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Oh you're cute -HEE Click-
Tamarack Mountain
07:05:56 Opal
well she is pretty -Click-
Rubygem
06:58:18 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
well im gonna go bye
Rubygem
06:57:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
thanks (:
ZequineZ
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Ooo that’s a cutie Ruby
Rubygem
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-HEE Click-

Oooo a 1 of 90 color rating:D
ZequineZ
06:39:39 ZEZ - ZZ
Yeah first one is the final, I just might edit how I’ve placed the credit a smidge
Second one was just for funnies lol
Sweet Valley
06:38:02 Anna/Jewel
Zwquine- I like the first one
ZequineZ
06:17:10 ZEZ - ZZ
Procrastinated so hard I did this
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Also lol
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Nightingales Ridge
05:05:11 Issy
Wow Sierra hes gorgeous
Nightingales Ridge
05:04:11 Issy
Very nice Brody 😊
Calela Eventing
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Gilded Roses
01:27:29 River / Brody
Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
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Winter Curtain
11:43:11 Win | Water
Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.
Red Horizon Ranch
11:42:03 Red
He's so pretty Win
Winter Curtain
11:38:37 Win | Water
Look at this guy -HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:38:08 Win | Water
o
Sierra Views Stable
11:37:44 AZ
Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it
Winter Curtain
11:35:00 Win | Water
How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

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Thicc Acres
07:06:02 
Oh you're cute -HEE Click-
Tamarack Mountain
07:05:56 Opal
well she is pretty -Click-
Rubygem
06:58:18 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
well im gonna go bye
Rubygem
06:57:50 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
thanks (:
ZequineZ
06:56:04 ZEZ - ZZ
Ooo that’s a cutie Ruby
Rubygem
06:53:48 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
-HEE Click-

Oooo a 1 of 90 color rating:D
ZequineZ
06:39:39 ZEZ - ZZ
Yeah first one is the final, I just might edit how I’ve placed the credit a smidge
Second one was just for funnies lol
Sweet Valley
06:38:02 Anna/Jewel
Zwquine- I like the first one
ZequineZ
06:17:10 ZEZ - ZZ
Procrastinated so hard I did this
-Click-

Also lol
-Click-
Golden Rose
05:05:12 Rose
Oh hello -HEE Click- <3
Nightingales Ridge
05:05:11 Issy
Wow Sierra hes gorgeous
Nightingales Ridge
05:04:11 Issy
Very nice Brody 😊
Calela Eventing
01:30:30 Cali
Hey Win
Gilded Roses
01:27:29 River / Brody
Well your not champagne but you are pretty O.o
-HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:43:11 Win | Water
Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.
Red Horizon Ranch
11:42:03 Red
He's so pretty Win
Winter Curtain
11:38:37 Win | Water
Look at this guy -HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:38:08 Win | Water
o
Sierra Views Stable
11:37:44 AZ
Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it
Winter Curtain
11:35:00 Win | Water
How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

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The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:08 PM


Stonecroft
 
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Cassa Belle said:
https://i.postimg.cc/bvR6qWRR/Untitled18-20191106181912.png

:D



For this piece, I would recommend bringing a light source in (the lightning provides one, so you can play off that) and highlight parts of the horse that are affected by the lighting. As it is, the horse is dark and a little hard to make out. You can fix this by adding small highlights or lightening the whole piece a bit to bring the horse to the center of attention. Personally, I would add *light* highlights to the nose, neck, and *slightly* stronger highlights to the back, and a few on the tail.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:15 PM

Former Stable
 
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BreezieM30w RIDs said:


Oak valley said:
https://i.postimg.cc/bvNLcD60/Untitled127.png

My first attempt at lineart, thoughts??


It looks good! Personally I would use a blue tool so that the shading is not so harsh. Also, be sure to clean up afterwards using an eraser. It looks a bit messy since the coloring goes outside the lines.

Thank you! Lol I was being a bit lazy by not cleaning it up. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:19 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/Qd904Zb1/Untitled111-min.jpg

Thoughts?? Sorry the quality kinda sucks XD
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 01:41 PM


Wolfcreek
 
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BreezieM30w RIDs said:
https://i.postimg.cc/Qd904Zb1/Untitled111-min.jpg

Thoughts?? Sorry the quality kinda sucks XD


Nice composition! The first thing I see is off is the lighting. The direction of the light don't match on the horse and on the background. You can fix it easily by mirroring either the horse or the bg. Also try to add more flow to the mane and tail, those look a bit stiff.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 11, 2019 02:04 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=17&t=33061
Looking for some help please <3
(i haven't forgotten. About critique just doing some stuff atm, will get to them ASAP)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 12, 2019 05:57 PM


Tranquility
 
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Yellowtail Ranch said:
https://i.ibb.co/ngcFyyG/Kia.jpg

I use ibis paint but any help/advice would be appreciated. :D

I used this image for reference to the pose but not the color. The color was all me as well as painting. This was my first time doing something like this but it was very refreshing from the normal manips so I plan on making more.

https://www.deviantart.com/blissfully-blind/art/Horse-Stock-53-162205611

I didn't like how the original mane and tail was so I brought them to more attention. I don't exactly like the super wispy mane so I just did the basic mane/tail if ya know what I mean. I did the markings after I shaded and highlighted which I wholly regretted. Lol. It was so much extra shading/highlighting. Yes this horse is supposed to be mostly realistic with the exception of markings.

Is there anything you don't like about it? Anything you love? What should I try to improve? Any tips and tricks that could help? I do plan on making more only this time with more realistic mane/tail. Any way to paint manes/tails?

Thankyou in advance! :D


Any more thoughts on this?
The Official Art Critique Forum November 16, 2019 12:11 AM


Tanglewood
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png

Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 10:42 AM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/C1bWkpY3/3-F3-A7-AD2-85-C1-4-E77-A873-82-DCF62-E95-F5.jpg

Thoughts??
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 11:09 AM


Tanglewood
 
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Breezie Rose said:
https://i.postimg.cc/C1bWkpY3/3-F3-A7-AD2-85-C1-4-E77-A873-82-DCF62-E95-F5.jpg

Thoughts??


I like it :) The quality could be improved but that probably isn't your mistake. Also, the fairy lights seem to appear from nowhere. Maybe make them into a ring around the horse's neck?
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 04:07 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Tanglewood said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png

Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks


It looks good. I would give the horse a more Orange ish lighting or over shade if you know what I mean.

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