Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 193   Season: Fall   
$: 0
Forecast: Sunny
Forecast:
Sat 04:01pm  
Stables Online:  108 
Chatbox
Black Meadow Estate
03:57:07 Meadow
dose DS9 Rathlóriel fit her i just want something good from her
Cappuccino
03:53:43 Heyy it's Capp
Either of the DS9 boys personally id go with the ABLB #4 for color purposes XD
Black Meadow Estate
03:51:40 Meadow
i have 200K just not sure if shes worth it to spend 200K on
The Joker
03:51:22 Ari <3
Oohwa
Cappuccino
03:49:58 Heyy it's Capp
Budget?
Black Meadow Estate
03:49:30 Meadow
-HEE Click- i need stud help for this girl
Cappuccino
03:48:09 Heyy it's Capp
LOL RF is on a roll here -HEE Click-
The Joker
03:47:45 Ari <3
Ooh I love that
Running Rock Springs
03:46:21 
Congrats Cap! She's beautiful!
Ravenwood Farm
03:45:40 
Oooo pretty!
Cappuccino
03:44:31 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- ouuuu *.*
Lucky Strides
03:42:03 Luck
Ugh I’m so impatient to wait until Monday for breed approvals
Glacier Bay Cove
03:40:37 Arctic Katz
Who should I make art for, next
Ravenwood Farm
03:35:56 
Congrats Ari!
Ravenwood Farm
03:34:49 
Ah that makes sense. I also remembered now about the limited amount of embryos per month
The Joker
03:34:03 Ari <3
Thank you!
Lucky Strides
03:31:06 Luck
Oo Lovely Joker!
The Joker
03:28:53 Ari <3
Oh dang šŸ‘€
-HEE Click-
Cappuccino
03:28:47 Heyy it's Capp
Manageability
The Joker
03:28:06 Ari <3
I do it to keep things organised and prioritise different mares on different accounts

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests
Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Black Meadow Estate
03:57:07 Meadow
dose DS9 Rathlóriel fit her i just want something good from her
Cappuccino
03:53:43 Heyy it's Capp
Either of the DS9 boys personally id go with the ABLB #4 for color purposes XD
Black Meadow Estate
03:51:40 Meadow
i have 200K just not sure if shes worth it to spend 200K on
The Joker
03:51:22 Ari <3
Oohwa
Cappuccino
03:49:58 Heyy it's Capp
Budget?
Black Meadow Estate
03:49:30 Meadow
-HEE Click- i need stud help for this girl
Cappuccino
03:48:09 Heyy it's Capp
LOL RF is on a roll here -HEE Click-
The Joker
03:47:45 Ari <3
Ooh I love that
Running Rock Springs
03:46:21 
Congrats Cap! She's beautiful!
Ravenwood Farm
03:45:40 
Oooo pretty!
Cappuccino
03:44:31 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- ouuuu *.*
Lucky Strides
03:42:03 Luck
Ugh I’m so impatient to wait until Monday for breed approvals
Glacier Bay Cove
03:40:37 Arctic Katz
Who should I make art for, next
Ravenwood Farm
03:35:56 
Congrats Ari!
Ravenwood Farm
03:34:49 
Ah that makes sense. I also remembered now about the limited amount of embryos per month
The Joker
03:34:03 Ari <3
Thank you!
Lucky Strides
03:31:06 Luck
Oo Lovely Joker!
The Joker
03:28:53 Ari <3
Oh dang šŸ‘€
-HEE Click-
Cappuccino
03:28:47 Heyy it's Capp
Manageability
The Joker
03:28:06 Ari <3
I do it to keep things organised and prioritise different mares on different accounts

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#106539
Give Award
Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
Posts: 2670
#106543
Give Award
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


Casanova
 
Posts: 1522
#106696
Give Award


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#106698
Give Award


Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! IĀ’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help
   1 

Refresh