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God is Mighty Stable
06:34:00 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Do I see Ivy & Gem?
Ravenclaw Livery
06:03:15 Zen's WBs
Thanks LBKL! I was a little worried there when I hadn't heard back from the professor who chose my placement all summer. But then two weeks ago he said he had a place, and today was the day I was told which division of the Attorney General's Office I'd be working with
LBKL
06:01:11 
Zen that's great!
Crestwood Eq.
05:58:38 Ivy / poison ivy
Now i have to find someone who wants to yap
Crestwood Eq.
05:57:43 Ivy / poison ivy
T-T wylder has to go to a CAP meeting.
Ravenclaw Livery
05:55:03 Zen's WBs
Whoop just got my law school clinic placement this fall!
Tobiano Lady
05:43:03 Tobi | Nix
Apparently I started my XC SD 4 RL years ago. Does not feel like it O_O
Gem Queens Estate
05:38:49 Snow❆Gem
PEW wild KNN boy is up 4 in week 4? O.o lol

-HEE Click-
~Savy~
05:36:01 Sav
I have more mares than I need, so I am alright with a colt there haha
Valhalla Acreage
05:35:55 Eivor
Arctic you will get there one day
Sweet Valley
05:34:15 Anna/Jewel
Ooo, pretty foal, Sav. And a WWW too. Too bad not a filly.
~Savy~
05:29:52 Sav
-HEE Click-
What a lil jerk <.>
Glacier Bay Cove
05:18:42 Arctic Katz
Wonder if any of my horses will ever make it to the leaderboards
ShiningStar Stables
05:12:37 Chey / Star
Someone that would use single W combos xD
I found what I was looking for
Angels angels
05:02:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Define "new" lmao
It is fairly relative 🤣
Gem Queens Estate
05:01:19 Snow❆Gem
@star

I do TBs/Xs on my Snow account. But in all honesty, I might be the person to ask deep questions. lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
04:58:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
me too blu
BlueBirdFalls
04:57:38 Blu
Im Doing Tb and Wbs
Pragma
04:54:42 Prag/Liz
Yeeeah it was a hot minute ago lol
Fantasy Horses
04:54:12 Fantasy | Fanta
Prag
Went to see when you joined HEE and chuckled when I saw year 19 lol

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God is Mighty Stable
06:34:00 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Do I see Ivy & Gem?
Ravenclaw Livery
06:03:15 Zen's WBs
Thanks LBKL! I was a little worried there when I hadn't heard back from the professor who chose my placement all summer. But then two weeks ago he said he had a place, and today was the day I was told which division of the Attorney General's Office I'd be working with
LBKL
06:01:11 
Zen that's great!
Crestwood Eq.
05:58:38 Ivy / poison ivy
Now i have to find someone who wants to yap
Crestwood Eq.
05:57:43 Ivy / poison ivy
T-T wylder has to go to a CAP meeting.
Ravenclaw Livery
05:55:03 Zen's WBs
Whoop just got my law school clinic placement this fall!
Tobiano Lady
05:43:03 Tobi | Nix
Apparently I started my XC SD 4 RL years ago. Does not feel like it O_O
Gem Queens Estate
05:38:49 Snow❆Gem
PEW wild KNN boy is up 4 in week 4? O.o lol

-HEE Click-
~Savy~
05:36:01 Sav
I have more mares than I need, so I am alright with a colt there haha
Valhalla Acreage
05:35:55 Eivor
Arctic you will get there one day
Sweet Valley
05:34:15 Anna/Jewel
Ooo, pretty foal, Sav. And a WWW too. Too bad not a filly.
~Savy~
05:29:52 Sav
-HEE Click-
What a lil jerk <.>
Glacier Bay Cove
05:18:42 Arctic Katz
Wonder if any of my horses will ever make it to the leaderboards
ShiningStar Stables
05:12:37 Chey / Star
Someone that would use single W combos xD
I found what I was looking for
Angels angels
05:02:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Define "new" lmao
It is fairly relative 🤣
Gem Queens Estate
05:01:19 Snow❆Gem
@star

I do TBs/Xs on my Snow account. But in all honesty, I might be the person to ask deep questions. lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
04:58:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
me too blu
BlueBirdFalls
04:57:38 Blu
Im Doing Tb and Wbs
Pragma
04:54:42 Prag/Liz
Yeeeah it was a hot minute ago lol
Fantasy Horses
04:54:12 Fantasy | Fanta
Prag
Went to see when you joined HEE and chuckled when I saw year 19 lol

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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