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Ravenwood Farm
04:47:27 
Boulder you can, you just have to do your search without that first and then add on tge second go
Winterfell yard
04:06:24 
Ana
Noted thank you :)
Vancouver
04:05:28 Ana / Van
Winter
Get some geldings and enter them into shows for money
Winterfell yard
04:02:00 
Hey chat ! I've just signed up for horse Eden i play wolfplay but never this , so any tips anyone has would be useful <3
Boulder Creek
03:44:46 
Just realized you can't search for horses that aren't brave rated
Namerik Stables
03:13:41 Rose
thankyou
Looking Glass Stable
03:13:03 IA Glass 👋
Ah shoot. Still a lovely boy though (: congrats
Namerik Stables
03:12:35 Rose
oh boohoo he's sub-par
Namerik Stables
03:11:05 Rose
okay thank you Glass
Looking Glass Stable
03:09:44 IA Glass 👋
Take him for a ride! (:
Go to Explore, and ride him until he spooks
Namerik Stables
03:08:37 Rose
how do i do that
Looking Glass Stable
02:57:34 IA Glass 👋
Always check wild braveries ♡
Palais de Lys
02:55:21 
Congrats! You could xheck his bravery too.
Namerik Stables
02:10:23 Rose
-HEE Click-
first EEEcapture
Pegasus Lane
02:07:09 Peggy (or) Peg
Just got ID'ed going into a business lounge at the airport 😭😂
Didn't know they did that
pandemoniu_m
12:51:59 pheezy
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:51:53 pheezy
sigh the quality has been burnt, crumpled, and stomped on- not in that order- but my old coot finally has some oomf
Fantasy Horses
12:46:02 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
Her and all her little critter buddies <3
Nolified
12:21:43 noli,SH thief,bread
And you shall be gelded

-HEE Click-
Emmas Eventers
12:19:59 
I'm only on 104 days, not by choice but internet went down late on a Saturday so didn't get fixed til the Monday

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Ravenwood Farm
04:47:27 
Boulder you can, you just have to do your search without that first and then add on tge second go
Winterfell yard
04:06:24 
Ana
Noted thank you :)
Vancouver
04:05:28 Ana / Van
Winter
Get some geldings and enter them into shows for money
Winterfell yard
04:02:00 
Hey chat ! I've just signed up for horse Eden i play wolfplay but never this , so any tips anyone has would be useful <3
Boulder Creek
03:44:46 
Just realized you can't search for horses that aren't brave rated
Namerik Stables
03:13:41 Rose
thankyou
Looking Glass Stable
03:13:03 IA Glass 👋
Ah shoot. Still a lovely boy though (: congrats
Namerik Stables
03:12:35 Rose
oh boohoo he's sub-par
Namerik Stables
03:11:05 Rose
okay thank you Glass
Looking Glass Stable
03:09:44 IA Glass 👋
Take him for a ride! (:
Go to Explore, and ride him until he spooks
Namerik Stables
03:08:37 Rose
how do i do that
Looking Glass Stable
02:57:34 IA Glass 👋
Always check wild braveries ♡
Palais de Lys
02:55:21 
Congrats! You could xheck his bravery too.
Namerik Stables
02:10:23 Rose
-HEE Click-
first EEEcapture
Pegasus Lane
02:07:09 Peggy (or) Peg
Just got ID'ed going into a business lounge at the airport 😭😂
Didn't know they did that
pandemoniu_m
12:51:59 pheezy
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:51:53 pheezy
sigh the quality has been burnt, crumpled, and stomped on- not in that order- but my old coot finally has some oomf
Fantasy Horses
12:46:02 Fantasy | Fanta
-HEE Click-
Her and all her little critter buddies <3
Nolified
12:21:43 noli,SH thief,bread
And you shall be gelded

-HEE Click-
Emmas Eventers
12:19:59 
I'm only on 104 days, not by choice but internet went down late on a Saturday so didn't get fixed til the Monday

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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The Official Art Critique Forum January 15, 2020 10:01 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Cassa Belle said:
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I really like this!
I would suggest lightly outlining them in a shade a bit lighter than the background since it seems like that is where the light source is coming from. I'd also maybe add some soft highlights on them both to tie it in more with the background and make it seem like they're being lit up from the back :)

Edited at January 15, 2020 10:02 PM by Breezie Rose
The Official Art Critique Forum January 16, 2020 12:49 AM


Diamond C Ranch
 
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Had fun with this! Could use some tips. Also, my first color change.

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The Official Art Critique Forum January 17, 2020 08:32 PM

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Phoenix Rising Ranch said:
Critique?
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Still looking for critiques
The Official Art Critique Forum January 18, 2020 05:51 AM

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Star Catcher Estate said:
I'mma lay this down right here;
I'm super pleased with this. This was a new experiment with doing hair. Also my first color change <3


I really like this. I love the way you've done the mane and tail. The body of the horse looks a bit grainy, but to me it looks quite nice in this picture. I think that maybe you should have a bit more red on the edge of the horse for the lighting else it'll look like there's not much fire
The Official Art Critique Forum January 18, 2020 05:57 AM

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Breezie Rose said:
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looking for opinions. First (full body) mania using gimp and my new tablet so I'd love some pointers!


Wow! This is really impressive! First thing I noticed is the hair, the edges don't look as smooth, they kind of look a bit jagged and it doesn't flow naturally, maybe if you experiment with the brushes then you could see which ones work and which don't . The second thing I think you should add is a reflection. To me it looks as itlf the horse is just stood in the water. I don't use gimp but the way I do the reflection on ibis is I make a new layer, copy the horse, paste it on the new layer and flip it. Then I move it so the hooves are touching. I then lower the opacity and blue it a little.
Hope this helps

Edited at January 18, 2020 05:57 AM by Oak valley
The Official Art Critique Forum January 18, 2020 06:00 AM

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Ethereal Eventers said:
Looking for critiques and pricing opinions! Thank you
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I really like this. Its simple but pretty. I think maybe next time you could as a few more highlights and blur the body a little to make it fit in with the mane
The Official Art Critique Forum January 18, 2020 06:01 AM

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Phoenix Rising Ranch said:
Critique?
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I love this! To me the lighting is pretty good. Maybe next time you could make the eye fit in a bit more, to me it looks just orange. I usually have a darker orange, do the eye with that. Put it on a lighter orange, go over the middle of the darker stuff to make it stand out. Then I get a bluey whitish colour, go over the middle part with that to make it blend in and then I out a small dot in the corner of the eye fir the white part.

Edited at January 18, 2020 06:04 AM by Oak valley
The Official Art Critique Forum January 18, 2020 06:08 AM

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Diamond C Ranch said:

Had fun with this! Could use some tips. Also, my first color change.

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This looks good Diamond!
First thing I notice is the mane, it's a bit stringy. I usually get a base colour, make the shape with that. Get a smaller brush and slowly add highlights on top, but I gradually get it lighter so it looks detailed. Next time, don't forget a shadow! They're very important
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2020 04:19 PM


Moonglade Manor
 
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Looking for critique on this, I'm extremely proud of it but I know that I can improve in some areas :)
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2020 04:29 PM

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Moonglade Manor said:
Looking for critique on this, I'm extremely proud of it but I know that I can improve in some areas :)


Very nice :)
Two things that I notice immediately: the horse doesn't look like it matches the background enough and the eye stands out too much. To make the horse match the background better, take a common color from the background and, on a new layer, color over the whole horse. Clip that layer to the horse, then lower the opacity all of the way down. You can then work on raising the opacity a little until the horse matches well. A different way you could do this is going into filters on the horse's layer and toying with the color balance. As for the eye, it should be matched to the background as well, and then lower the eye's layer's opacity a little until it looks nice. The only other thing I'd say is add another layer and draw the outline/large muscles in an off white color. Then lower the layer's opacity so that the lines don't draw in lots of attention but they define the horse more.

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