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2yo WEE ISH mare 1/79, 50k
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Sleepwalker Centre
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The Lazy Ninja
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EWE rid 10k obo
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EWW mare for auction, 1day left.
Legazy Stables
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available for LCs and straws! He has debuted well - I am still refunding half for any EWE+ produced by him
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Green River Stables
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Looking for someone who does pallets, pm me please

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Most studs are gene tested.
All studs are discounted for CQE Club members!


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-Elite SD
-Color Stock (Some E SD)
-Great gelding army prospects!
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Metla
01:36:01 
2yo WEE ISH mare 1/79, 50k
-HEE Click-
Sleepwalker Centre
01:35:00 Walker
Lots of capture items in my store (including some maps), also added a bunch of scrapbook decor. -HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
01:32:21 Jessie
EWE rid 10k obo
-HEE Click-
Maleficents
01:28:39 Dona
-HEE Click-

11 hours to go come get your bids in!
Midnight Manors
01:25:27 Bunny ♡
-HEE Click-
Goldspur
01:21:30 
-HEE Click-

EWW mare for auction, 1day left.
Legazy Stables
01:20:21 
available for LCs and straws! He has debuted well - I am still refunding half for any EWE+ produced by him
-HEE Click-
Green River Stables
12:59:56 
Looking for someone who does pallets, pm me please

Upgrades available
1 mo - 100k
3 mo - 180k
Twilight Forest
12:49:39 Robin
Cheap Studs for Breeding!
-HEE Click-
~~~
E+ Rated Color Studs
EWE+ Eventing Studs
W Color/SD Studs
~~~
Most studs are gene tested.
All studs are discounted for CQE Club members!


Cheap foals for sale!
-Elite SD
-Color Stock (Some E SD)
-Great gelding army prospects!
-HEE Click-
Fluffy's Cosy Home
12:44:33 Fluffy
Auction:
*World Class
*PEE combo
*Brindle
*Chimera
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

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The Official Art Critique Forum December 25, 2019 06:26 PM

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This looks amazing Sun,
The detail is insane
However the legs are a wee bit too much smudged out. There are a few points on the body the are tinged green and don't run with the colour scheme (the shoulder and down to her rump are quite green)
Use the lasso tool and select those areas, and change the hue a bit, or you could duplicate the horse layer and change its hue, then turn the opacity down.
The way the horse is cut is a little sharp, so after you finish cutting, go over the horse again with the eraser tool just to clean it up a bit, then when you are smudging, take a smaller brush and go around the outside of the horse. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum December 26, 2019 05:14 AM


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I have two other versions here, one is the original, and the other is another altered version
The Official Art Critique Forum December 26, 2019 09:13 PM

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Would love to have a bit of critique here. The eye tutorial was a massive help and so was the hair tutorial I followed

Edited at December 27, 2019 08:39 AM by Oak valley
The Official Art Critique Forum December 27, 2019 10:43 AM


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(Mods, I will not be selling, auctioning, or using this piece) I actually really liked how this turned out! Any crititique welcome!

Edited at December 27, 2019 10:44 AM by Sagebrush
The Official Art Critique Forum December 27, 2019 12:22 PM

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Sagebrush said:

(Mods, I will not be selling, auctioning, or using this piece) I actually really liked how this turned out! Any crititique welcome!


Awesome Sage!
The horse is a wee bit too smudged out in my opinion, however if thats what you where going for thats okay too! It still looks good.
The hair is improved, its a tiny bit sticklike though, try adding hairsprings on the edges of it and you'll be golden!
The horse lighting is really good! The hair lighting needs a bit more practice and thats okay; The forelock highlights are a bit too much and don't roll with the lighting and The mane needs a bit more highlight.
When smudging, make sure you smudge the edge of the horse so it softens the horse! (I've said this so many times lol, but its essential in making your piece look polished and well done.)
The Official Art Critique Forum December 27, 2019 03:45 PM

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I didn't do too much to this one, but I figured I'd still ask for critique. There's probably a lot I could have done but didn't lol
The Official Art Critique Forum December 27, 2019 04:27 PM


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I'm looking for a bit of critique on this piece, it is a banner and horse avi and whoever wins it (it will be in a giveaway) will get a custom stable avi.
These are meant to be a little opaque, it is a ghost theme :)
Banner:
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The Official Art Critique Forum December 27, 2019 07:00 PM

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Moonglade Manor said:
I'm looking for a bit of critique on this piece, it is a banner and horse avi and whoever wins it (it will be in a giveaway) will get a custom stable avi.
These are meant to be a little opaque, it is a ghost theme :)
Banner:
Avi:


Looks nice! Even though the horse is meant to be ghostly, it shouldn't lack detail. Let more of its color show and lighten up on the smudging (it looks like you did smudging but I could be wrong). Also, add definition lines in areas like the jaw, cheek, chest, and shoulder. Some color in the eye would be nice as well.
The Official Art Critique Forum December 27, 2019 07:34 PM


Moonglade Manor
 
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Can I have some critique on this?
It is my first ever lineart
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The Official Art Critique Forum December 28, 2019 03:34 AM

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