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Fantasy Horses
06:49:08 Fantasy
How many Ws is the average for a mare to produce before getting on the LB?
Glacier Bay Cove
06:46:43 Arctic Katz
Talk about major embarrassment
Glacier Bay Cove
06:46:11 Arctic Katz
Turns out my grandma was in the next grocery isle over, getting another grocery item
Star Fields
06:45:59 Stardust/Comet
Katz
OMG so relatable
Star Fields
06:45:41 Stardust/Comet
how have I been here for two years and still not bred a WWW
Glacier Bay Cove
06:44:23 Arctic Katz
I have a funny story about when I went shopping with my grandma. I had gotten an item for her, and I walked up behind her and said I have it, Grandma. She turned around and my face turned tomato red. It wasn't my grandmother.
Hot 2 Trot
06:43:15 ♡Holly♡
I usually don't say anything when I'm not sure who they talking to. Ignoring people is such a powerful tool
Hot 2 Trot
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DD
Oh thats even worse...
Dash and Duchess
06:40:24 DD | ~Squizard~
Holly, yup >.> bonus points because they didn't just like ignore it happened they told me 😭
Glacier Bay Cove
06:38:30 Arctic Katz
Happy anniversary, Stardust
Fantasy Horses
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Comet
🎉
Star Fields
06:37:54 Stardust/Comet
Today is my two year anniversary!
Hot 2 Trot
06:37:39 ♡Holly♡
Okie^^
Fantasy Horses
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Holly
Will do! I'll PM you when I get it all :D
Hot 2 Trot
06:37:18 ♡Holly♡
DD
Oh yes, the joys of embarrassment with communication
Hot 2 Trot
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Fantasy
Do show when your done, would love to see
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Welcome!
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Thanks Billy c:
Ironworks Equestria
06:35:24 Seven | Billy
Walker,

Whooo! Nice
Dash and Duchess
06:35:04 DD | ~Squizard~
Ah yes I love the second hand embarrassment of responding to someone just to realize they were talking to the person behind you 🫠

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Fantasy Horses
06:49:08 Fantasy
How many Ws is the average for a mare to produce before getting on the LB?
Glacier Bay Cove
06:46:43 Arctic Katz
Talk about major embarrassment
Glacier Bay Cove
06:46:11 Arctic Katz
Turns out my grandma was in the next grocery isle over, getting another grocery item
Star Fields
06:45:59 Stardust/Comet
Katz
OMG so relatable
Star Fields
06:45:41 Stardust/Comet
how have I been here for two years and still not bred a WWW
Glacier Bay Cove
06:44:23 Arctic Katz
I have a funny story about when I went shopping with my grandma. I had gotten an item for her, and I walked up behind her and said I have it, Grandma. She turned around and my face turned tomato red. It wasn't my grandmother.
Hot 2 Trot
06:43:15 ♡Holly♡
I usually don't say anything when I'm not sure who they talking to. Ignoring people is such a powerful tool
Hot 2 Trot
06:42:14 ♡Holly♡
DD
Oh thats even worse...
Dash and Duchess
06:40:24 DD | ~Squizard~
Holly, yup >.> bonus points because they didn't just like ignore it happened they told me 😭
Glacier Bay Cove
06:38:30 Arctic Katz
Happy anniversary, Stardust
Fantasy Horses
06:38:29 Fantasy
Comet
🎉
Star Fields
06:37:54 Stardust/Comet
Today is my two year anniversary!
Hot 2 Trot
06:37:39 ♡Holly♡
Okie^^
Fantasy Horses
06:37:30 Fantasy
Holly
Will do! I'll PM you when I get it all :D
Hot 2 Trot
06:37:18 ♡Holly♡
DD
Oh yes, the joys of embarrassment with communication
Hot 2 Trot
06:36:56 ♡Holly♡
Fantasy
Do show when your done, would love to see
Ironworks Equestria
06:36:50 Seven | Billy
Welcome!
Sleepwalker Centre
06:35:51 Walker
Thanks Billy c:
Ironworks Equestria
06:35:24 Seven | Billy
Walker,

Whooo! Nice
Dash and Duchess
06:35:04 DD | ~Squizard~
Ah yes I love the second hand embarrassment of responding to someone just to realize they were talking to the person behind you 🫠

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 10:06 AM


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Click Here for the Google doc
Chapters posted: 26 / 26

This book was self-published in Hungary, 7 years ago, when I was 17. The publisher has no problem with me translating it into English and sharing it online. That being said the translation is far from perfect, and there might be certain lines in there that work for me (because I see it in Hungarian also) but won't work for native English speakers. (I'd be more than happy if these were pointed out by the way.)

The book is more like a self-healing story than directed at the general public. It's also kind of like a diary from that time while I was writing. Many real life events are placed into it with a few twists. The story is about a 17 year-old girl, in high school, who has a fear of crowds and social anxiety. She's a gamer, spends most of her time alone trying to be as invisible as possible, until a certain person suddenly enters her life and turns it upside down. The book shows her struggle against her fears and emotions, with a touch of fantasy.

Since this is a completely finished work which is well in my past I am not looking for critisism of any kind. You're more than welcome to share your opinion though!

I will try my best to update regularly. I have to go through the translation one more time before posting to check for errors and to make the formatting in the Google doc. I will post here when a new chapter is up.


Edited at May 21, 2021 01:14 PM by HRS
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 11:17 AM


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ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 12:23 PM


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Yay, I'm glad you like it! :D

Thistleberry Farm said:
ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!


The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 04:29 PM

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 06:17 PM


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Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3

Edited at April 18, 2021 06:17 PM by FirstLightFarms
The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:08 AM


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I'm happy to hear you like it ^^ Thank you for reading <3

FirstLightFarms said:
Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3


The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:31 AM


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I added 3 more chapters :D
The Soul of Music April 22, 2021 08:50 AM


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I added 2 more chapers.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 11:04 AM


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New chapters added.
At the time I was writing I didn't notice that the number 9 was skipped at numbering the chapters, and the book was published without a chapter 9 as well. So I kept this little twist here too. Don't worry, nothing is missing from the story, the only thing that was skipped is the chapter number.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 05:29 PM


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I really like how these plots are starting to get twisted around each other!

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