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Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:05 Arctic Katz
As soon as spring arrives, I am ready to plant hay in my pastures
Glacier Bay Cove
10:03:00 Arctic Katz
In the hidden falls
Glacier Bay Cove
10:02:49 Arctic Katz
Horse cookie Falls
Glacier Bay Cove
10:01:43 Arctic Katz
Never thought of recording myself during a sneeze
Bluebonnet Estates
09:58:31 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Sunni
That's way accurate to me when I have a sneeze that doesn't want to come out 😭
Sunni
09:47:37 Sunni bunny
She made that face in a video so I screenshot it.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:44:50 Arctic Katz
Okay just voted for the artists in the rumble
Swirly's stable
09:44:46 Swirly
Sunni
That looks like me when I'm confused lmao
Sunni
09:40:31 Sunni bunny
She just jumped down to lay on me, she likes to strangle me in my sleep by standing on my neck.
Sunni
09:39:18 Sunni bunny
-Click-

Am not sure if she's offended shocked mad confused or all the above.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:39:07 Arctic Katz
Looking forward to more yummy trivia games
Sunni
09:38:15 Sunni bunny
I set that horse free it was a EEP.
Angels angels
09:38:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Got a week 4 tomorrow and a week 5 I sm semi nervous about
SCF Sporting Chance
09:33:20 SCF/Gibbs
There is one hour left to vote for your favorite art pieces in The Artist's Rumble SEMI FINALS! Please vote here -HEE Click- as all the artists have worked very hard on these pieces and deserve the votes!
Angels angels
09:31:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sunni
Yeah it depends on their ratings. That is for EEE+
Swirly's stable
09:30:58 Swirly
Sunni
What were they rated?
Sunni
09:30:26 Sunni bunny
Angel I've had a few wild horse in different stats never go up. One was week 8 with 2 bars.
Sunni
09:29:27 Sunni bunny
Meadow I think it looks good
Swirly's stable
09:28:36 Swirly
Does anyone know how much Silver Coin's LC/straws cost?
Angels angels
09:28:01 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Meadow
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Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:05 Arctic Katz
As soon as spring arrives, I am ready to plant hay in my pastures
Glacier Bay Cove
10:03:00 Arctic Katz
In the hidden falls
Glacier Bay Cove
10:02:49 Arctic Katz
Horse cookie Falls
Glacier Bay Cove
10:01:43 Arctic Katz
Never thought of recording myself during a sneeze
Bluebonnet Estates
09:58:31 Blue ~ Poodle Rat
Sunni
That's way accurate to me when I have a sneeze that doesn't want to come out 😭
Sunni
09:47:37 Sunni bunny
She made that face in a video so I screenshot it.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:44:50 Arctic Katz
Okay just voted for the artists in the rumble
Swirly's stable
09:44:46 Swirly
Sunni
That looks like me when I'm confused lmao
Sunni
09:40:31 Sunni bunny
She just jumped down to lay on me, she likes to strangle me in my sleep by standing on my neck.
Sunni
09:39:18 Sunni bunny
-Click-

Am not sure if she's offended shocked mad confused or all the above.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:39:07 Arctic Katz
Looking forward to more yummy trivia games
Sunni
09:38:15 Sunni bunny
I set that horse free it was a EEP.
Angels angels
09:38:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Got a week 4 tomorrow and a week 5 I sm semi nervous about
SCF Sporting Chance
09:33:20 SCF/Gibbs
There is one hour left to vote for your favorite art pieces in The Artist's Rumble SEMI FINALS! Please vote here -HEE Click- as all the artists have worked very hard on these pieces and deserve the votes!
Angels angels
09:31:25 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sunni
Yeah it depends on their ratings. That is for EEE+
Swirly's stable
09:30:58 Swirly
Sunni
What were they rated?
Sunni
09:30:26 Sunni bunny
Angel I've had a few wild horse in different stats never go up. One was week 8 with 2 bars.
Sunni
09:29:27 Sunni bunny
Meadow I think it looks good
Swirly's stable
09:28:36 Swirly
Does anyone know how much Silver Coin's LC/straws cost?
Angels angels
09:28:01 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Meadow
Needs Hrt

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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