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Sunni

11:51:48 Sunni bunny

Cove Oh my XD I know them cats hated that.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:51:32 Arctic Katz

Yea I am fine with that, Sunni

Glacier Bay Cove

11:51:12 Arctic Katz

One of my cousins used to baptise the barn cats on the farm owned by her parents

Sunni

11:51:01 Sunni bunny

I wanna see if when you're down is that's okay,

Glacier Bay Cove

11:50:25 Arctic Katz

Tomorrow I will also try picking a background for my art project

Sunni

11:49:49 Sunni bunny

I was in kindergarten

Sunni

11:49:37 Sunni bunny

Cove I was allergic to cats when I was young but I didn't care XD.
I would beg for a cat, and rub my face on them.
I even stole the neighbors cat.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:49:13 Arctic Katz

Also calling it a night, I will be back in the chat room tomorrow morning and afternoon. Looking forward to the evening trivia game

Sunni

11:48:40 Sunni bunny

Allergies suck, oh flea dandruff makes me stuffy like a cold.
Luckily it doesn't happen often.
I try And treat the yard and house along with medicine for the dogs.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:48:00 Arctic Katz

My younger sister and some of her sons are allergic to my cats

Glacier Bay Cove

11:47:08 Arctic Katz

I hate having allergies

Sunni

11:46:53 Sunni bunny

I love garlic,

Glacier Bay Cove

11:45:33 Arctic Katz

Night, Ally

Glacier Bay Cove

11:45:13 Arctic Katz

Parmesan cheese and garlic pizza sauces are also great on a pizza

Sunni

11:44:18 Sunni bunny

Ally good night I should be in bed but I gotta show my horses.

Sunni

11:43:56 Sunni bunny

Cove if I was allergic I would probably still eat them, id give my mom a thumbs up while choking XD.
I am only allergic to amoxicillin.
I rash out and get sick.

MakeEm Fancy

11:43:51 Ally 💜

Welp Im exhausted and need sleep 🫠 Night everyone!

Glacier Bay Cove

11:43:23 Arctic Katz

Cream cheese bacon, Here I come, lol

Sunni

11:43:03 Sunni bunny

Cove ranch might be good too, I had one with a ranch base actually was really good.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:42:39 Arctic Katz

You are making me cry, Sunni, I love pineapple but I am allergic to it

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Sunni

11:51:48 Sunni bunny

Cove Oh my XD I know them cats hated that.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:51:32 Arctic Katz

Yea I am fine with that, Sunni

Glacier Bay Cove

11:51:12 Arctic Katz

One of my cousins used to baptise the barn cats on the farm owned by her parents

Sunni

11:51:01 Sunni bunny

I wanna see if when you're down is that's okay,

Glacier Bay Cove

11:50:25 Arctic Katz

Tomorrow I will also try picking a background for my art project

Sunni

11:49:49 Sunni bunny

I was in kindergarten

Sunni

11:49:37 Sunni bunny

Cove I was allergic to cats when I was young but I didn't care XD.
I would beg for a cat, and rub my face on them.
I even stole the neighbors cat.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:49:13 Arctic Katz

Also calling it a night, I will be back in the chat room tomorrow morning and afternoon. Looking forward to the evening trivia game

Sunni

11:48:40 Sunni bunny

Allergies suck, oh flea dandruff makes me stuffy like a cold.
Luckily it doesn't happen often.
I try And treat the yard and house along with medicine for the dogs.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:48:00 Arctic Katz

My younger sister and some of her sons are allergic to my cats

Glacier Bay Cove

11:47:08 Arctic Katz

I hate having allergies

Sunni

11:46:53 Sunni bunny

I love garlic,

Glacier Bay Cove

11:45:33 Arctic Katz

Night, Ally

Glacier Bay Cove

11:45:13 Arctic Katz

Parmesan cheese and garlic pizza sauces are also great on a pizza

Sunni

11:44:18 Sunni bunny

Ally good night I should be in bed but I gotta show my horses.

Sunni

11:43:56 Sunni bunny

Cove if I was allergic I would probably still eat them, id give my mom a thumbs up while choking XD.
I am only allergic to amoxicillin.
I rash out and get sick.

MakeEm Fancy

11:43:51 Ally 💜

Welp Im exhausted and need sleep 🫠 Night everyone!

Glacier Bay Cove

11:43:23 Arctic Katz

Cream cheese bacon, Here I come, lol

Sunni

11:43:03 Sunni bunny

Cove ranch might be good too, I had one with a ranch base actually was really good.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:42:39 Arctic Katz

You are making me cry, Sunni, I love pineapple but I am allergic to it

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Critique

July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

Critique

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

Critique

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

Fox Crest Manor

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

Critique

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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