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Oh wow!Lady does lineartz?yes i do,critique anyone?please allow for the fact that it isnt a manip therr gore i cannot detail it as much
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Firstly, love it Raven! The shading is so good *_* The tail seem very chonky and rectangular, maybe try drawing it with a smaller brush? As you would a manip, maybe. Shadow! It's a small touch, but makes a world of difference. You drew lines on the right hind leg. Was that purposeful? If it's for making it darker because of the lighting, maybe try blurring it slihtly? Very slightly, though.
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Looking for some suggestions :)
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Gem said: Looking for some suggestions :)
I love thiiis! The floofy feet *_* But my eyes are being attracted to the background just above the horse, thus taking away from the image. I would love to see some more focus on the face by adding shadows in the corner of the image.
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Will do! Thanks for the suggestion!
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Edited at April 23, 2020 07:45 AM by Gem
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Pretty pleased with this one, I'd love to hear any suggestions.
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Finished piece for a competition, would like some feedback :) Edit: Large image, click for quality Edited at April 23, 2020 12:27 PM by White Hills
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