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 Glacier Bay Cove
06:39:26 Arctic Katz
Who else is almost ready for the stable raid event
Crestwood Eq.
06:38:53 Ivy / poison ivy
What i did was wrong
Revenge was the only thing on my tongue
But revenge for what
I was mad a you
And you couldn't decipher why

Every time that i tired to explain it
I didn't do it quite right
No i didn't do it quite right
So you gave up listening and i quit trying

I was a jerk
I went berserk
We went from friends to enemies
We dont talk anymore
Like two strangers on different sides of the street

I found out the hard way
That a five letter word can't fix a thing
Especially when it's as broken as us

Don't you realize that I still care about you?
because it's true. i really really do

I was a jerk
I went berserk
We went from friends to enemies
We dont talk anymore
Like two strangers on different sides of the street

--------

well, that's it so far.
Blue Diamond
06:38:13 Bluey
Issy
The HEE gods blessed you lol
Nightingales Ridge
06:36:40 Issy
How common is it that an elite x elite breeds a world class rating 🧐
Crestwood Eq.
06:33:57 Ivy / poison ivy
mk! lemme type them up
Ivory Coast
06:31:41 
Ivy
Me ^^
Niallator Acres
06:31:21 Ivy - Niallator side
i've almost finished my lyrics if anyone would care to listen
Glacier Bay Cove
06:29:16 Arctic Katz
Nice mare, Gemstone
Nightingales Ridge
06:28:26 Issy
Ooo Gemstone so beautiful!
Ivory Coast
06:27:04 
Only kept this girl cause of her color -HEE Click-
Galloping_Gems
06:26:06 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Woahhhhh his eyes are heterochromatic. I’ve never seen that in this game before
Glacier Bay Cove
06:24:04 Arctic Katz
As I rate them
Glacier Bay Cove
06:21:55 Arctic Katz
Not sure which of my three breeds will be nice to me
Wolf Dancer
06:21:13 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Eyrie
Nice! They were jerks to me >.>
Eyrie of the Stars
06:10:51 Eyrie
KNNs were pretty nice to me this party
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
FireStallionStables
06:06:22 FSS/Fire
then again this probably one of the best examples on why all of my awards are breeding awards
-HEE Click-
Gem Queens Estate
06:05:25 Snow❆Gem
OK, I'm gotta go for now. Enjoy the pretty boy!

-HEE Click-
FireStallionStables
06:04:25 FSS/Fire
i agree with the pretty part
Gem Queens Estate
06:00:08 Snow❆Gem
OK! I might be into the email I wanted to get into in the first place! O.o
Glacier Bay Cove
05:59:25 Arctic Katz
Wonderful KNN horses

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 Glacier Bay Cove
06:39:26 Arctic Katz
Who else is almost ready for the stable raid event
Crestwood Eq.
06:38:53 Ivy / poison ivy
What i did was wrong
Revenge was the only thing on my tongue
But revenge for what
I was mad a you
And you couldn't decipher why

Every time that i tired to explain it
I didn't do it quite right
No i didn't do it quite right
So you gave up listening and i quit trying

I was a jerk
I went berserk
We went from friends to enemies
We dont talk anymore
Like two strangers on different sides of the street

I found out the hard way
That a five letter word can't fix a thing
Especially when it's as broken as us

Don't you realize that I still care about you?
because it's true. i really really do

I was a jerk
I went berserk
We went from friends to enemies
We dont talk anymore
Like two strangers on different sides of the street

--------

well, that's it so far.
Blue Diamond
06:38:13 Bluey
Issy
The HEE gods blessed you lol
Nightingales Ridge
06:36:40 Issy
How common is it that an elite x elite breeds a world class rating 🧐
Crestwood Eq.
06:33:57 Ivy / poison ivy
mk! lemme type them up
Ivory Coast
06:31:41 
Ivy
Me ^^
Niallator Acres
06:31:21 Ivy - Niallator side
i've almost finished my lyrics if anyone would care to listen
Glacier Bay Cove
06:29:16 Arctic Katz
Nice mare, Gemstone
Nightingales Ridge
06:28:26 Issy
Ooo Gemstone so beautiful!
Ivory Coast
06:27:04 
Only kept this girl cause of her color -HEE Click-
Galloping_Gems
06:26:06 Gemstone
-HEE Click-
Woahhhhh his eyes are heterochromatic. I’ve never seen that in this game before
Glacier Bay Cove
06:24:04 Arctic Katz
As I rate them
Glacier Bay Cove
06:21:55 Arctic Katz
Not sure which of my three breeds will be nice to me
Wolf Dancer
06:21:13 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Eyrie
Nice! They were jerks to me >.>
Eyrie of the Stars
06:10:51 Eyrie
KNNs were pretty nice to me this party
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
FireStallionStables
06:06:22 FSS/Fire
then again this probably one of the best examples on why all of my awards are breeding awards
-HEE Click-
Gem Queens Estate
06:05:25 Snow❆Gem
OK, I'm gotta go for now. Enjoy the pretty boy!

-HEE Click-
FireStallionStables
06:04:25 FSS/Fire
i agree with the pretty part
Gem Queens Estate
06:00:08 Snow❆Gem
OK! I might be into the email I wanted to get into in the first place! O.o
Glacier Bay Cove
05:59:25 Arctic Katz
Wonderful KNN horses

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


 Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


 Sagamore Farms
 
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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


 Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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