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tee and Mirth!
Mythological
05:55:08 Crowley
Teee
Wolf Dancer
05:53:36 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Oops forgot link lol :)
-HEE Click-
Wolf Dancer
05:53:05 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Any slim chance anyone can give some answers? :)
Tequila
05:52:22 Tee | Quila
hell yeh one of my SAs is still alive, just gotta remember the password…
Black Dragon Stable
05:49:54 BDS / Black / Stormy
(No, Flatline wasn't mine, but my homeboy goes back to him)
Black Dragon Stable
05:49:06 BDS / Black / Stormy
I just found some old lines still chilling among some of my horses... Definitely not the same quality as they used to be... but bred them back to a straw from my original homebred EEE. Results sucked...but fillies! Can try to bring that line back to life. Love the old Flatline lines.
Sweet Valley
05:43:56 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

Meadow- this is brindle :)
Glacier Bay Cove
05:36:34 Arctic Katz
Looking at my paintings, wondering how to make them look more realistic and lifelike
Gilded Roses
05:33:05 River / Brody
Meadow
No it’s just dun
Meadowdown
05:32:54 
Ahh I see, sorry for my mistake! thanks all ^^
pandemoniu_m
05:32:02 pheezy
meadow
if you're referring to the stripes on her knees those are primitive markings called "barring", they show on most duns
Morning Glory Farms
05:30:31 Terici/Dino/Trish
no if she was brindle it would say in her name
Glacier Bay Cove
05:29:34 Arctic Katz
I don't think she is a brindle
Meadowdown
05:27:46 
-HEE Click-

Oooh what a pretty little brindle she is! (she is brindle right?)
Sweet Valley
05:13:29 Anna/Jewel
Uh uh. And that quest is worth 15k lol
Crescent Estate
05:12:15 River / Crescent
Anna, do you have any skips?
Sweet Valley
05:10:48 Anna/Jewel
oooofff "Capture a horse with a W in dressage" ayayayayay Ughhhh how in the NAME of common sense am I supposed to do THAT
Fantasy Horses
05:06:10 Fantasy | Fanta
Enter your horse into a Specialty Clinic to boost their training.
Completed: 1/20

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I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:07 AM

Former Stable
 
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LOL
But I want to get better and I could use some help.
So....Criticize Me Please! <3
XD

Recent Examples:

(First Appy)
https://s33.postimg.cc/gkhm39qu7/Horse_HEEOrder.jpg


https://s33.postimg.cc/ppldj8ryn/Horse_Liver-_Premade-4.jpg

Click For Quality On both! <3

Edited at September 8, 2018 11:09 AM by Lazy Duck Elites
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:46 AM


WildWillow
 
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What cute art ideas!

First of all, smudge in small circles. It looks like the coats of your horse are pulled down. Also,it looks as though you need to take more time cutting out the horse. The first horse still has some of the original background around the leg and the last horse looks like the cut out was rushed. Take your time and focus. Hard work pays off!

Also, try to blend the hooves into the ground on the first image. In the second image, the horse is missing it's back hooves! Try redrawing the hooves. There are many great tutorials on DeviantArt for redrawing hooves.

Another thing I thought I'd mention is that the top horse looks blue toned and the background is red toned. Try to color in some red and orange highlights on the horse to help it seem although it is actually in the background. The second image looks foggy in the background which means it probably isn't sunny out which contradicts the highlighting on your horse. Try to make the horse look as though it is actually in the fog as well.

The manes and tail look quite stiff as well. Mess around with some different blending options to make the mane and tail flow rather than be rigid. Making the eyes pop would also bring a nice touch to the art.

Other than that, it looks like your on the right track! :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 04:41 PM

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Lighting is key!!! and instead of blending the whole body just blend the face and the legs, and if you add white highlights it will make the horse pop.
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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These are a really great start and you really look like you're moving along splendidly in your art journey.

It seems like what you're stuggling with right now, which will really make a difference, is your pieces look rushed. I would suggest slowing down and not having a time frame in mind. Enjoy what you're doing.

I think i go back over my horses cutouts atleast 2 times. And if i notice a single pixel out of line, i go back again.

With manes and tails, i make sure to pull every strand, and do so with a small brush (3 pixels)
It takes FOREVER, but the result is a beautiful, lush, realistic mane / tail.

I think once you start focusing on crispness, you will really see a jump forward in your art. :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:03 PM

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Thank You All! <3

I slow down on my next piece and post it here! <3
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 07:06 PM

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Sorry! I forgot about this LOL

Here is one I just finished :D

https://s33.postimg.cc/ouf6340q7/HEE_AVATAR.jpg

Am I improving?
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:26 PM

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Another recent :)

https://s33.postimg.cc/d1hcyqjnz/Banner_HEE_Premade_Tobi.jpg
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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These ideas are all great, you're off to a great start :)

I'd have to agree with Jello though in that your pieces are rushed. Patience is key, never rush through a piece just to get it done. It will really increase your works quality.

Also try using a smaller brush for hair. They seem very stringy and thick at the moment. Pull out each strand on its own, and keep in mind the way natural manes and tails flow.

Lighting and shadows are also crucial. If the lighting of the horse and BG don't match, it's impossible to sell the realistic aspect of the piece. Make sure shadows are cast in the correct directions, especially on the horse, and that areas not in direct sunlight on the horse are darker.

Hope this helps! :)
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 09:15 PM

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Thank You! <3

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