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Winter Curtain
02:10:05 Win | Water
Solar, love that SH
Winter Curtain
02:09:29 Win | Water
Versa, hi ! Just saw you are online. I love your art !
Glacier Bay Cove
02:09:28 Arctic Katz
Lucky, Solar
Crestwood Eq.
01:57:38 Ivy / poison ivy
Oh you’re cute -HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
01:55:07 Solar Phoenix
Uhhh...I got a Elite brindle, of course when I had both the breed a brindle and breed a Premium brindle quests XD
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
01:54:03 Ivy / poison ivy
Emma!
Versailles
01:45:31 Versa
She'll try to fix your hair for you lol
Emmas Eventers
01:43:51 
I'll cuddle it lol
Versailles
01:43:36 Versa
<3
Crestwood Eq.
01:40:34 Ivy / poison ivy
Versa

Cutie!
Fantasy Horses
01:40:01 Fantasy | Fanta
Versa
Awww <3
Versailles
01:37:20 Versa
Someone's feeling cuddly today :)
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Fantasy Horses
01:33:08 Fantasy | Fanta
first time I've cleaned nigel in forever lol
Embervale Acres
01:31:24 Solar Phoenix
ugh, finally finished the take 20 pictures quest lol
Crestwood Eq.
01:29:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Issy!
Crestwood Eq.
01:29:27 Ivy / poison ivy
Back
Nightingales Ridge
01:02:58 Issy
Hmm buzzy...Good lad
Cloud Peak Stables
01:02:05 Cloud
Even the best 1yo SD gelding typically won't level until week 6.
Nightingales Ridge
01:01:39 Issy
He's a gelding only getting trained in XC I think it's fairly normal?
Bug in a Rug
01:00:25 Bug | Flea | KPH
cloud
I'm pretty sure it's because he's a gelding and trained SD

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Winter Curtain
02:10:05 Win | Water
Solar, love that SH
Winter Curtain
02:09:29 Win | Water
Versa, hi ! Just saw you are online. I love your art !
Glacier Bay Cove
02:09:28 Arctic Katz
Lucky, Solar
Crestwood Eq.
01:57:38 Ivy / poison ivy
Oh you’re cute -HEE Click-
Embervale Acres
01:55:07 Solar Phoenix
Uhhh...I got a Elite brindle, of course when I had both the breed a brindle and breed a Premium brindle quests XD
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
01:54:03 Ivy / poison ivy
Emma!
Versailles
01:45:31 Versa
She'll try to fix your hair for you lol
Emmas Eventers
01:43:51 
I'll cuddle it lol
Versailles
01:43:36 Versa
<3
Crestwood Eq.
01:40:34 Ivy / poison ivy
Versa

Cutie!
Fantasy Horses
01:40:01 Fantasy | Fanta
Versa
Awww <3
Versailles
01:37:20 Versa
Someone's feeling cuddly today :)
-Click-
Fantasy Horses
01:33:08 Fantasy | Fanta
first time I've cleaned nigel in forever lol
Embervale Acres
01:31:24 Solar Phoenix
ugh, finally finished the take 20 pictures quest lol
Crestwood Eq.
01:29:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Issy!
Crestwood Eq.
01:29:27 Ivy / poison ivy
Back
Nightingales Ridge
01:02:58 Issy
Hmm buzzy...Good lad
Cloud Peak Stables
01:02:05 Cloud
Even the best 1yo SD gelding typically won't level until week 6.
Nightingales Ridge
01:01:39 Issy
He's a gelding only getting trained in XC I think it's fairly normal?
Bug in a Rug
01:00:25 Bug | Flea | KPH
cloud
I'm pretty sure it's because he's a gelding and trained SD

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Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 04:05 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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So I have no clue what to price my art at...so if you have suggestions on that those could help as well.
I need some critique on my art. Ive been semi stuck lately on art and its been making me sort of depressed.
Recent art pieces:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/f12d/f/2018/187/c/a/deathappearancehorseavi_by_wsl30horselover10-dcghsz1.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/60bd/f/2018/196/f/7/running_free_horse_avi_by_wsl30horselover10-dchbwgy.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/ce47/f/2018/179/1/4/leaning_ladder_chestnut_mare_art_by_wsl30horselover10-dcfofa8.jpg
https://orig00.deviantart.net/758b/f/2018/196/0/d/jello_entry_by_wsl30horselover10-dchceqg.jpg
So those are a few recent pieces and as I said I would like some critique on my art:)
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:39 PM

Former Stable
 
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no idea what to price them at. but i love these. the brindle is my favorite
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:42 PM

Former Stable
 
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I'd say like 15-25k!
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:43 PM

Former Stable
 
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Jeesh, these are gorgeous! Great work! I like all of them a lot personally <3
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:43 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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First off, you've improved a whole lot! Price wise, maybe 15k for horse avatars and 10k for stable sets :)

Some constructive critiques:
I noticed that your manes and tails are a bit stringy, so try using a larger pixel brush, maybe 2-4px. The shadows are also a bit blobby, so try to place them according to the lighting of the piece. If the sun is in the background, the shadow should be in the foreground. Also try blurring the background just a tad to really focus on the horse. Some of the edges on the horses are a bit choppy, so maybe try using a smaller brush to cut them out as well. Minor details are key :)
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:44 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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Lol thats good then because I currently have them at 25k:)

Lazy C Ranch said:
I'd say like 15-25k!


Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:45 PM

Former Stable
 
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1. The spots on this horse look very green and the front left hoof looks like it should be in the flowers, not on top of them

2. Maybe blur the background a bit to put more focus on the horse and make it bigger. Not a lot needs changing with this one, it already looks well put together.

3. Maybe make the glow a little fainter, the spots look a little unnatural but overall very pretty.

4. Personally, I like horses to be on the left or right side, at about 1/3 of the way along a banner, not right in the middle but the horse and the background match well.
Art critique please:) July 18, 2018 01:50 PM


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Arveline Acres said:
First off, you've improved a whole lot! Price wise, maybe 15k for horse avatars and 10k for stable sets :)

Some constructive critiques:
I noticed that your manes and tails are a bit stringy, so try using a larger pixel brush, maybe 2-4px. The shadows are also a bit blobby, so try to place them according to the lighting of the piece. If the sun is in the background, the shadow should be in the foreground. Also try blurring the background just a tad to really focus on the horse. Some of the edges on the horses are a bit choppy, so maybe try using a smaller brush to cut them out as well. Minor details are key :)


Thank you:)
Although I do think the mane and tails thing could be because I use a mouse but I definitely know what you mean.

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