Horse Eden : Critique? And advice?

12:23:52 Terici/Dino/Trish

My fingers are crossed for you! I hope she's nice to

Valhalla Acreage

12:21:12 Eivor

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I'm excited for this I'm using a blue glass on this pair

12:17:04 Chey / Star

Trish
I'm very nervous to breed her 😬
I will be svenning her as my first match so hopefully she is nice

12:13:53 Terici/Dino/Trish

I forgot shes 3 next year i cant wait to see how they do

Sunni

12:13:18 Sunni bunny

The match looks really good, and hopefully the cost will be colorful. I am excited for you XD

12:11:59 Chey / Star

Sunni
That's kind of what I was thinking
The match looks solid plus it has the chance for frame and tobi

Sunni

12:09:56 Sunni bunny

Star I think it's worth the gamble

12:08:49 Chey / Star

Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
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Sunni

12:07:06 Sunni bunny

Geek if it helps you cope, losing someone is all ways painful.
It takes time to heal, and drawing is a good coping mechanism.
Am sorry for your loss, but I all ways tell myself.
It was an honor to know them, and be their friend.

Transformers Acres

12:04:58 Geek, Eek

I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine

Sunni

12:04:46 Sunni bunny

Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:24 Arctic Katz

Oops I meant Geek

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:12 Arctic Katz

Send me a PM. I am falling asleep, Gerk

Sunni

12:03:18 Sunni bunny

She loved cuddling in my arm, but my hand is numb.

Glacier Bay Cove

12:03:18 Arctic Katz

I feel for you, Geek. What did your puppy look like

Sunni

12:02:54 Sunni bunny

Help I am trapped by a cat.

Moonrose Magic

12:00:43 🎀 Diva

I like the sort of melted caramel brindle look

Moonrose Magic

11:59:28 🎀 Diva

Brindle can't be bred for, breeding 2 brindle together gives like 0.01% more probability or so, otherwise its absolute luck

Dreamcatcher Farms

11:57:56

Chat my fake nails arent coming off help

Checkers Catch

11:55:37

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12:23:52 Terici/Dino/Trish

My fingers are crossed for you! I hope she's nice to

Valhalla Acreage

12:21:12 Eivor

-HEE Click-
I'm excited for this I'm using a blue glass on this pair

12:17:04 Chey / Star

Trish
I'm very nervous to breed her 😬
I will be svenning her as my first match so hopefully she is nice

12:13:53 Terici/Dino/Trish

I forgot shes 3 next year i cant wait to see how they do

Sunni

12:13:18 Sunni bunny

The match looks really good, and hopefully the cost will be colorful. I am excited for you XD

12:11:59 Chey / Star

Sunni
That's kind of what I was thinking
The match looks solid plus it has the chance for frame and tobi

Sunni

12:09:56 Sunni bunny

Star I think it's worth the gamble

12:08:49 Chey / Star

Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
-HEE Click-

Sunni

12:07:06 Sunni bunny

Transformers Acres

12:04:58 Geek, Eek

I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine

Sunni

12:04:46 Sunni bunny

Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:24 Arctic Katz

Oops I meant Geek

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:12 Arctic Katz

Send me a PM. I am falling asleep, Gerk

Sunni

12:03:18 Sunni bunny

She loved cuddling in my arm, but my hand is numb.

Glacier Bay Cove

12:03:18 Arctic Katz

I feel for you, Geek. What did your puppy look like

Sunni

12:02:54 Sunni bunny

Help I am trapped by a cat.

Moonrose Magic

12:00:43 🎀 Diva

I like the sort of melted caramel brindle look

Moonrose Magic

11:59:28 🎀 Diva

Brindle can't be bred for, breeding 2 brindle together gives like 0.01% more probability or so, otherwise its absolute luck

Dreamcatcher Farms

11:57:56

Chat my fake nails arent coming off help

Checkers Catch

11:55:37

Wish*

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March 14, 2018 01:51 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/411yx0ki9/CONTEST2.jpg

This is my latest. I actually smudged it! And I think it turned out good BUT that is just me. If you think there is anything that would have made this better/ you would change PLEASE (!) let me know!

Edited at March 14, 2018 01:51 PM by Ruby Quater Horses

March 14, 2018 01:54 PM

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You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

March 14, 2018 01:56 PM

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Trinity Equine said:
You did a nice job cutting it out. However the tail looks really small. And I think the mane could use some fly aways. You did a good job smudging as well. Nice a light ;) The only other thing is probably try to match the horse and the background more.

Thank you! Will remember all that an the next one! xD

March 14, 2018 02:00 PM

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The face isnt really standing out and its super blurry. Try drawing in the eyes and doing highlights would make it a bit better. The mane and tail are also flat looking adding highlights will help that as well.

March 14, 2018 02:07 PM