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Sleepwalker Centre
09:17:18 Walker
Stud’s last year! EEE-Sub WB stud 1/2xx, reduced live cover fee + no requirements

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Lunalovegood
09:11:34 Loony
Still need gone (Most at only 200 ebs!)
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Bermuda Triangle
09:04:33 Lost
EEE+ stallions with color
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Also have a mare barn eee+
MakeEm Fancy
08:58:18 Ally 💜
EEE wild KNN mare
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Horse Haven Stables
08:29:30 HHS⎹ Lyla
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Auction!
Includes:
WWE SH Stallion
EWE Combos
EEE Mares
SD W Jumping stallions
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194 Maiden WWW SH first and second embryos for auction! Check this forum out for more info!
Port Royal Equines
08:20:57 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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Price drop on these PPP+ brave mares! All 1k. They need to go.
Angels angels
07:22:18 Will Buy Brindles!!
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Need these gone pm offers
Sorrelwood Acres
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ISO of a Appy PON Stallion that is already rated and is rated PEE(any order) or PEP(any order) that is 10k or under please PM if you have one for sale
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Critiques? November 21, 2017 11:01 PM


Casanova
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

Former Stable
 
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OMG!! Love It!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM


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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!




Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!


Thanks <3
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:38 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 04:53 PM


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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)


I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:23 PM


Hollow Tree Acres
 
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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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