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Lunar Wilds
02:36:39 Lux - AAs
I haven’t been keeping track of training because of life and now I’m just blind matching .-. Haha
Ranch Lands Training
02:36:35 Lilly/PON Addict
Matching, I've got two matches and I need to pick one
-HEE Click- or -HEE Click-
Angels angels
02:35:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
With what lilly lol
Ranch Lands Training
02:35:27 Lilly/PON Addict
Angel, Help me!
Ellsworths Eden
02:25:58 
My roommate already matched my ponies! Sorry, Angel!
Fantasy Horses
02:25:28 Fantasy | Fanta
lol Angel you should make a forum and just have people sign up to get match help from you
Angels angels
02:25:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Everyone pm me xD
Willow Ridge
02:25:04 Lillie Pt 3
dont say that Angel I might have a job for you..
Prismatic
02:24:45 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Angel
I'd take you up on that...
Angels angels
02:21:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I looove matching lol and all my mares are matched so I am happy to help anyone that needs it
Fantasy Horses
02:21:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
Haha thank you lol
PMing you :P
Willow Ridge
02:21:09 Lillie Pt 3
fantasy
Agreed-_-
Angels angels
02:20:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fantasy
I am always here to help if you need it lol
Fantasy Horses
02:20:08 Fantasy | Fanta
Arg planning matches for RO is really the worst, especially with a bunch of young mares >.<
Sweet Valley
02:19:34 Anna/Jewel
Cool!
Pinewood Equestrain
02:19:32 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Go to forums and you can see mine :)
Pinewood Equestrain
02:19:15 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Anna,
I just started doing art for HEE
Willow Ridge
02:18:51 Lillie Pt 3
-HEE Click-
I got a good batch but this girl was gorgeous and just had to have an E instead of a W😔
Sweet Valley
02:18:13 Anna/Jewel
DO you have an art shop on HEE?
Sweet Valley
02:17:48 Anna/Jewel
WOw you are pretty good, Pine!

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Lunar Wilds
02:36:39 Lux - AAs
I haven’t been keeping track of training because of life and now I’m just blind matching .-. Haha
Ranch Lands Training
02:36:35 Lilly/PON Addict
Matching, I've got two matches and I need to pick one
-HEE Click- or -HEE Click-
Angels angels
02:35:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
With what lilly lol
Ranch Lands Training
02:35:27 Lilly/PON Addict
Angel, Help me!
Ellsworths Eden
02:25:58 
My roommate already matched my ponies! Sorry, Angel!
Fantasy Horses
02:25:28 Fantasy | Fanta
lol Angel you should make a forum and just have people sign up to get match help from you
Angels angels
02:25:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Everyone pm me xD
Willow Ridge
02:25:04 Lillie Pt 3
dont say that Angel I might have a job for you..
Prismatic
02:24:45 Prism/Chrome/Rainy
Angel
I'd take you up on that...
Angels angels
02:21:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I looove matching lol and all my mares are matched so I am happy to help anyone that needs it
Fantasy Horses
02:21:17 Fantasy | Fanta
Angel
Haha thank you lol
PMing you :P
Willow Ridge
02:21:09 Lillie Pt 3
fantasy
Agreed-_-
Angels angels
02:20:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Fantasy
I am always here to help if you need it lol
Fantasy Horses
02:20:08 Fantasy | Fanta
Arg planning matches for RO is really the worst, especially with a bunch of young mares >.<
Sweet Valley
02:19:34 Anna/Jewel
Cool!
Pinewood Equestrain
02:19:32 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Go to forums and you can see mine :)
Pinewood Equestrain
02:19:15 Pine(Also Sunset+Oak
Anna,
I just started doing art for HEE
Willow Ridge
02:18:51 Lillie Pt 3
-HEE Click-
I got a good batch but this girl was gorgeous and just had to have an E instead of a W😔
Sweet Valley
02:18:13 Anna/Jewel
DO you have an art shop on HEE?
Sweet Valley
02:17:48 Anna/Jewel
WOw you are pretty good, Pine!

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Newbie Critique October 13, 2024 04:32 PM


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This is the first piece I have ever done and was wondering if some more experienced artists could offer some tips and pointers? It would be really helpful to hear what people like and then what they think can be improved (a lot can I know lol). I think because so much needs improving, I'm a bit lost on where to start!
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 04:20 PM


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I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
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1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
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Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 05:18 PM


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Thank you so much! This is really helpful and gives me some clear direction
:D

Sagebrush said:
I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
.
1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
.
Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.



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