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Sweet Valley
06:18:01 Anna/Jewel
Fanta- wow
Angel- oki
Angels angels
06:17:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
I have a WEW 1/1 but only because brindle lol
Fantasy Horses
06:16:51 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
Oh, the royal "we"
Angels angels
06:16:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah the LBs are saturated with sabino so we are just trying to breed it out and breed in some other patterns instead
Fantasy Horses
06:16:03 Fantasy | Fanta
Anna
I have a EEW 1/1 and I have no clue what to do with him lol
Fantasy Horses
06:15:44 Fantasy | Fanta
Anna
Yeah I like colors too, just not sabino :P I don't mind it enough to cull them only if they have it, though.
Sweet Valley
06:15:24 Anna/Jewel
I have a couple EEE mares, an EEW, an WEP, etc
Sweet Valley
06:14:48 Anna/Jewel
Fanta- well I like colors lol. I just have too many 1/1 colts...
Sweet Valley
06:14:29 Anna/Jewel
*About the plague
Fantasy Horses
06:14:26 Fantasy | Fanta
Anna
Oh, I just think there's too much of it.
Sweet Valley
06:14:17 Anna/Jewel
I am going to be like Lucille Ball in I Love Lucy. "Eeeeewwww"
Sweet Valley
06:13:51 Anna/Jewel
Fanta- whats wrong with Sabino
Angels angels
06:13:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fun
There was a case of the plague in California
Sweet Valley
06:13:13 Anna/Jewel
I have 3 straws from a WWE stud.
I have 2 straws from a WWE
I have 2 straws from a different WWW
I have 1 straw from another WWW
I have another straw from a different WWW... I am HOPING FOR LUCK
Fantasy Horses
06:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta
I didn't expect them to be only 20k, wow!
Angels angels
06:11:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fanta
We can hope lol
Fantasy Horses
06:11:22 Fantasy | Fanta
I hope you dodge the sabino and roan :P Probably gonna get it since they both have both but it's okay
Sweet Valley
06:11:01 Anna/Jewel
Angel
Fanta-
Crossing my fingers. I have a straw from that boy so...
Fantasy Horses
06:10:31 Fantasy | Fanta
Anna
Ooh that's pretty good!
Angels angels
06:10:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ooo that is a good match Anna! I hope you get the splash

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Sweet Valley
06:18:01 Anna/Jewel
Fanta- wow
Angel- oki
Angels angels
06:17:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
I have a WEW 1/1 but only because brindle lol
Fantasy Horses
06:16:51 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
Oh, the royal "we"
Angels angels
06:16:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah the LBs are saturated with sabino so we are just trying to breed it out and breed in some other patterns instead
Fantasy Horses
06:16:03 Fantasy | Fanta
Anna
I have a EEW 1/1 and I have no clue what to do with him lol
Fantasy Horses
06:15:44 Fantasy | Fanta
Anna
Yeah I like colors too, just not sabino :P I don't mind it enough to cull them only if they have it, though.
Sweet Valley
06:15:24 Anna/Jewel
I have a couple EEE mares, an EEW, an WEP, etc
Sweet Valley
06:14:48 Anna/Jewel
Fanta- well I like colors lol. I just have too many 1/1 colts...
Sweet Valley
06:14:29 Anna/Jewel
*About the plague
Fantasy Horses
06:14:26 Fantasy | Fanta
Anna
Oh, I just think there's too much of it.
Sweet Valley
06:14:17 Anna/Jewel
I am going to be like Lucille Ball in I Love Lucy. "Eeeeewwww"
Sweet Valley
06:13:51 Anna/Jewel
Fanta- whats wrong with Sabino
Angels angels
06:13:18 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fun
There was a case of the plague in California
Sweet Valley
06:13:13 Anna/Jewel
I have 3 straws from a WWE stud.
I have 2 straws from a WWE
I have 2 straws from a different WWW
I have 1 straw from another WWW
I have another straw from a different WWW... I am HOPING FOR LUCK
Fantasy Horses
06:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta
I didn't expect them to be only 20k, wow!
Angels angels
06:11:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fanta
We can hope lol
Fantasy Horses
06:11:22 Fantasy | Fanta
I hope you dodge the sabino and roan :P Probably gonna get it since they both have both but it's okay
Sweet Valley
06:11:01 Anna/Jewel
Angel
Fanta-
Crossing my fingers. I have a straw from that boy so...
Fantasy Horses
06:10:31 Fantasy | Fanta
Anna
Ooh that's pretty good!
Angels angels
06:10:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ooo that is a good match Anna! I hope you get the splash

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The Official Art Critique Forum October 20, 2019 04:40 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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BreezieM30w RIDs said:
I feel like I keep pushing a lot, but I'm in an art mood! Thoughts on this one?

https://i.postimg.cc/PxRvpzr1/Untitled94.jpg



It looks great! I really like the overall composition and placement.
What I noticed that looked a little odd to me were the lower hind limbs and the back hooves. They look fragile and tiny, I am not sure why it could be the cutting or the glowing outline. The other thing that looks a little distracting from the horse is the wide light outline that is around the cave and the horse itself. Personally I like outlining with a thinner harder brush to subtly add contrast and bring attention to the horse.

The Official Art Critique Forum October 20, 2019 09:05 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Golden Hall Stables said:


BreezieM30w RIDs said:
I feel like I keep pushing a lot, but I'm in an art mood! Thoughts on this one?

https://i.postimg.cc/PxRvpzr1/Untitled94.jpg



It looks great! I really like the overall composition and placement.
What I noticed that looked a little odd to me were the lower hind limbs and the back hooves. They look fragile and tiny, I am not sure why it could be the cutting or the glowing outline. The other thing that looks a little distracting from the horse is the wide light outline that is around the cave and the horse itself. Personally I like outlining with a thinner harder brush to subtly add contrast and bring attention to the horse.




Awesome! Thanks for the feedback! Is this a little better?

https://i.postimg.cc/Z5kH5QHP/Untitled94-1.jpg

Edited at October 20, 2019 09:06 PM by BreezieM30w RIDs
The Official Art Critique Forum October 21, 2019 12:51 AM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
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Golden Hall Stables said:
This is my most recent piece
https://i.postimg.cc/sg5KmK57/Moving-In-Stereo.jpg

I am feeling stuck currently so yeah...
critique as hard as you feel like!


Overall this is a very availing peice,the mane/tail looks very nice,the eye is good ,and he body prep is nice too!it just seems too dark for the back ground , create a new layer (one above the mane and tail too) ,eyedrop the sky color ,maybe make it either brighter or more yellow ,then draw a fully opaque line over where you when the light streak.make the layer anything under the subtitle lighten (or which ever one you feel is right) and lower the opacity. This way the partially darkness will make alot of sense

Edited at October 21, 2019 12:52 AM by Raven Hollow Elite
The Official Art Critique Forum October 21, 2019 03:01 PM


Diamanté
 
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I made this set for a contest, and it didn’t win. So firstly, critique? I know the hair isn’t the best, but other than that... And secondly, what SB would do you guys recommend?

https://i.postimg.cc/13x4rCWm/Jelly-avi.png

https://i.postimg.cc/7Yrfgttx/jellyfish-ret.png

Edited at October 21, 2019 03:02 PM by Diamanté
The Official Art Critique Forum October 22, 2019 12:42 PM

Former Stable
 
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I love this altogether,it's a very nice set,the thing I notice most is the eye (mainly on the avi) it is a bad idea to use a dot as I highlight
Create a clipping layer and use an air brush,because of the surrounding light,use a light grey ish blue (nearly white but with some colour) and airbrush the highlight from where ever the light source is
The Official Art Critique Forum October 24, 2019 05:25 AM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/FFxGyqtq/IMG-20191024-105233-894.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/CLPNtqxs/Untitled317-1.jpg

Some critique on thie contest entry is appreciated :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 26, 2019 12:50 AM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
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<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20675140">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20675140</a>

I just did this for my girl, I think it's one of my best so far and it's been a hot minute since I last did art. What do y'all think?? :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 26, 2019 01:04 AM


Aussie Wattles
 
Posts: 851
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Callisteia Equine -
Overall thatÂ’s a super nice piece. Great concept, horse fits nicely into the background and lighting is all spot on.
The mane and tail are gorgeous and are amazingly done, I really cant fault it.
The only things that seem to be a little bit off are the shadow and the smudging on the horse. The shadow is placed weÂ’ll however it just seems super sharp. Gaussian blurring the shadows layer can help make it look a lot softer. As for the horse, it seems a little over smudged to me. Especially where the light shines over itÂ’s back.
Overall very nicely done!
The Official Art Critique Forum October 26, 2019 01:12 AM

Former Stable
 
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Thank you Aussie!
I do agree that I went a little too rough on my smudging :/ but once I did it, I was kicked out of my program and I had no way of undoing it lol. I also was thinking of softening the shadow but I dont know what Gaussian blurring is... I use Autodesk Sketchbook and GIMP, is that available on either of those??
The Official Art Critique Forum October 26, 2019 01:20 AM


Tanglewood
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/h4zK9xrx/Spoopy.png

I know, I know, this is really boring. But I just can't quite find that idea to give it spark. Also, thoughts?

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