Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

05:18:08 Meadow

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Need help with a glass that should be used i was told SPD but any other ideas

05:10:50 Snow❆Gem

@pheezy

I have a touchscreen laptop. And its still a pain in the dupa! lol

pandemoniu_m

05:04:53 pheezy

switched laptops and all is as it should be phew

05:00:59 Elfie

xD Thank you, the taste of revenge is sweet.

04:59:42 The Brindle Princess

*Throwing six water balloons at Enoki, for you,* Elfie

04:58:18 Snow❆Gem

@nix

I might too, if my internet was faster. ;P

04:58:10 Elfie

Enoki just hit me in the eye with a water balloon.

Tobiano Lady

04:56:07 Tobi | Nix

I feel like a little kid on the playground again when we have the Water Balloon event lol

04:55:47 Snow❆Gem

@bay

I'm going after PK. ;P hehehe!

04:55:28 Elfie

Anyone willing to help me match this little lady?
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04:55:01 The Brindle Princess

I am hiding

04:54:41 The Brindle Princess

Who purchased water balloons, going into hiding

04:54:05 Snow❆Gem

Congrats on your water balloon purchase! Now go whoop some butt.

04:51:08 Meadow

Spd

Embervale Acres

04:50:59 Solar Phoenix

Absolute brat. I almost FR'd you immediately
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04:50:58 Meadow

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What glass should I use i was told specifically but what is everyone else's thoughts

04:50:17 Elfie

I've noticed that also..

It makes breeding for Ratings and Bravery very difficult.

pandemoniu_m

04:50:08 pheezy

thank you madi, must just be this ancient artifact of computer then since it wont even load photos lol

Sunset River Arabian

04:49:52 Athena - AAs

Remi
Rosalind

Embervale Acres

04:48:56 Solar Phoenix

Elfie
No, I don't really use premiums to be honest. Maybe if I find a strong boy for her, but bravery studs are difficult to match with since so many I've looked at aren't really tracked or trained

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05:18:08 Meadow

-HEE Click-
Need help with a glass that should be used i was told SPD but any other ideas

05:10:50 Snow❆Gem

@pheezy

I have a touchscreen laptop. And its still a pain in the dupa! lol

pandemoniu_m

05:04:53 pheezy

switched laptops and all is as it should be phew

05:00:59 Elfie

xD Thank you, the taste of revenge is sweet.

04:59:42 The Brindle Princess

*Throwing six water balloons at Enoki, for you,* Elfie

04:58:18 Snow❆Gem

@nix

I might too, if my internet was faster. ;P

04:58:10 Elfie

Enoki just hit me in the eye with a water balloon.

Tobiano Lady

04:56:07 Tobi | Nix

I feel like a little kid on the playground again when we have the Water Balloon event lol

04:55:47 Snow❆Gem

@bay

I'm going after PK. ;P hehehe!

04:55:28 Elfie

Anyone willing to help me match this little lady?
-HEE Click-

04:55:01 The Brindle Princess

I am hiding

04:54:41 The Brindle Princess

Who purchased water balloons, going into hiding

04:54:05 Snow❆Gem

Congrats on your water balloon purchase! Now go whoop some butt.

04:51:08 Meadow

Spd

Embervale Acres

04:50:59 Solar Phoenix

Absolute brat. I almost FR'd you immediately
-HEE Click-

04:50:58 Meadow

-HEE Click-
What glass should I use i was told specifically but what is everyone else's thoughts

04:50:17 Elfie

I've noticed that also..

It makes breeding for Ratings and Bravery very difficult.

pandemoniu_m

04:50:08 pheezy

thank you madi, must just be this ancient artifact of computer then since it wont even load photos lol

Sunset River Arabian

04:49:52 Athena - AAs

Remi
Rosalind

Embervale Acres

04:48:56 Solar Phoenix

Elfie
No, I don't really use premiums to be honest. Maybe if I find a strong boy for her, but bravery studs are difficult to match with since so many I've looked at aren't really tracked or trained

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites