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Glacier Bay Cove
06:28:04 Arctic Katz
When I get done with the painting projects
Glacier Bay Cove
06:27:18 Arctic Katz
Thinking maybe I should got on my laptop and work on some more of the books I am writing
Angels angels
06:23:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Late response cause I am cooking dinner
Sunset River Arabian
06:23:24 Athena - AAs
Angels
I know. I'm sorry. But I promise at least chapter 33 will be full of laughs. It's cheered me up lol
Angels angels
06:23:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena lol
Glacier Bay Cove
06:22:12 Arctic Katz
Who, Angels
Angels angels
06:19:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
*-*
I have been waiting (im)patiently lol but I don't want to bug you or pressure you
pandemoniu_m
06:18:00 pheezy
-HEE Click-

im still glad she dodged the ugly roans so she could show off those pretty dapples
Tranquil Trails Ranc
06:13:29 
Sorry those links were broken -HEE Click-
Tranquil Trails Ranc
06:11:59 
She has the best pedigree I've ever gotten for a foal, hopefully she rates well. -HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
06:09:53 Arctic Katz
Thinking about painting something for Dulcie, after I finish the paintings I am currently working on
Sunset River Arabian
06:06:43 Athena - AAs
Angels and KPH
I'm slowly starting to write again by the way but I'm not going to post it till I can be consistent again
Sunset River Arabian
06:06:06 Athena - AAs
Hmm okay thanks guys :)
Tranquil Trails Ranc
06:04:16 
The starting of a pedigree for future W's -HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
06:04:00 Solar - KNNs
Athena

It depends for me lol sometimes I like a bit of backstory so that it's easier to build off of, or figure out more of their personality. I do like little personality descriptions, too. Though of course everything might change depending on how I connect with the character XD
Angels angels
06:03:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Still waiting for RO .-.
KPH Equestrian
06:01:12 Rapcoon | Jester
athena
I think it's so cute when someone takes the time to give random OCs they're not even gonna keep backstories and things🥺
Lynx Glory
06:00:52 ⛈ whisper/lynx
snitch
ahhh
Snitches' Stitches
06:00:13 Snitch
Pheezy
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Glacier Bay Cove
06:28:04 Arctic Katz
When I get done with the painting projects
Glacier Bay Cove
06:27:18 Arctic Katz
Thinking maybe I should got on my laptop and work on some more of the books I am writing
Angels angels
06:23:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Late response cause I am cooking dinner
Sunset River Arabian
06:23:24 Athena - AAs
Angels
I know. I'm sorry. But I promise at least chapter 33 will be full of laughs. It's cheered me up lol
Angels angels
06:23:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Athena lol
Glacier Bay Cove
06:22:12 Arctic Katz
Who, Angels
Angels angels
06:19:07 [1k+ brindles] Angel
*-*
I have been waiting (im)patiently lol but I don't want to bug you or pressure you
pandemoniu_m
06:18:00 pheezy
-HEE Click-

im still glad she dodged the ugly roans so she could show off those pretty dapples
Tranquil Trails Ranc
06:13:29 
Sorry those links were broken -HEE Click-
Tranquil Trails Ranc
06:11:59 
She has the best pedigree I've ever gotten for a foal, hopefully she rates well. -HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
06:09:53 Arctic Katz
Thinking about painting something for Dulcie, after I finish the paintings I am currently working on
Sunset River Arabian
06:06:43 Athena - AAs
Angels and KPH
I'm slowly starting to write again by the way but I'm not going to post it till I can be consistent again
Sunset River Arabian
06:06:06 Athena - AAs
Hmm okay thanks guys :)
Tranquil Trails Ranc
06:04:16 
The starting of a pedigree for future W's -HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
06:04:00 Solar - KNNs
Athena

It depends for me lol sometimes I like a bit of backstory so that it's easier to build off of, or figure out more of their personality. I do like little personality descriptions, too. Though of course everything might change depending on how I connect with the character XD
Angels angels
06:03:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Still waiting for RO .-.
KPH Equestrian
06:01:12 Rapcoon | Jester
athena
I think it's so cute when someone takes the time to give random OCs they're not even gonna keep backstories and things🥺
Lynx Glory
06:00:52 ⛈ whisper/lynx
snitch
ahhh
Snitches' Stitches
06:00:13 Snitch
Pheezy
Thanks!

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Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:20 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Hello! Some of you already know me^^ it's me Dark! I've been making art for a long time and unfortunately worked on a very old, laggy iPad. Now that I have a new iPad, I'm open to learning!!
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I am open to criticism and help!
I am also interested in:
how much is it worth?
Tier?
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old art is in my gallery

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:29 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:21 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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latest art to criticize

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:24 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:38 AM


Gem
 
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Hi!!!! I LOVE this piece!!!!! I saw it on Imp's stable a few days ago and was just blown away. I adore the contrast and the lighting and the drama. It's truly stunning and I would totally steal it. I had to stare for a bit to find anything to critique haha!!! ❤️
A few little things:
  • Looking at the jewelry on the tail, the cuffs should be casting a very small shadow on the horse to illustrate that they're not just markings. Along the same point, the cuff closer to the base of the tail, there is hair growing out of it. Logically I think the hair would be trapped inside the cuff? So maybe erase the few strands there. And if I'm totally misinterpreting it and they are meant to be markings, please ignore lol
  • As I mentioned, I adore the lighting. It makes it super dramatic and just gorgeous. The only spot I would adjust slightly is the chest/front shoulder. It seems unnaturally light when the direct light source is on the opposite side of the horse.
  • Because the background is so vibrant and green, I think it would make sense to have a bit more of that color incorporated/cast onto the horse. However, for this piece it feels like more of a stylistic choice and would work either way.
  • Last tiny thing, looking at where the tail docks to the horse's rump, I feel like the rump should be in front of the base of the tail. Meaning that there should be some sort of shading making a distinction between the two areas with shading rather than a direct connection. If this doesn't make sense I'd be happy to sketch what I mean.

    Lots of love!!! ❤️
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:45 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you^^
First art on the new ipad - a lot of work go get better but ur tips are awesome as always^^
Gem!
oh and yea they are fur markings not jewelry but thank you!^^

Edited at January 31, 2025 10:48 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 11:54 AM


Gem
 
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Okay haha!! I would suggest maybe making the tail markings less shiny then so they don't look quite so metallic but they're still super cool :D
You're most welcome 🥰
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 04:46 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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new art for Criticism and price help!
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Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:15 AM


Gem
 
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Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:19 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you for always being here XD^^
I only do the black for the vampire - the dark atmosphere is supposed to make it a little creepier ^^
and yeah - hair is my biggest problem ;C

Gem said:
Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3



Edited at February 8, 2025 11:20 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:21 AM


Wolf Dancer
 
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So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:22 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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<3 <3

Wolf Dancer said:
So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!



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