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Morning Glory Farms
12:21:58 Terici/Dino/Trish
No chatspeak please Blue Bonnet :) make sure youre spelling out your words
Rising Stars Stable
12:18:45 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
If only he could of been a LpLp as well
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:12:52 BluebonnetBree
Ty! <3
God is Mighty Stable
12:10:46 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Blue
yes! He couldn't be homo fer anything besides Ch
God is Mighty Stable
12:09:51 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
Hello my pretty
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:09:02 BluebonnetBree
That one working?
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:08:57 BluebonnetBree
-HEE Click-
God is Mighty Stable
12:08:09 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Blue
bad link
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:06:46 BluebonnetBree
Think he's worth a genetic test too? -HEE Click-
God is Mighty Stable
12:06:08 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
She's so shiney
Calela Eventing
12:02:51 Cali
Bree
I’d keep personally
Glacier Bay Cove
12:02:28 Arctic Katz
On the soft grooming brush
Fantasy Horses
12:02:16 Fantasy | Fanta
Lily
So true
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:02:12 BluebonnetBree
I need opinions if I bred a PPP colt with a 1 of 1 coat should I geld him or keep him intact?
Calela Eventing
12:01:49 Cali
When he hits you on the hoof pick😵
Glacier Bay Cove
12:01:42 Arctic Katz
Oh
Alpine Acres
12:01:41 Lily/Alpine
Worst kind of betrayal, Fanta -_-
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:00:55 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
beehive
Fantasy Horses
11:59:40 Fantasy | Fanta
When nigel nails you on the shine spray >_<
Glacier Bay Cove
11:59:00 Arctic Katz
Huh

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Morning Glory Farms
12:21:58 Terici/Dino/Trish
No chatspeak please Blue Bonnet :) make sure youre spelling out your words
Rising Stars Stable
12:18:45 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
If only he could of been a LpLp as well
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:12:52 BluebonnetBree
Ty! <3
God is Mighty Stable
12:10:46 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Blue
yes! He couldn't be homo fer anything besides Ch
God is Mighty Stable
12:09:51 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
Hello my pretty
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:09:02 BluebonnetBree
That one working?
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:08:57 BluebonnetBree
-HEE Click-
God is Mighty Stable
12:08:09 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
Blue
bad link
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:06:46 BluebonnetBree
Think he's worth a genetic test too? -HEE Click-
God is Mighty Stable
12:06:08 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
She's so shiney
Calela Eventing
12:02:51 Cali
Bree
I’d keep personally
Glacier Bay Cove
12:02:28 Arctic Katz
On the soft grooming brush
Fantasy Horses
12:02:16 Fantasy | Fanta
Lily
So true
BluebonnetCreekRanch
12:02:12 BluebonnetBree
I need opinions if I bred a PPP colt with a 1 of 1 coat should I geld him or keep him intact?
Calela Eventing
12:01:49 Cali
When he hits you on the hoof pick😵
Glacier Bay Cove
12:01:42 Arctic Katz
Oh
Alpine Acres
12:01:41 Lily/Alpine
Worst kind of betrayal, Fanta -_-
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:00:55 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
beehive
Fantasy Horses
11:59:40 Fantasy | Fanta
When nigel nails you on the shine spray >_<
Glacier Bay Cove
11:59:00 Arctic Katz
Huh

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


Brook Mill Dressage
 
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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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