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Mythological
08:31:29 Crowley
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Gemstone Stable
08:29:18 Snow❆Gem
@touya

Oh dear. *hugs*
Mythological
08:27:29 Crowley
Sorry Touya 😑
Gemstone Stable
08:23:04 Snow❆Gem
I'm gonna apply to a bakery for a local grocery chain.

'May also be required to write on cakes.' Is a part of the job listing. lol I misspell too often for my own liking. O.o
Gemstone Stable
08:19:03 Snow❆Gem
@ally

Thank you! :)
Touya
08:17:30 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Myth
Lol I'm half awake and my phone did t correct me. Me and my family have has a horrible week
MakeEm Fancy
08:16:40 Ally 💜
Good job! @Gem
Snow Stable
08:13:41 Snow❆Gem
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Mythological
08:10:27 Crowley
I'm now myrh
Greenheart Stables
08:09:14 Green|Gren|Grenlin
I am this close to loosing my mind on my brother, this little thing he has about having to do chores is getting to a point.
Touya
08:09:09 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Hi myrh
Touya
08:08:57 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Geez I can't type. Not sure lol
Touya
08:08:26 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Sure*
Touya
08:07:59 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
No ckye. Not sure who all has cats around here
Tempesta Ranch
08:06:03 
Any chance she just got lost somewhere in the neighborhood?
Mythological
08:04:41 Crowley
Hello
Touya
08:04:04 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Tempesta
She wouldnt have survived the heat outside, shes dark. I couldnt leave her out there. Its gonna be too halot today, over 85°f. She's got no fleas, no infections in her eyes or nose, no earmites, but shes a sweetheart though. I have 3 other cats ranging from 15 to 2 or 3. She tried to straight away bite my sister. My cousin has named her kiwi
Tempesta Ranch
07:58:59 
Two of my pretty fillies

-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
Hummingbird Meadows
07:55:15 Bird
How's it going DD?
Tempesta Ranch
07:55:04 
poor kitten - glad you took her in.

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Mythological
08:31:29 Crowley
Gem
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Gemstone Stable
08:29:18 Snow❆Gem
@touya

Oh dear. *hugs*
Mythological
08:27:29 Crowley
Sorry Touya 😑
Gemstone Stable
08:23:04 Snow❆Gem
I'm gonna apply to a bakery for a local grocery chain.

'May also be required to write on cakes.' Is a part of the job listing. lol I misspell too often for my own liking. O.o
Gemstone Stable
08:19:03 Snow❆Gem
@ally

Thank you! :)
Touya
08:17:30 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Myth
Lol I'm half awake and my phone did t correct me. Me and my family have has a horrible week
MakeEm Fancy
08:16:40 Ally 💜
Good job! @Gem
Snow Stable
08:13:41 Snow❆Gem
1844 Days

You have logged in 1844 days in a row.
You earned: 1100 Eden Bucks
Mythological
08:10:27 Crowley
I'm now myrh
Greenheart Stables
08:09:14 Green|Gren|Grenlin
I am this close to loosing my mind on my brother, this little thing he has about having to do chores is getting to a point.
Touya
08:09:09 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Hi myrh
Touya
08:08:57 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Geez I can't type. Not sure lol
Touya
08:08:26 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Sure*
Touya
08:07:59 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
No ckye. Not sure who all has cats around here
Tempesta Ranch
08:06:03 
Any chance she just got lost somewhere in the neighborhood?
Mythological
08:04:41 Crowley
Hello
Touya
08:04:04 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
Tempesta
She wouldnt have survived the heat outside, shes dark. I couldnt leave her out there. Its gonna be too halot today, over 85°f. She's got no fleas, no infections in her eyes or nose, no earmites, but shes a sweetheart though. I have 3 other cats ranging from 15 to 2 or 3. She tried to straight away bite my sister. My cousin has named her kiwi
Tempesta Ranch
07:58:59 
Two of my pretty fillies

-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
Hummingbird Meadows
07:55:15 Bird
How's it going DD?
Tempesta Ranch
07:55:04 
poor kitten - glad you took her in.

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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