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Sport Pony Island
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Bioshock Manor
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Sport Pony Island
10:03:45 
Where is the pedigree
Bioshock Manor
10:02:11 Storm
New thing out today. Go to pedigree and it tells you more
Sport Pony Island
09:59:58 
What is COI?
Honey
09:57:12 
RIP pretty girl -HEE Click- </3
Glacier Bay Cove
09:55:02 Arctic Katz
Big cat eyes from Finley
Hummingbird Meadows
09:48:48 Bird
@Snitch, it was his 2nd bath with me and he did much better than the 1st
Snitches' Stitches
09:44:23 Snitch
Oh no Finley, not the wet rat tail 😂Poor boy lol
Hummingbird Meadows
09:41:54 Bird
Finley got a bath tonight.
-Click-
MC Ace
09:29:00 McFossil
Em same. Look at this production. I was ready to off her and she flat out said W where?
-HEE Click-
Pony Loving Pons
09:28:58 Peep/sam
She walks so good, but shes so tiny lol
Pony Loving Pons
09:23:53 Peep/sam
A little disappointed from my goat, but doing ok
Insignia Elites
09:22:10 Em
I need to go through my horses but Im so subjective xD
Mythological
09:09:18 Crowley
Surviving. You?
Pony Loving Pons
09:02:10 Peep/sam
How are you?
Mythological
08:46:43 Crowley
Yes, I still exist...
Hummingbird Meadows
08:46:11 Bird
Hmm... I think I need to find Finley a different harness.
Pony Loving Pons
08:45:05 Peep/sam
Myth!
Mythological
08:34:07 Crowley
Hey Sam

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Sport Pony Island
10:05:57 
Thanks
Bioshock Manor
10:04:11 Storm
On the horse page
Sport Pony Island
10:03:45 
Where is the pedigree
Bioshock Manor
10:02:11 Storm
New thing out today. Go to pedigree and it tells you more
Sport Pony Island
09:59:58 
What is COI?
Honey
09:57:12 
RIP pretty girl -HEE Click- </3
Glacier Bay Cove
09:55:02 Arctic Katz
Big cat eyes from Finley
Hummingbird Meadows
09:48:48 Bird
@Snitch, it was his 2nd bath with me and he did much better than the 1st
Snitches' Stitches
09:44:23 Snitch
Oh no Finley, not the wet rat tail 😂Poor boy lol
Hummingbird Meadows
09:41:54 Bird
Finley got a bath tonight.
-Click-
MC Ace
09:29:00 McFossil
Em same. Look at this production. I was ready to off her and she flat out said W where?
-HEE Click-
Pony Loving Pons
09:28:58 Peep/sam
She walks so good, but shes so tiny lol
Pony Loving Pons
09:23:53 Peep/sam
A little disappointed from my goat, but doing ok
Insignia Elites
09:22:10 Em
I need to go through my horses but Im so subjective xD
Mythological
09:09:18 Crowley
Surviving. You?
Pony Loving Pons
09:02:10 Peep/sam
How are you?
Mythological
08:46:43 Crowley
Yes, I still exist...
Hummingbird Meadows
08:46:11 Bird
Hmm... I think I need to find Finley a different harness.
Pony Loving Pons
08:45:05 Peep/sam
Myth!
Mythological
08:34:07 Crowley
Hey Sam

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

Thanks

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