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Galloping_Gems
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Straw thread for 193:
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Dash and Duchess
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Desperately seeking Tesoro straw!!
Port Royal Equines
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Port Royal Equines
01:59:07 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
Iso 50pk rerolls.

Dozens of Lvl 6+ Geldings for 4k!

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Bravery mares, Geldings, and more at auction. 1k start.

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Freezer cleanout! These straws need to go. All discounted. Ablb retirees included.

I am also taking embryo offers on all of my EWW+ girls. PM if interested. :)
Epona
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Selling upgrades 200k for 3 month pm me
Abalone Stables
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Looking for a upgrade
Tao
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EPE mare 5k

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EEE SH 2. year old 5k

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Exo-K
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EEE SH 2 year old for sale 10k, willing to negotiate price just PM me

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Galloping_Gems
02:59:34 Gemstone
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Horses for sale
Paradise Stables
02:54:32 Ariel / Tara
1. Broods for 193:
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2. #1 PONLB up for stud:
-HEE Click-

Straw thread for 193:
-HEE Click-

3. Check out my sales barn:
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
02:12:39 T1 Artist, W+ seller
Desperately seeking Tesoro straw!!
Port Royal Equines
02:00:28 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Forgot the link - Geldings.
Port Royal Equines
01:59:07 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
Iso 50pk rerolls.

Dozens of Lvl 6+ Geldings for 4k!

-HEE Click-
Bravery mares, Geldings, and more at auction. 1k start.

-HEE Click-
Freezer cleanout! These straws need to go. All discounted. Ablb retirees included.

I am also taking embryo offers on all of my EWW+ girls. PM if interested. :)
Epona
01:31:04 Mill$sen
Selling upgrades 200k for 3 month pm me
Abalone Stables
01:28:15 Elite in all Breeds
Looking for a upgrade
Tao
01:25:06 
EPE mare 5k

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Exo-M
01:23:38 EM
EEE SH 2. year old 5k

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Exo-K
01:20:01 Exo/EK
EEE SH 2 year old for sale 10k, willing to negotiate price just PM me

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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