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Versailles
04:43:28 Versa
DD,
It does! When parking spots run out at an event, I'm one of the people that can go to the dirt lot and shrug it off lol
Versailles
04:42:28 Versa
All cars have one. But this particular Jeep is built to flip and then continue on like nothing happened. Again, off-roading lol
Dash and Duchess
04:42:28 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, at least you can easily go off road! That'll come in handy sometime for sure lol
Hummingbird Meadows
04:41:55 Bird
@Versa, I don't think I could ever buy a car without a roll cage or other protectant. >.<
Versailles
04:41:23 Versa
The one I have IS pretty heavy, though. Outweighs my father's truck. Probably the battery. Hybrid. And the roll cage. It's built for off-road, so that roll cage is gosh dang *hefty*
Dash and Duchess
04:37:16 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, Ooo they definitely might be something to look into then!!
Versailles
04:34:45 Versa
Bird,
Nope. But I have a 2024. Not one of the old ones that are known for those problems.
Hummingbird Meadows
04:34:08 Bird
@Versa, I've heard Jeeps have a lot of maintenance issues? Have you found that to be true?
Versailles
04:33:32 Versa
DD,
They have some excellent lease options, too! Of all the cars I had looked at, my Jeep was literally the only one I could properly and painlessly afford lol
Dash and Duchess
04:32:39 DD | ~Squizard~
Wilf, I'm still so shocked I managed to get the slot *^* Charm's arts are so stunning!
Dash and Duchess
04:31:48 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, they do seem like great cars to customize!! Nor the current car I've been driving or the new car I'm looking at are particularly great for designing, but I honestly might reconsider because I would go crazy decorating a jeep lol!
Blue Diamond
04:31:47 Bluey
Same
Wolf Dancer
04:29:39 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
Dang! I'm so jealous! I would love to get Charm arts at some point lol
Versailles
04:29:21 Versa
DD,
Jeeps are wonderful for designing! I got a Jeep originally because it was most within my price capabilities. But then I grew to love it over time, and decided to really make it my own!
Dash and Duchess
04:28:09 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, oh my gosh xD I love that lol!! Your car sounds awesome looking!
Versailles
04:28:02 Versa
Bird,
Only for as long as they needed me. They took my name, statement, and kind of shoo'd me away. But they were very grateful
Dash and Duchess
04:26:55 DD | ~Squizard~
Wilf,
-HEE Click-
I love it so much!! I logged in right as charm opened a slot, and I had just sold a horse so I figured why not! XD
Versailles
04:26:53 Versa
DD,
Only because I was easy to spot. LOL. My front plate literally has a cat and says "Meowdy", meanwhile my tire cover is a picture of my prior cat. All I had to do was follow the man while police recognized me lol
Hummingbird Meadows
04:26:11 Bird
@Versa, did you watch the police pull him over? 👀
Wolf Dancer
04:25:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
No! Show me!!!

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Versailles
04:43:28 Versa
DD,
It does! When parking spots run out at an event, I'm one of the people that can go to the dirt lot and shrug it off lol
Versailles
04:42:28 Versa
All cars have one. But this particular Jeep is built to flip and then continue on like nothing happened. Again, off-roading lol
Dash and Duchess
04:42:28 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, at least you can easily go off road! That'll come in handy sometime for sure lol
Hummingbird Meadows
04:41:55 Bird
@Versa, I don't think I could ever buy a car without a roll cage or other protectant. >.<
Versailles
04:41:23 Versa
The one I have IS pretty heavy, though. Outweighs my father's truck. Probably the battery. Hybrid. And the roll cage. It's built for off-road, so that roll cage is gosh dang *hefty*
Dash and Duchess
04:37:16 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, Ooo they definitely might be something to look into then!!
Versailles
04:34:45 Versa
Bird,
Nope. But I have a 2024. Not one of the old ones that are known for those problems.
Hummingbird Meadows
04:34:08 Bird
@Versa, I've heard Jeeps have a lot of maintenance issues? Have you found that to be true?
Versailles
04:33:32 Versa
DD,
They have some excellent lease options, too! Of all the cars I had looked at, my Jeep was literally the only one I could properly and painlessly afford lol
Dash and Duchess
04:32:39 DD | ~Squizard~
Wilf, I'm still so shocked I managed to get the slot *^* Charm's arts are so stunning!
Dash and Duchess
04:31:48 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, they do seem like great cars to customize!! Nor the current car I've been driving or the new car I'm looking at are particularly great for designing, but I honestly might reconsider because I would go crazy decorating a jeep lol!
Blue Diamond
04:31:47 Bluey
Same
Wolf Dancer
04:29:39 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
Dang! I'm so jealous! I would love to get Charm arts at some point lol
Versailles
04:29:21 Versa
DD,
Jeeps are wonderful for designing! I got a Jeep originally because it was most within my price capabilities. But then I grew to love it over time, and decided to really make it my own!
Dash and Duchess
04:28:09 DD | ~Squizard~
Versa, oh my gosh xD I love that lol!! Your car sounds awesome looking!
Versailles
04:28:02 Versa
Bird,
Only for as long as they needed me. They took my name, statement, and kind of shoo'd me away. But they were very grateful
Dash and Duchess
04:26:55 DD | ~Squizard~
Wilf,
-HEE Click-
I love it so much!! I logged in right as charm opened a slot, and I had just sold a horse so I figured why not! XD
Versailles
04:26:53 Versa
DD,
Only because I was easy to spot. LOL. My front plate literally has a cat and says "Meowdy", meanwhile my tire cover is a picture of my prior cat. All I had to do was follow the man while police recognized me lol
Hummingbird Meadows
04:26:11 Bird
@Versa, did you watch the police pull him over? 👀
Wolf Dancer
04:25:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)
DD
No! Show me!!!

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The END September 23, 2018 08:04 PM

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<div align="center"> → C H A P T E R O N E ←
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<div align="left"> The wind blew through the forest. The night sky was covered in clouds. The air was thick and smelt gross. I ran through the forest, jumping over ditches, fallen trees or streams. I sucked the air in and out quickly. I came to a stop. Was I far enough away? Had I escaped it? Was I free? Even if I wanted to, I couldn't have run anymore. The adrenaline had worn off. I collapsed to the ground and leaned against a tree. Instantly, I fell asleep.
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<div align="left"> I awoke. I was back! I had been brought back! Wait, I heard the slick, raspy voices. <div align="left"> "Africa, Asia, Europe and Australia have been demolished," a muffled, non-human like voice echoed. "Where shall we strike next?"<div align="left"> "Canada," another voice responded. It had a superior ton to it. The word swept over me. Canada was my home country, my family lived there! I had just escaped this place and gotten back to the safety of my country, and now they we're going to destroy it along with everyone who lived there. Just like they had the other countries. They had promised me, though, they had promised. Suddenly a big hand grabbed me. I saw the big, glowing, beady eyes and the big, pointed tooth grin that stretched across it's face.<div align="left">
<div align="left"> "NO!" I jolted forward and found I was still in the deep, dense forest. But I wasn't alone. <div align="left">
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<div align="center">→ C H A P T E R T W O ←

<div align="left">I heard distance crunches on sticks and leaves on the forest floor. It was nearly morning, the sun was finding it's way up and over the mountains. I must be near British Columbia. The forests where thick, covered with moss and massive fallen trees, the ground shot up then eased back down.
<div align="left">I had to move. I jumped up, adrenaline the only thing keeping me going. I was about to cry. Fear, anger, sadness all welled up inside wanting to explode. I tried to swallow it and ran through the woods silently. I jumped a log only to find it led to a cliff that went straight down. I slid down the cliff trying to hold in the pain as branches and rocks scraped against my skin. I stopped and took a deep breath. Nothing was broken. Suddenly, something dawned on me. Where was I going? I was lost, obviously but where should I head to? I needed to find a city or even a small town. But those beasts are looking for me, I reminded myself, they would probably be searching cities already, holding people captive until they found me. Why me? Maybe because I knew how - I stopped myself from letting that thought expand. I hoisted myself up, finding my clothes were more torn than ever before and I was bleeding quite a lot. I ripped of a sleeve of my shirt, or what was left of my sleeve, and wrapped it around my leg then tied it tightly.
<div align="left">"Lets go," I whispered then ran again, almost aimlessly. Just running forward. <div align="left">
<div align="left">I reached a river where I jumped in, greedily sucking in the water, drinking as much as I could. I washed myself off as well then continued at a slow jog. My chest felt as if it had been stabbed, it ached with a burning pain. I could taste blood in my throat and my feet were so sore they had almost gone numb but that didn't stop me. Forward, forward, never look back. After a long time, I stopped at a tree to rest. I gasped air in and out trying to catch my breath. My hands were pale, the knuckles bright red. I could see my veins. I needed food and rest. I had blocked out the pain as I was running and it came in such a wave I fell to the ground and watched my vision slowly grow blurry and then almost black. Everything was cloudy, I was only half aware of my surroundings. I blinked once. When my eyes opened I saw my most brutal living nightmare in front of me. I tried to scream and kick but my body lay in a helpless, unresponsive heap.<div align="left">
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<div align="left" style="text-align: center;">→ C H A P T E R T H R E E ←<div align="left" style="text-align: center;">
<div align="left" style="text-align: left;">I watched as the beast picked me up with so little effort and began to carry to me. I didn't have to wonder where, I knew already. So many other unpleasant thoughts and emotions flooded my brain. Fear was biting at me and anger was screaming to be let out but still, my body lay unresponsive. I wanted to cry, the sting of tears crying to come out was becoming more noticeable. The beast kept carrying the way a groom would carry his bride. Finally I could lift my head and look at the ugly face of the beast above me. An alien. One of only thousands. These ugly, aliens where bald with slimy, pitch black skin. They had legs and torso like a normal human but the feet where like big duck feet and their arms were twisted. They could morph between hands, wings and tentacles. Their face had no mouth yet they spoke in raspy, un-human voices. The spot where the mouth should be was just slimy skin. They had a nose that was pushed into their face and big, massive, evil eyes. They stared at you and penetrated your deepest, darkest secrets. Standing at roughly just over 8ft, these giant monsters were incredibly strong and were quickly taking over the world. They had cut out WiFi, phone lines, satellites, anything people could contact each other with. What was remaining of humanity was currently oblivious. It had been two weeks since these beasts had captured me. Why? I had known what was going on and was about to tell and save the world. Now, they are forcing me to destroy it.
Edited at September 26, 2018 09:29 PM by Trinity Equine
The END September 23, 2018 08:05 PM

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Let me know if you want more :P
The END September 23, 2018 08:10 PM

Maple Valley Stable
 
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Ooh, yes! This is interesting!
The END September 23, 2018 08:55 PM

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Maple Valley Stable said:
Ooh, yes! This is interesting!

Thanks :) I'll begin a second chapter tomorrow :3
The END September 24, 2018 08:12 PM

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<div style="text-align: center;">New chapter added!
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<div style="text-align: center;">Let me know if you think I should continue :3
The END September 24, 2018 09:35 PM


The Seven Sins
 
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I'm enjoying. Love the details as when there isn't any, I get bored. Love how it flows together really well too <3
The END September 24, 2018 09:36 PM

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The Seven Sins said:
I'm enjoying. Love the details as when there isn't any, I get bored. Love how it flows together really well too <3

Thank you :D
The END September 26, 2018 08:45 PM


The Lady of Fangorn
 
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This is excellent! I always enjoy when a writer starts out giving lots of details, but really leaving you in the dark. Definitely will be following this beauty!
The END September 26, 2018 09:29 PM

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Dimrill Dale said:
This is excellent! I always enjoy when a writer starts out giving lots of details, but really leaving you in the dark. Definitely will be following this beauty!


Why, thank you! ^.^
The END September 26, 2018 09:30 PM

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New chapter added! Sorry its kinda short, its really late xP

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