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Mystic Stables
04:10:44 
hey! question, how do you go to your memorial garden and put horses in memory?
Nightingales Ridge
02:54:40 Issy
Hi Loonyy
Lunalovegood
02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Hey chat, How are ya’ll
Ponies heaven
01:16:07 Pera/ peral
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pandemoniu_m
12:21:26 pheezy
their art is gorgeous kiwi :0
Kiwi Mountains
12:13:07 Kiwi
It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
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Fantasy Horses
12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta
I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!
Fantasy Horses
12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta
DD
Oh absolutely :')
Dash and Duchess
12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT
Fantasy Horses
12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta
DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P
Dash and Duchess
12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~
Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!
Fantasy Horses
12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta
DD and KPH
Same here >_<
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Dash and Duchess
12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~
Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD
Twin Flames
12:04:20 Blaze
DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3
Dash and Duchess
12:02:58 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, Ooo good luck!! She's beautiful *^*
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Blaze, it is! I recommend it! <3
Twin Flames
12:00:48 Blaze
DD <3
I heard Gifyu is good! And similar to imgbb
KPH Equestrian
11:59:26 Rapcoon | Jester
DD
same >,>
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Dash and Duchess
11:56:09 DD | ~Squizard~
Blaze, Ooof! That sucks >.> if you want to try and switch gifyu works great! <3
Twin Flames
11:55:32 Blaze
Lens dump is making my want to jump off a cliff right now omfggg
Dash and Duchess
11:55:26 DD | ~Squizard~
Ooo i am getting so nervous for 4s coming up >.<
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Mystic Stables
04:10:44 
hey! question, how do you go to your memorial garden and put horses in memory?
Nightingales Ridge
02:54:40 Issy
Hi Loonyy
Lunalovegood
02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune
Hey chat, How are ya’ll
Ponies heaven
01:16:07 Pera/ peral
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
12:21:26 pheezy
their art is gorgeous kiwi :0
Kiwi Mountains
12:13:07 Kiwi
It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Fantasy Horses
12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta
I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!
Fantasy Horses
12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta
DD
Oh absolutely :')
Dash and Duchess
12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~
Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT
Fantasy Horses
12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta
DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P
Dash and Duchess
12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~
Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!
Fantasy Horses
12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta
DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~
Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD
Twin Flames
12:04:20 Blaze
DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3
Dash and Duchess
12:02:58 DD | ~Squizard~
KPH, Ooo good luck!! She's beautiful *^*
-
Blaze, it is! I recommend it! <3
Twin Flames
12:00:48 Blaze
DD <3
I heard Gifyu is good! And similar to imgbb
KPH Equestrian
11:59:26 Rapcoon | Jester
DD
same >,>
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
11:56:09 DD | ~Squizard~
Blaze, Ooof! That sucks >.> if you want to try and switch gifyu works great! <3
Twin Flames
11:55:32 Blaze
Lens dump is making my want to jump off a cliff right now omfggg
Dash and Duchess
11:55:26 DD | ~Squizard~
Ooo i am getting so nervous for 4s coming up >.<
-HEE Click-

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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