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Ya'll, look at this !!

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Aww that sucks Sem :(
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Siren Sound Estates
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-HEE Click-
Great. Now I'm sad.
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Also, you can use store credits that you earn from quests in the Store.
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In the vet's office under services :)
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Rose, how do you do a lens of time??
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Would this be a good match?
Golden Rose
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How do you do that?
Emmas Eventers
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very pretty
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Her lens of time *-*

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so called art?
The Valley
05:42:47 River
Ah, art. I don't go near the so called art on here.
Sport Pony Island
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Rose, that is truly amazing

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Siren Sound Estates
06:13:57 S҉ Sem
In his Breed, I have to add.
Siren Sound Estates
06:11:20 S҉ Sem
Thanks, Lily. Pretty and #1 Bravery for life.
Calela Eventing
06:02:30 Cali
No problem!
emeritus
06:01:52 
Thank you so much. It has been driving me mad
Calela Eventing
06:01:26 Cali
Community-games
emeritus
06:00:30 
Where do I find the mini games?
Sport Pony Island
05:59:10 
Ya'll, look at this !!

-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
05:57:51 Lily/Alpine
Aww that sucks Sem :(
such a pretty boy
Siren Sound Estates
05:55:18 S҉ Sem
-HEE Click-
Great. Now I'm sad.
Alpine Acres
05:54:49 Lily/Alpine
Also, you can use store credits that you earn from quests in the Store.
Services>Store>Items
Alpine Acres
05:53:52 Lily/Alpine
Sport Pony Island
In the vet's office under services :)
Sport Pony Island
05:52:24 
Rose, how do you do a lens of time??
Mirage
05:49:55 
-HEE Click-
Would this be a good match?
Golden Rose
05:48:29 Rose/Goldy
Thank you <3
Sport Pony Island
05:48:21 
How do you do that?
Emmas Eventers
05:47:36 
very pretty
Golden Rose
05:46:23 Rose/Goldy
Her lens of time *-*

-HEE Click-
Kanenoki Estate
05:43:40 Noki
so called art?
The Valley
05:42:47 River
Ah, art. I don't go near the so called art on here.
Sport Pony Island
05:41:47 
Rose, that is truly amazing

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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