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Sweet Valley
08:06:11 Anna/Jewel
Oof I can imagine
Angels angels
08:04:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My college has so many different parking decks and I hate changing which one I am in lol. It is so nerve wracking trying to learn how to get to it and the layout of it
Sweet Valley
08:02:08 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
My other beautiful 1/1 filly. Bred her this past RO
London Estates
08:01:25 Rainy/Fritzi
thank you both :D
Sweet Valley
08:00:48 Anna/Jewel
Rainy- wow beautiful too! And a filly. All anyone could ask for!
Ravenwood Farm
08:00:22 
Congrats Rainy!
Sweet Valley
07:59:37 Anna/Jewel
Chase- wow she's beautiful
London Estates
07:59:05 Rainy/Fritzi
yesss bred my first WW today !! -HEE Click-
Roan Oak Ridge
07:58:09 Chase
I got this pretty 1/1 filly earlier -HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
07:54:52 Anna/Jewel
The first 3 both parents were 1/1 but the last one the one parent wasn't even rated!
Roan Oak Ridge
07:51:35 Chase
Those are beautiful, Jewel!
Sweet Valley
07:43:32 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
oo
Sweet Valley
07:31:43 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
AND another one. I am good at 1/1, bad at EWE
Sweet Valley
07:30:00 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
Bam
-HEE Click-
Bam

two 1/1s right there! :)
Lavender Hollow
07:25:18 ⁕ ivy ⁕
Who’s ready for our pretty much daily storytime
Sweet Valley
07:24:28 Anna/Jewel
Angel- good luck
Tamarack Mountain
07:00:17 Opal
good luck!
Tamarack Mountain
06:59:34 Opal
noy ? don't type in the dark lol
Angels angels
06:59:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wish me luck. Fall semester starts today lol these classes are supposed to be hard but I am really excited about them
Tamarack Mountain
06:58:24 Opal
noy bad for an E

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Sweet Valley
08:06:11 Anna/Jewel
Oof I can imagine
Angels angels
08:04:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
My college has so many different parking decks and I hate changing which one I am in lol. It is so nerve wracking trying to learn how to get to it and the layout of it
Sweet Valley
08:02:08 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
My other beautiful 1/1 filly. Bred her this past RO
London Estates
08:01:25 Rainy/Fritzi
thank you both :D
Sweet Valley
08:00:48 Anna/Jewel
Rainy- wow beautiful too! And a filly. All anyone could ask for!
Ravenwood Farm
08:00:22 
Congrats Rainy!
Sweet Valley
07:59:37 Anna/Jewel
Chase- wow she's beautiful
London Estates
07:59:05 Rainy/Fritzi
yesss bred my first WW today !! -HEE Click-
Roan Oak Ridge
07:58:09 Chase
I got this pretty 1/1 filly earlier -HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
07:54:52 Anna/Jewel
The first 3 both parents were 1/1 but the last one the one parent wasn't even rated!
Roan Oak Ridge
07:51:35 Chase
Those are beautiful, Jewel!
Sweet Valley
07:43:32 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
oo
Sweet Valley
07:31:43 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
AND another one. I am good at 1/1, bad at EWE
Sweet Valley
07:30:00 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
Bam
-HEE Click-
Bam

two 1/1s right there! :)
Lavender Hollow
07:25:18 ⁕ ivy ⁕
Who’s ready for our pretty much daily storytime
Sweet Valley
07:24:28 Anna/Jewel
Angel- good luck
Tamarack Mountain
07:00:17 Opal
good luck!
Tamarack Mountain
06:59:34 Opal
noy ? don't type in the dark lol
Angels angels
06:59:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wish me luck. Fall semester starts today lol these classes are supposed to be hard but I am really excited about them
Tamarack Mountain
06:58:24 Opal
noy bad for an E

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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