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Angels angels
09:12:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
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Which one do we like better?
Glacier Bay Cove
08:56:31 Arctic Katz
That's how it is most of the time, Angels
Angels angels
08:29:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Chat has been kind of dead today lol
Glacier Bay Cove
08:22:36 Arctic Katz
Can't wait to see what you end up drawing, Sunni
Sunni
08:10:53 Sunni bunny
I'll be back on later,
I might make myself draw.
Sunni
08:07:42 Sunni bunny
I also need to draw some custom art for my own WWW stallion.
Sunni
08:07:10 Sunni bunny
I am honestly not sure, I got to finish the background to a requested art peace.
I thought about drawing somethings that reflects my high anxiety right now.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:00:26 Arctic Katz
What are you thinking about drawing, Sunni
Sunni
07:37:23 Sunni bunny
Nice cove, I need to sit down and draw.
I just haven't felt right.
Glacier Bay Cove
07:36:47 Arctic Katz
Just need to work on the tail, and another art project is DONE
Sunni
07:20:45 Sunni bunny
Bye Ivy, take care.
Also a few people in my family are.
Crestwood Eq.
07:19:58 Ivy / poison ivy
Ta Ta my loves!
Sunni
07:19:57 Sunni bunny
Ivy, it's okay I know you didn't mean it that way, everyone has their reasons.
XD
Crestwood Eq.
07:19:52 Ivy / poison ivy
I must go now
Crestwood Eq.
07:19:45 Ivy / poison ivy
Sunni

Some of the world's smartest people have autism. I probably have some. Just not medically diagnosed.
Sunni
07:18:06 Sunni bunny
But he loves kids,
I believe he has autism.
He can't work to my knowledge but he is extremely smart.
Crestwood Eq.
07:17:20 Ivy / poison ivy
ZEZ

I didn't mean it like that.
Sunni
07:17:14 Sunni bunny
Her other son, isn't even related to my dad. Dad really did some bad things to him growing up.
And she didn't treat him no better.
I still see him as a bother even tho we aren't related.
Crestwood Eq.
07:17:03 Ivy / poison ivy
sunni

poor man
ZequineZ
07:16:51 ZEZ - ZZ
Ivy, As someone who will never have childeren, assuming someone ‘has something against’ them is probably not something best said out loud

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Angels angels
09:12:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Which one do we like better?
Glacier Bay Cove
08:56:31 Arctic Katz
That's how it is most of the time, Angels
Angels angels
08:29:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Chat has been kind of dead today lol
Glacier Bay Cove
08:22:36 Arctic Katz
Can't wait to see what you end up drawing, Sunni
Sunni
08:10:53 Sunni bunny
I'll be back on later,
I might make myself draw.
Sunni
08:07:42 Sunni bunny
I also need to draw some custom art for my own WWW stallion.
Sunni
08:07:10 Sunni bunny
I am honestly not sure, I got to finish the background to a requested art peace.
I thought about drawing somethings that reflects my high anxiety right now.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:00:26 Arctic Katz
What are you thinking about drawing, Sunni
Sunni
07:37:23 Sunni bunny
Nice cove, I need to sit down and draw.
I just haven't felt right.
Glacier Bay Cove
07:36:47 Arctic Katz
Just need to work on the tail, and another art project is DONE
Sunni
07:20:45 Sunni bunny
Bye Ivy, take care.
Also a few people in my family are.
Crestwood Eq.
07:19:58 Ivy / poison ivy
Ta Ta my loves!
Sunni
07:19:57 Sunni bunny
Ivy, it's okay I know you didn't mean it that way, everyone has their reasons.
XD
Crestwood Eq.
07:19:52 Ivy / poison ivy
I must go now
Crestwood Eq.
07:19:45 Ivy / poison ivy
Sunni

Some of the world's smartest people have autism. I probably have some. Just not medically diagnosed.
Sunni
07:18:06 Sunni bunny
But he loves kids,
I believe he has autism.
He can't work to my knowledge but he is extremely smart.
Crestwood Eq.
07:17:20 Ivy / poison ivy
ZEZ

I didn't mean it like that.
Sunni
07:17:14 Sunni bunny
Her other son, isn't even related to my dad. Dad really did some bad things to him growing up.
And she didn't treat him no better.
I still see him as a bother even tho we aren't related.
Crestwood Eq.
07:17:03 Ivy / poison ivy
sunni

poor man
ZequineZ
07:16:51 ZEZ - ZZ
Ivy, As someone who will never have childeren, assuming someone ‘has something against’ them is probably not something best said out loud

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Art criticism January 13, 2024 02:57 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Please offer me advice! Working on ibis paint with an iPad and stylus
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Edited at January 13, 2024 02:59 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 02:55 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Still looking for advice + pricing suggestions. Thank you :)
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:07 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Doubt post sorry!

Edited at January 16, 2024 03:30 PM by Enoki Valley
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:16 PM


Amethyst Ranch
 
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I'd definitely say you could be in low tier 1 :) The hair in piece 1 and 3 is amazing <3
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:22 PM


The Unknown
 
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The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.

Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:24 PM


Sweetwater Creek
 
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I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:31 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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The Unknown said:

The only thing I notice that stands out to me is that your shadow placement is off. In the first piece the shadow should be more behind/to the right of the horse instead of straight on to the viewer because the light source is to the left of the horse. In your second piece (the lavender one) the shadow should be underneath the horse as I don't see a clear light source in the background. If you'd like I can draw a quick thing on the first one to show you how I find out where to place my shadows.

Definitely agree with T1. It looks like you repaint your horses entirely for prep instead of smudging, so I'd start at 150k for a horse avatar and go from there.



I repaint the whole horse depending if I like the face or not lol.
I would love shadow advice - I can never place them right I think I just don't understand light xD
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:32 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Sweetwater Creek said:
I would personally pay 80-120k for your art if you can keep the quality of the first 3 examples. Also try adding more detail by defining muscles with light/dark lines. Hope this helps, love your work!


Awesome thanks a million! I really neglect the bodies of my horses which is totally my bad
Art criticism January 16, 2024 03:38 PM


Zomb
 
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I personally would say high T2. I love the feel of them! But as stated above, the shadowing feels off for me. I like the lighting on the horse, some soft shadows would define them even more (if you haven't already). Along side the lack of definition in the body with muscles etc etc. but that's easily fixable with a chalk pen + a soft light layer (one for light another for shadows). I think if you could work on those two (happy to help where I can) you definitely would be T1 without a doubt :)
Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:21 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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Really interested for critique and thought on this:

Based on this forum I tried to focus on muscling through the body. I hope I've improved a bit.

Edited at June 2, 2024 07:37 AM by Enoki Valley

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